Yet another drawing of my OC.

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Drew him in Paint. He actually ended up looking pretty good. At least, I think so.

What about y'all? What do y'all think about him? Does he look okay?

 

Edited May 13, 2013 by ToxicNinja78

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Edited August 10, 2020 by ____

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Top OC, you should put yourself up for requests!

I especially like the goggles, they really add to the steampunk feel of the drawing.

Keep up the good work!

AP

Well thanks! Glad you liked it.

But NO. Just HELL NO. I can't do requests. I've tried before, and some of them, I couldn't figure out how to draw them, and I felt like an asshole for not finishing them. Not doing that again.

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Edited August 10, 2020 by ____

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You used paint? Color me impressed I could never stand that program! I must say that I love your design Toxic, whenever I put clothing on my characters it just looks out of place or unnatural. Your selection though fits naturally with your character and is a great accommodation to Skyline. Heck, even without the clothing Skyline would still look great!

 

There is one little thing that looks out of place for Skyline though, something seems off around where his belly meets his flank. If I were to look at him sideways, it'd appear as though if the front left of his flank was non existent and was instead an extension of his belly. If that were the case, he wouldn't be able to trot where he pleased! 

 

If I were to make a suggestion, just have the end of where his belly meets his flank curl upward. Here's an image in case something didn't make sense or you want a visual aid instead. I've included a reference image within it just in case. 

 

 

 

 

Great job my friend, keep up the good work! 

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You used paint? Color me impressed I could never stand that program! I must say that I love your design Toxic, whenever I put clothing on my characters it just looks out of place or unnatural. Your selection though fits naturally with your character and is a great accommodation to Skyline. Heck, even without the clothing Skyline would still look great!

 

There is one little thing that looks out of place for Skyline though, something seems off around where his belly meets his flank. If I were to look at him sideways, it'd appear as though if the front left of his flank was non existent and was instead an extension of his belly. If that were the case, he wouldn't be able to trot where he pleased! 

 

If I were to make a suggestion, just have the end of where his belly meets his flank curl upward. Here's an image in case something didn't make sense or you want a visual aid instead. I've included a reference image within it just in case. 

 

 

 

 

Great job my friend, keep up the good work! 

Well thank you!

And what you said about his flank, I THINK I fixed it, but I'm not sure.

Does it look better?

Also, thanks for pointing that out, apparently there were some other things I needed to fix. Leg looked a little funny, and I usually draw part of the shirt sticking out from under the vest.

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Aye, that does look better Toxic. You could have it curl higher but I say just toy around with it and go with what feels right to you. If I had one last suggestion, I'd have to say move onto the next illustration and just take note of what accident(s) you encountered here. I used to toil on a single image for a long while and found that while I did learn of my mistakes, I didn't learn as much as I did when I just went and did a whole new image. If the same issue pops up again, don't fret for it'll disappear soon enough as you gain experience. 

 

Keep drawing my friend, I implore you!