Synapse OC *might re-do*

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Name:Synapse

 

age:18

 

Hair:Brown

 

Pelt:golden-brown

 

Likes:working, her job as a sub. teacher, engineering, and helping others

 

Dislikes: foolishness, interruptions, being voted wrong, shallow ponies

 

Description: loves working with students as a substitute teacher, enjoys working on machines, is angered when things don't work on her first try

 

Back-story (not much): Born an earth-pony in Ponyville, growing up she constantly wanted to help her parents and friends with stuff they didn't know how to use or fix, and always got unbelievable grades in school, passing almost every test, assignment, homework, etc. that was given to her. at the age of 10, she started helping out at multiple different places. and soon earned her cutie mark when she found out her special talent at engineering, blah blah blah. her back-story isn't finished.

 

Please tell me what you think  criticize from a scale from 1/10    oh and ignore the ground its not supposed to be filled in  and i always put that curve at the back of the neck because it looked wrong without it, but ill probably fix it...