I need a prove reader?

[Sir.Flutter Hooves 2,953]

Hello fellow authors!

 

I am currently writing a fan fiction, and I would like to improve on it. So, I need someone to read said fanfiction and tell me what you like and not like about it, and grammatical errors, and anyway I can improve my writing.

 

 

Here is my story titled Revenge of a Fallen Student: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/92907/revenge-of-a-fallen-student

 

 

Please don't rip this off, I worked really hard on this!

 

Thanks so much!

 

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[Night Shine 772]

Absolutely! I'll take a look, and then get back to you as soon as I read it with a very long review.

 

If you want a reference for a fic I've written, check out the link in my signature.

 

 

EDIT: Finished reviewing chapters 1 and 2. I'm out of time for now, but if you want me to review any other chapters, shoot me a PM later. Here's my take on the first two chapters of your fic.

 

Have a nice night! Or, day, as it were

Edited March 28, 2013 by Night Shine

[Sir.Flutter Hooves 2,953]

Absolutely! I'll take a look, and then get back to you as soon as I read it with a very long review.

 

If you want a reference for a fic I've written, check out the link in my signature.

 

 

EDIT: Finished reviewing chapters 1 and 2. I'm out of time for now, but if you want me to review any other chapters, shoot me a PM later. Here's my take on the first two chapters of your fic.

 

Have a nice night! Or, day, as it were

Well thank you so much for your kind words and your criticism.

 

I will fix the grammatical errors tomorrow, and btw Sunset is not suppose to be my OC. She is suppose to be the upcoming pony that onthe back of the box says she is One of Celestia's students.

 

Here's the toy:

 

 

 

Thanks again,

 

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