Is this a good fanfic idea?

[Harmony Spark 265]

Here is a new fanfic idea based on my own creations mixing in with MLP:FIM. It's about the ponies meet a empire's population of friendly colourful wolves called the Guardians, who have lost their home to migrating dragons and searched for a new home but since they are predators, many animals are too afraid to help them, even though the Guardians are kind, caring and never harm anyone innocent. They are also the rivals to the Timberwolves. So the ponies allow the Guardians to stay in Equestria until the mane 6 find a place for them. The Guardians and the Ponies both get along rather well and form a strong friendship. However, their carnivorous appetite forms a wedge between them. The wolves explain that they are omnivores (thought that this will be a twist) so they do eat other things but when a Guardian wolf doesn't have meat for too long, they become ravenous and has an eating frenzy. This extremely worries the ponies that the wolves are already eating the livestock of Sweet Apple Acres and all the other farms of Equestria. But fortunately, Princess Harmony Star (thats me lol) finds a way to settle this.

 

She magically replants a large mountainous desert on the east side of Equestria into a natural realm as the Guardians new home, called Caniselia, along with the help of Twilight and the others. The ponies and Guardians both sign a proclamation that they both live together in harmony and both have to help each other survive by the ponies giving meat to the Guardians while the Guardians promise never eat or harm the ponies. (They can't eat the animals in Caniselia cos most Guardians dont want to hurt innocent creatures) The Guardians and ponies also have the right to meet each other as many times they want.

 

The friendship lesson for this fanfic is that sometimes, we all have to make sacrifices in life by giving our most precious possession to someone else because they need it more than you do.

 

That's it! Just to let u all know, this is a work in progress, so I want to ask is this a good fanfic? If u think it needs to be improved, I'm open to suggestions