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Cool story but do you even know that alicorns get less love because they are overpowered? 

 

-sigh- my oc is a alicorn if someone will sgree to make it... 

 

EHHHDITTT: OMG I AM A MUFFIN and its because of this thing thanks dragon! 

 

now to find a sig...

Edited July 7, 2013 by Lightning Sketch

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                                                                     (Chapter 7: This Strange World..)

                                                                      (Place: Old Realm Time: Known)

Fred: I feel so warm... All i see is darkness, where am i? Am i dead.. But if i died, would i be cold? *Sobs* Fluttershy.. My mother Fire Shimmer.. I wonder how they're all doing. I hope they are alright..

I'll miss Buttershy and Fluttershy the most..  I'm so tired.. Why am i so tired.. *Closes eyes*

 

Voice: Hello?

 

Fred: Whats that voice.. *Opens eyes* W-who are you!?! *Jumps back*

 

Dude: Oh sorry, was taking a walk in the park. *Stares at closely* .. A-

 

Fred: W-whats wrong? *Looks at self* Wheres my pony body!?!

 

Dude: Pony body?  Wait.. Y-you're that kid!

 

Fred: *Looks at with a empty mind* What k-

 

Dude: *Grabs arm*

 

Fred: Hey! *Slips off* 

 

Dude: I need to take you to the police station!

 

Fred: P-police station?  *Shakes head and runs off*

 

Dude: W-wait up!

 

Fred: *Runs behind building* What was up with that guy.. I can't trust anypony in this realm.. I don't remember anything here, *Sighs* But i do like my new clothes.. *Looks at self* Black jeans,

Red and black striped hoodie.. I likey! *Walks into pole*

 

Girl: Whos he? *Looks at closely* He must be new around here! I should go greet him! 

 

Fred: *Rubs off face* I still need to get used to walkin- *Feels something poke back* What the.. *Looks back* Oh, hi?

 

Girl: *Smiles*

 

Fred: W-why are your eyes.. Like eh... All woobly?

 

Girl: *Looks down* Oh sorry, i can't help them from doing that! *Trips over bush*

 

Fred: *Catches* You need to watch out where your going. *Smiles* My names Dragon- Fred. *Grins*

 

Girl: Dragon? Why did you cut it off from there? *Eyes goes woobly*

 

Fred: Heh, was my nickname..

 

Girl: *Shakes hand* My names Derpy!

 

Fred: Oh hello Derpy? N-nice name..? 

 

Derpy: *Keeps on shaking hand*

 

Fred: *Tries to slip hand out* Y-you're kinda killing my hand here..

 

Derpy: *Stops* Oh sorry!

 

Fred: *Rubs arm* Grah, feels like i just did over 50 pushups with this arm.. *Moves it around*

 

Derpy: *Pulls out muffin*

 

Fred: *Stares at* What the? W-why do you have a muffin in your hoodie pocket?

 

Derpy: Oh just keeping it around, *Kisses it* Yes i do! I wuv you and you wuv me!

 

Fred: *Eyes open wide* E-eh.. Eeyeaah... I think i'll be g-

 

Derpy: I need to show you around town! *Pulls arm*

 

Fred: *Gets pulled into pole*

 

Derpy: Whoops! You need to watch out where you're going! *Pulls along*

 

Fred: Mind: Why do i always get stuck in these things.. *Sighs* Derpy... D-E-R-P-Y... I swear i've head that name before... Weird, Twilight Sparkle told me about a name that sounds like it..* Sees car*

W-watch out! *Forces to stop*

 

Derpy: *Stops* Oh didn't see it coming. *Moves along*

 

Fred: Where are we going anyways..

 

Derpy: Oh to the mail office. I need to go pick up some mail! I'm a mail man.. Well woman *Smiles with derpy eyes*

 

Fred: Wait, you work at a.. N-nice? *Mind: I wonder how the customers even get it.. *Sighs* 

 

Derpy: *Heads inside*

 

Fred: *Rubs head* ... I just noticed, she has a hoodie on to.. A gray one with blonde hair.. Never seen somone with bright green eyes.. *Kicks rock* I don't like this realm, its so diffrent.. *Sighs*

I'm going to miss Fluttershy and the rest so much.. Pinkie Pie you, little.. Grr.. Got me used to talking to my self.. That party animal is always happy.. *Hears door open*

 

Derpy: *Has mail hat one and jacket* Okay! You're going to do the runs with me! *Grabs out muffin and takes a little nibble on it* 

 

Fred: Wait what do you m- 

 

Derpy: *Forces mail hat on*

 

Fred: W-wait! I didn't sign up to work as a mail ma- *Gets pulled along*

 

Derpy: *Pulls out map* Ok so.. This map is.. *Looks at closer* I can't..

