pony Oc's in ponyville (critique welcomed <3)

[kiwitwist 21]

well i had a bundle of pony charecters i draw and i tried drawing them all in one picture

in case any pony is curious here is the list in order from

left to right

name: Kai

cutie mark/talent: gaming

 

name: Stitch Kit

cutie mark/talent: making stuffed cats

 

name: Sea Foam

cutie mark/talent: crafting things from sea foam

 

name: Game boy

cutie mark/talent: playing game boy games

 

name: Owl

cutie mark/talent: owlstrology

 

name: kiwi twist

cutie mark/talent: blending drinks from sweet fruits

 

name: Digital Spectrum

cutie mark/talent: composing colorful images on computer tablet

Pet:Maya the blue and gold macaw

 

name: Poe

cutie mark/talent:none

 

name: Sketch pad

cutie mark/talent: traditional artist

 

name: K9

cutie mark/talent: summoning dark spirits

 

name:(this one is my friend drift's and i actually forgot the name)

cutie mark/talent: raving

 

name: Background Beats(aka B-B34TS)

cutie mark/talent: orchestrating music that fits in as background music

 

i think i have more OC's i just simply forgot them when i drew this

some of the things i tried in this particular piece is make it look as close to the style of the show i possibly could as well as make closer objects have thicker lines than the ones farther away.

Critique is much appreciated

 

P.S. I DID NOT DRAW THE BACKGROUND I FOUND IT ON GOOGLE

[Urkelbot 63]

I dig your style, Interesting character designs, and unique presentation They all appear very animated, and kinetic as well, if that makes any sense. I like the hoodie pony and the raver pony /)

[Rainbow Skywalker 642]

This is actually pretty good.  Each of the characters themselves seem to fit in with the background and overarching theme, and they all are so chipper.  My favorite character out of all of these has to be Game Boy though, his story seems rather interesting.

[WingMcCallister 368]

I really like this. You did a great job capturing the characters in an action. It looks like a fun scene to be in with some unique ponies. Nice work.

[kiwitwist 21]

It really warms my heart to see ponys enjoy this for something I did unintentionally <3 (makeing the ponys look all actiony)