Haruyou 14 May 23, 2013 Share May 23, 2013 Hello!! Some of you may recognize my username from a previous OC help thread( See http://mlpforums.com/topic/60072-oc-help/) ; Well I have come back again with an almost finished design!Ta da! It is my first time drawing a 'proper' pony. I have doodled cutsey ones out the wazoo, but this is my first FiM style attempt. Any tips to get better with that, too, please offer! I'm up for help!ALSO!! If you are feeling adventurous, I am in need of some Stallion Stylin' help! Lula's husband, Anvil Smith, is a unicorn blacksmith pony who is in need of a design! (I will try to post his cutie mark up soon...)Sorry if I am slow to respond, I am trying to surprise my husband with Halo Spartan armour... Tough to do when we live together!! Gotta hide it all when I hear him unlock the door... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thevenomous 59 May 23, 2013 Share May 23, 2013 Hey, that looks really nice! Nothing really stands out that says "I need improvement" to me though, It looks great. I would love to help you design Anvil Smith. Do you have anything in mind on how he should look, or should I just go with my gut? Oh and HOLY CRAP you must be the best wife ever to do something like that for your husband 1 Time Warp:http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/time-warp-r3205 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Haruyou 14 May 23, 2013 Author Share May 23, 2013 Hey, that looks really nice! Nothing really stands out that says "I need improvement" to me though, It looks great. I would love to help you design Anvil Smith. Do you have anything in mind on how he should look, or should I just go with my gut? Oh and HOLY CRAP you must be the best wife ever to do something like that for your husband Thanks!! I'd like to make his have a pleasing colour scheme next to Lulas. If that makes any sense... Haha!! HEY, I'm making myself one too. Just, his first. lol ... Are there Halo fans on here? 405th.com kinda is dying and it's hard to find supporters and people to cheer me on... lol! But that's off topic!! Sorry! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silverwisp the Bard 2,353 May 23, 2013 Share May 23, 2013 Lovely design you got going on here, love the jewelry. The right foreleg shouldn't bend that way at that point, the elbow sits about the height of the body's underside. There should be some of the right hindleg be visible between the left fore- and hindleg. The mane behind the horn should go over the forehead, at the moment it looks like the left part of her head is bald The eyes need some looking at (eyelashes, outlines, making sure irises and pupils are concentric...) Maybe change the coat colour a bit, she looks a bit shaven atm. My Art Thread, updated (almost) daily Tomorrow will take us away, far from home No one will ever know our names But the bard songs will remain. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Haruyou 14 May 23, 2013 Author Share May 23, 2013 Lovely design you got going on here, love the jewelry. The right foreleg shouldn't bend that way at that point, the elbow sits about the height of the body's underside. There should be some of the right hindleg be visible between the left fore- and hindleg. The mane behind the horn should go over the forehead, at the moment it looks like the left part of her head is bald The eyes need some looking at (eyelashes, outlines, making sure irises and pupils are concentric...) Maybe change the coat colour a bit, she looks a bit shaven atm. Thank you. Yes, I will be editing her anatomy! I was just gung-ho about coming to a general like of her design. Her mane, I was kind of caught with. I was making it like Setsuna's hair from Negima!... I thought it was cute, but maybe I can edit it a bit to show theres more of a side bang on that side then? Aw, the coat colour I really like... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FruitRiver 355 May 25, 2013 Share May 25, 2013 Aw, the coat colour I really like... That color dosent look shaven to me, a bit lighter would but how it is now is fine IMO. The only thing I noticed from looking at it was the back leg. This is looking really, really good! I love the color scheme. She reminds me of a japanese garden. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Haruyou 14 May 26, 2013 Author Share May 26, 2013 That color dosent look shaven to me, a bit lighter would but how it is now is fine IMO. The only thing I noticed from looking at it was the back leg. This is looking really, really good! I love the color scheme. She reminds me of a japanese garden. Oops, haha. I forgot to draw the back part of the back leg... Thank you!! I appreciate the kind words! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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