 

Fred: *Facepalms* Its upside down.. *Puts it right* 

 

Derpy: Oh thank you! So we need to go.. Here.. *Pulls along*

 

Fred: Are you sure we're going the right way!?!

 

Derpy: *Stops* I'- Wait... Whoops! I just don't know what went wrong.. I swear i read this right.. *Looks closer* Oh! I blame the map! They both start with a Q!

 

Fred: L-let me see it.. *Grabs map* We're not even close to it.. *Points* 

 

Derpy: Oh, i should of get my bike! Its a 2 person one! 

 

Fred: Ugh... I hate bikes, i really.. Really hate bikes.. *Sighs* But fine. If you can drive good than i'm in. 

 

Derpy: No worries! I only crash once a day! *Smiles and pulls*

 

Fred: O-once a day!?!? *Gets thrown on bike*

 

Derpy: Don't worry! *Eyes go derpy* Time to get going! *Starts*

 

Fred: Oh please.. Please, please don't let my face get burn off..

 

Derpy: *Stops at spot* We're here!

 

Fred: *Opens one eye* We-we're alive! Thank Celestia! *Gets off*

 

Derpy: *Slides mail in* Now we need to deliver this mail to this whole neighbor hood!

 

Fred: *Sighs* I'll take the left you take the right..

 

Derpy: Souinds good to me! *Nibbles on muffin*

 

Fred: *Gets mail* Time to slide these in random houses.. *Slides one each in random doors* All done.. *Looks back* G- *Feels sharp pain* ...?... Pain? *Remembers* ... I forgot, i have ashma in this realm..

But i haven't had an attack since 2 years ago.. I just hope it doesn't curse any trouble*

 

Derpy: *Stares at weirdly* You okay?

 

Fred: *Holds chest* Oh *Grins* Yeah i'm fine.

 

Derpy: We're done for today! By the way, sorry for forcing you work as a mail man! It gets pretty lonely all alone working by your self *Smiles* 

 

Fred: *Looks up at the sky* Its getting night.. Shouldn't you be getting home?

 

Derpy: *Looks at Derpy watch* 5pm already! I gotto run! *Runs off*

 

Fred: W-wait! *Sighs* Where do i sleep tonight.. *Looks around* Crud.. *Sees cars driving by* I miss you gu- *Sees something glowing* W-what? *Sees necklice* I-i have my Cutie mark!

It looks the same like in the other realm.. *Jumps up and down* Its so red.. With orange flames.. But why is it glowing? I don't see any Changelings around..I'm glad to have my Cutie mark.. 

*Hears someone call out name* W-who was that.. *Looks back* Huh- 

 

Lady: *Hugs*

 

Fred: Who are you.. *Steps back*

 

Lady: Y-you don't remember me? *Sighs*

 

Fred: No i don't, now please let me go on.

 

Lady: Son.. You really don't..

 

Fred: *Eyes shutter open* Son?!? I only have one mom! Don't play games on me! My real morther is back in Conterlot!  

 

Lady: One mom?... But who else is your mom? You must've been brain washed..

 

Fred: B-brain washed! H-how dare you say that! 

 

Dude: *Grabs arm* Calm down! 

 

Fred: *Struggles to get lose*

 

Lady: He doesn't remember.. We haven't seen him for over almost a whole year.. 

 

Fred: *Gives up* ... I won't call you Mom.. 

 

Dude: I'm your step dad, andrew! Why don't you remember us?

 

Fred: W-what happened to my farther?!

 

Lady: Your dad died 3 weeks ago..

 

Fred: *Winces* I lost both.. N-no.. L-*Gets knocked out*

 

World realm mom:Why did you punch him!?!

 

Step dad: Its the only way to calm him down.. *Picks up and carries from arm*

 

 

                                                     (Place: Apartments..)

                                                         (Time: Unkown...)

Fred: G-ugh... *Looks around* ... T-Twilight! *Runs to* 

 

Twilight Sparkle: *Fades away*

 

Fred: T-... Why, did you fade.. *Wakes up* Twilight!-... What the.. *Feels pain on head* Oww! That bloody hurts! *Rubs feels huge bump* Ugh! Everytime i touch it, it gets more in pain! Wait..

