Sanic Screwdriver 345 May 26, 2013 Share May 26, 2013 Hi everypony! I finished chapter one of my story today. It's short but I'm hoping to make the other chapters longer. Here's the description: "When the Flim Flam brothers come back and decide to take the apple family business to the next level, Applejack becomes the new CEO. Unfortunately she becomes mad with power and greedy. Will she ever be the same good mare she used to be?" Here's the link: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/98390/the-apple-family-business Any feedback or creative criticism will be greatly appreciated! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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