Edited Drawings

[dedacct6 2,591]

so apparently i did the anatomy wrong and  constantly got comments saying my ponies where "disproportionate"  so i re-did them, hopefully their better *Megamare* 
 

 

 

 

 

well there you go guys, hopefully ill get a better outcome...reply, share, and scale from 1/10 

Edited May 23, 2013 by PelateOvercast

[Friendship_Cannon 1,677]

Oh, I think this is better than the first ones, nice! ;D

I´d give it a 8,5/10, it´s really nice work, good positioning as well as shading, I like it!

And don´t worry too much about critical comments, all of them are mostly meant as constructive criticism, and you shouldn´t feel bad about it.

[dedacct6 2,591]

Oh, I think this is better than the first ones, nice! ;D

I´d give it a 8,5/10, it´s really nice work, good positioning as well as shading, I like it!

And don´t worry too much about critical comments, all of them are mostly meant as constructive criticism, and you shouldn´t feel bad about it.

i dont take criticism hard, i just like to use the criticism and see if i can do better, to give the critique a better drawing to impress them.

[dedacct6 2,591]

You are still disproportionate, but I can see some improvements.

1st drawing:

Chest, wings, and mane. All a bit off. But you are definatly showing some improvement here.The head is nearing the proper size.

2nd drawing:

The head isn't right at all. Like I said, pony anatomy chart. The back hind leg is a bit rounded, too.

3rd drawing:

All just a little out of proportion. The front hoof really needs to be fixed.

4th drawing:

Getting better, although Derpy's hooves and wings don't look too good.

I really do like your shading, though. Overall it's a 5/10.

you've gotta be bucking shitting me, fine ill edit them AGAIN!!!!!!!!!! possibly ruining them but whatever, apparently you're the only one whose giving me these bad ratings. I'm not mad but this is getting ridiculous... 

Edited May 23, 2013 by PelateOvercast

[dedacct6 2,591]

Look.

You don't have to edit them if you don't want to. I'm just trying to help you reach a more show like image.

It doesn't have to be a big deal. I'm just serving you the truth, and pointing out your flaws to help you become better.

forget i said that, i'm going to Try to do better, i think ill just re make the second one, i just started using an art style like where their in different poses, I'm better when I'm doing simple bases, but poses are still something I'm working on, soon to be better, I'll try to find a way to make it all look better, or something...