*Looks around* I-.. I remember this place.. T-..This was my bedroom.. *Looks at T.V* Everything is coming back.. But, something is missing.. I just.. *Closes eyes* Yes... My rage in this world.. 

Its more greater then in the other realm.. Meaning, i'm going to get all of that rage back.. *Opens eyes and jumps off bed* W-why did i have to come back here- 

 

Mom: . . . Fred, where have you been...? We've been looking for you for.. Months, we thought you were dead.

 

Fred: .. I wasn't in this world.. I was in another realm. I bet you think i was brain washed.. But, i was happier in that realm.. This realm is full of, darkness.. Sadness, and hatered.. 

 

Mom: *Hugs* At least we found you.. 

 

Fred: *Slightly smiles* Yeah i guess. What time is it..

 

Mom: 6am.. School starts in 2 more hours.. I mean, will if you want to go.

 

Fred: Yeah i'll go, it'll good to meet some of my old friends.. If i even remember them. I'll go get ready..

 

Mom: After you're done you should go say hi to Andrew.. Your big brother is coming over this noon.  The whole family is.

 

Fred: ... I have a big brother.. Can't wait to meet him again, *Looks down while walking in bathroom* Its going to be hard getting used to with these.. Hands,  *Brushes teeth*

*Fred puts the same clothes on, just clean ones. Same color, same hoodie same shoes..*

 

Fred: Done, *Walks out* 

 

Andrew (Step Dad): Hi Fred, hows it been..?

 

Fred:*Stops* Oh, good. Getting used to this place again..

 

Andrew: Fred, sorry for your Farther.

 

Fred: *Winces* Yeah, had it happen before, but infront of my eyes.

 

Andrew:..? Have a nice day. *Walks out to work*

 

Fred: *Hears bus* T-theres my bus already!?! *Looks at time* 8am! 

 

Mom: Whoops, read the time wrong..

 

Fred: *Grabs stuff* Huff! *Almost falls* I-i forgot how heavy my binder is! Bloody weighs over 30 pounds.. *Waves off and runs downstairs to bus*

 

Bus driver: *Eyes shutter open* Y-you're back?

 

Fred: Don't start with this.. *Walks in*

 

Kids: *Stops talking and stares* You're alive?

 

Fred: ... *Walks by and sits down* 

 

Kids: *Talks again*

 

Fred: *Sees Necklice glowing* Don't glow now, its a bad timeing.. *Puts in hoodie*

 

Girl: Wait up! *Runs in bus* Thanks for waiting for me.. 

 

Bus driver: *Sighs* You need to be more careful.

 

Girl: Sorry! *Sits down*

 

Fred: *Feels someone sits down*

 

Girl: *Stares at* ... Fred! *Taps*

 

Fred: Grah! *Looks* Oh, Derpy.. P-please don't scare me like that.. *Feels heart*

 

Derpy: Sorry, i can't believe that i made it on the bus this time.. *Wipes head*

 

Fred: Guessing you go to the same school?

 

Derpy: Yeah, *Hides muffin*

 

Fred: Y-you still got the same muffin?!

 

Derpy: Shh.. I don't want anyone knowing i have a muffin.. *Smiles*

 

Fred: *Facepalms* *Feels bus stop*

 

Derpy: *Looks outside* Oh we're here!

 

Fred: *Grabs binder* Oh Celestia thats bloody h-

 

Derpy: *Stares at* Celestia?

 

Fred: Oh! I mean.. Heh, *Walks out*

 

Derpy: ... 

 

Fred: *Opens door* 

 

Derpy: *Walks in* Better show you around,

 

Fred: N-no thanks, i think i got this.. *Grins*

 

Derpy: Fine, i'll meet you outside than!

 

Fred: *Drops binder* ... Everything is so... Diffrent, *Picks up binder* 

 

Dude: ... *Looks over shoulder* F- L-Lucas..

 

Lucas: Don't you like my new shoes? Costed over 180$. Retro one- Yes Aflonso?

 

Alfonso: Would you believe me if i told you something?

 

Lucas: Would you believe me if i would punch you?

 

Aflonso: No,

 

Lucas: Good, now tell me.

 

Aflonso: *Points*

 

Fred: *Sighs* Where do i go again... *Walks outside*  She told me to meet her here.. *Stops*

 

Derpy: *Walks over* Ah there you are, *Pulls out muffin and nibbles on it* So, how you been liking the school? 

 

Fred: Good i guess, just nopo- I mean, no one uses mag- *Facepalms* 

 

Derpy: Speechless! *Looks over* Might wanna look behind you.

 

Fred: Why? *Looks behind* 

 

Aflonso: Fred!

 

Fred:. . . Who are you guys..?

 

Aflonso: W-what, you don't remember us?!? We we're your friends! You got kidnapped.

 

Fred: K-kidnapped? Lies..

 

Derpy: Kidnapped?.. So you're not new here..

 

Fred: I wasn't kidnapped. 

 

Lucas: Than where did you go? You've been gone for over 5 months.

 

Fred: *Sighs* Sorry guys, i just don't remember you at all.

 

Aflonso: He really doesn't, you don't even remember the time you blacked out of rage?

 

Fred: . . . No, 

 

Lucas: Heh, you blacked out on me. Sorry for kicking your .. Well yeah open.  You threw me against the wall. 

 

Fred: . . . Sorry about that than.  

 

Aflonso: Theres the bell! Can't be late for class! *Runs*

 

Lucas: .. Just hope you remember soon. *Goes to class*

 

Derpy: I better get to class, see you at lunch! *Runs to class*

 

Fred: *Get out old school map* So.. Room 32? Easy. *Walks* Wait.. *Opens door*

 

Teacher: I hope you all didn't forget your Avid Binders! Let me see your planners!

 

Fred:  *Sits down on last seat of the row*

 

Teacher: *Looks* Fred? You're alive? 

 

Fred: . . .  Why do you people keep saying that.. 

 

Teacher: . . . You've been missing for over 5 months.

 

Fred: Can you just go on?

 

Teacher: You got attitude don't you?  Before, you never talked or even talked  back. 

 

Fred: Will sorry ma'am, i've been gone over 5 months.

 

Teacher:  *Sighs* Go to step up.

 

Fred: Little too harsh for a kid who just gotten back, isn't it?

 

Teacher: *Gets raido*

 

Fred: *Sighs* I'll find my way, 

 

9th grader:  .. .   Ms, give him a little b-

 

Teacher: Get your Planners out.

 

Step up officer: So where this kid?

 

Teacher: *Points*

 

Fred: . . .

 

Step up officer: Isn't it that kid who got kidnapped?

 

Teacher: He needs  alittle time alone, and to catched up.

 

Step up officer: Lets go.

 

Fred: *Grabs binder*  

 

Step up officer:  ... Hows it been?

 

Fred: *Walks* Oh good, wishing i never came back here.

 

Step up officer: . . . What do you mean by, never comeing back here?

 

Fred: *Grins* You'll won't get it.

 

Step up officer: *Stops* Here it is...  Be sure to get everything together. *Walks off*

 

Fred: *Opens door* 

 

Step up teacher: Whos there? 

 

Fred:  *Sits down*

 

Step up teacher: Glad to see you're back.. You never gotten into trouble before.

 

Fred:  . . .

 

Step up teacher: You have been gone for over 5 months. Anyways, Get your self cought up. *Looks back at Laptop*

 

Fred:  . .. *Whispers* I'm not used to this, not even desks..  *Thinks*  Ah, *Gets out necklice* 

 

Step up teacher: *Looks over* Oh whats that?  Looks like a necklice.

 

Fred:  Yeah.

 

Step up teacher: Looks like fire, a flame. Where you got it?

 

Fred: *Thinks* I just found it i guess..

 

Step up teacher:  Nice. *Looks back at laptop*

 

Fred: *Necklice glows* W- *Looks outside*  Why is it glowing.. *Sees a Lady walk by*  . . . Weird. *Hides it in hoodie*  . . .  *Waves*

 

Step up teacher: ..? 

 

Fred:  . . what time do i leave?

 

Step up teacher:  At 9:40.

 

Fred: *Looks at clook* 9:30.. 10  more minutes... *Sighs*

 

Step up teacher:  . . . So whats been going on?

 

Fred: . ..  Getting used to this again i guess..

 

Step up teacher: Oh, Well. I hope you have a nice day. 

 

Fred: You to, *Bell rings*

 

Step up teacher: *Walks out* ... To your left, go stright down the hall. Than turn right and you'll find your 2nd period class.

 

Fred: *Grins* Thanks, *Grabs binder and walks off* Left, Stright down.. Than right... *Looks at room number* Seems right. *Opens door* 

 

Aflonso: Ah Fred! *Calls over*

 

Fred: Oh hey, 

 

Aflonso: You're still in our group, we made it when the begging of the school.

 

Other dude: *Drops binder and sits* Oh Fred, you're back! Taller than me now.. *SIghs* Oh yeah, if you don't remember its Alexies. 

 

Fred: Oh hey.. 

 

Aflonso: Edder! Come over here!

 

Edder:  . . *Slams Binder on desk*  Seems like we're not doing anything today in this class. *Looks over* Oh hi Chuckers.

 

Fred: .. Its Dragonsh-... Fred.

 

Edder: Me and this dude, named you a nickname like an year ago. Chuckers, you always chucked the boxs over the truck! 

 

Fred: Is that a game?

 

Edder: Its called Truckers 3.

 

Fred: Wheres that tall orange hair dude?

 

Aflonso: Oh, hes not in any of your classes. 

 

Fred: Oh thank Celestia...

 

Aflonso: Celestia?

 

Fred: Oh, its a character from a T.V Show,

 

Aflonso: ... You were in Japan when you got kidnapped.

 

Fred: ... Wait, where am i now?

 

Aflonso: .. New Mexico.

 

Fred: . . .  Thats why this place is like a Desert..

 

Edder: .. You changed a lot.. You don't act the same..

 

Fred: I'm going to the bathroom. *Gets out Planner and signs it* Teacher!

 

Aflonso: Oh yeah, she doesn't understand english that good.

 

Fred: . . . *Facepalms* Grrr.. *Walks over*

 

S. teacher: *Looks at*

 

Fred: *Points at planner*

 

S. teacher: Ah! *Signs it* Hurry back.

 

Fred: *Grabs binder*

 

Aflonso: You don't take your binder to the bathroom.

 

Fred: Oh, Well. Aflonso, don't tell anyone. I don't even know you. Or remember you, i can't stand this place anymore. *Sighs*

 

Aflonso: . . . DItching.. You have changed.. Fine, *Smiles* See ya around.

 

Fred: Thanks mate, *Walks out of class* . . . Is this bad? I don't even know whats good to wrong anymore. But it seems bad, i better let no one see me. * Crouches to back exit* . . . *Looks around* No one.

*Slightly opens door*  And.. Out! *Closes door* Phew.. *Throws binder over fence* I hope i could go back soon.. *Jumps over fence* Heh.. *Grabs binder and walks off* Why was my Cutie ma-.. 

Necklice glowing, weird. It might be broken. I hope it isn't, its the only thing i got from the other realm. Or so called World. *Sits down behind building* I never seen this much trees before, well.

Only in the Everfree Forest. Timber wolves.. Kinda miss them. *Hears Some one crying*  ..  . Some one else is here..? *Looks beside the wall* Wait.. Is that, why is she here?  *Gets up* .. *Pokes*

 

Derpy: *Stops* Fred? What you doing here...

 

Fred: Oh eh, well.. *Changes topic* Whats wrong?

 

Derpy:  . . . I hate getting bullied thats all. 

 

Fred: Wait, bullied? Why are they bullying you?

 

Derpy: Its because of my Eyes.. And i always break stuff.. I don't mean to be like this-

 

(Now i wish Hasbro would see this, See haters who wanted to take off Derpy, see what you've done! Feel the pain..)

 

Fred: *Sighs* You seem fine to me.

 

Derpy: *Wipes eyes*  I wish i never came to this world!-... 

 

Fred: Wait, world?

 

Derpy: N-nothing!  *Facepalms*

 

Fred: What if i tell you, i would believe you?

 

Derpy:  . . . Fine, I'm not from this world, the world i come from is called E-

 

Fred: Equestria.. So you came from there.. Never thought i would meet another pony..

 

Derpy: ... You're from.. 

 

Fred: Not from, just found my way there.

 

Derpy: Thats why you like that when i first saw you.. *Smiles* I'm not alone anymore! *Gets up and puts hands on pole*

 

Fred: Wait thats!

 

Derpy: *Pole tips over* Whoops, 

 

Fred: *Sighs* I never seen you in Equestria before.

 

Derpy: ... I left like 2 years ago, wait! Did you meet Rainbow dash! 

 

Fred: Oh, yeah i did. 

 

Derpy: How did you look like!

 

Fred: . . . Well, i was an Alicorn.

 

Derpy: A-Alicorn!?! But, how.. *Knees down*

 

Fred: . . . Please, don't. I didn't really want to become an Alicorn in the first place. *Smiles* I'm not with the whole, royal thing..  But i did like the horn. and the new wings. And armor..

 

Derpy: Oh.. Hows the rest?  *Eyes go Derpy*

 

Fred: Well, they're doing good.. Twilight is an Alicorn,

 

Derpy: Wait! Shes an Alicorn now! Last time i saw her, she was an unicorn.. I must've missed a lot.. *Sighs*

 

Fred:  Don't you watch My little Pony Friendship is Magic?

 

Derpy:  . . . Theres a show?

 

Fred: Heh, you'll get cought up soon. 

 

Derpy: *Smiles* Thanks for cheering me up. 

 

Fred: Always try to cheer up my friends. 

 

Derpy: *Looks at time* I better get back to class, my teacher doesn't care if i do this. *Runs off*

 

Fred:  *Pulls hoodie over eyes* I might as will take a power nap.. Haven't been in this body for a long time.. *Puts binder under head* I hope no one sees me. *Closes eyes* 

Edited September 19, 2013 by Fredbermudez

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Heh i wonder how they are so overpowered to tell ya the truth. They are pretty much the same just an unicorn put togither with an pegusi! 

well they can be more than fast then the wonder bolts , have more great , powerful , and epic spells and can send ponies to the moon! (princess celestia only)---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------^

Edited July 7, 2013 by Lightning Sketch

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Ooff.. Sorry for the very late chapter! Been busy, trying my best to make chapters as fast as i can! Everytime i post a comment on my own story its a update ETC. Trying to keep Book 1 with book 2.

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lol that is wierd and epic at the same tiem but wat da.......................

 

 

and when would you start workin on the other chapters? i cant wait!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

/)^3^(\!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

-squeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee-

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lol that is wierd and epic at the same tiem but wat da.......................

 

 

and when would you start workin on the other chapters? i cant wait!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

/)^3^(\!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

-squeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee-

e-e Trying my best with a sick mum. Lolz hasn't had the time to work on the other chapters! Gonna start working on them pretty soon (Kinda  update e0e)

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Making sure chapter 4 is 2x longer or more than chapter 3! Drawing Dragonshy's Mother. I'll post the picture as soon i'm done with it!

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*Sighs* Found some errors in the story. Cantorlot Re-fix = Canterlot. I'll get to fixing soon, still drawing on Dragonshy's Mother. 

Check this other great romance story!

Writer: Fire Heart

Name: Eternal Love (WIP Rewrite)

Link: http://mlpforums.com/topic/67680-eternal-love-wip-rewrite/

Edited July 26, 2013 by Fredbermudez

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Please bare with me, sorry i haven't doing chapter 4. My dad died  last night at 5AM In the hospital. Still trying to get my head out of the gutter. 

Woot went over 500 words this time than Chapter 3.  Pretty sure this is gonna be so much longer than book 1. Its already at 3k, Book 1 finished at 5k!

Edited July 29, 2013 by Fredbermudez

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Finally done with Chapter 5! Took me so long been busy lately. Had to get ready for my dads Funeral ETC.. Plus school starts next week for me. Making it more a pain.. *Sighs* 

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*Sigh* I didn't want to do this.. But my School is making me to do so, putting This on hold for a while.. My life is too busy ATM. My childhood is gone q-q.

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*Sigh* Had to put some work aside to finish this chapter.. Doesn't help when you have a ingrown toenail! Must very painful.. This well be my last story until next summer.. I hope you all liked them.. 

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Problems posting chapter 7. Idk whats wrong, i'll  bloody keep trying to re-post it. It keeps saying ERROR Sooo much rage at this..

Why did it delete chapter 6?!!?! Omfg... I can't bloody stand this, GRRRR I just hope they fix the bug for the editing soon.. I can't stand this anymore..

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*Sigh* They haven't still replied to my ticket i sent about the problem i have here, until the whole thing blows over. I'll be starting a mini fiction. Its based off of, My little Emneisa. It well still have the same (DRAGONSHY) And probably not the mane 6. As for told in here.  The story to it:  http://www.youtube.com/watch?annotation_id=annotation_814226&feature=iv&src_vid=IeulCoQ87R8&v=uBo8K64mx5A#t=7m18s Yes, its not part 1 but you could find it. As which, it might have the rest as for. Twilight, Applejack, And Pinkie Pie. I'm just going on with the story into a fanfiction. 

Also *Facepalms* This is the telling how be got back/nightmare, (Spoilers) In this book 2, (OTHER SPOLIERS) Fred is going to die. Yes how sad but yes. Meaning this is going to tell how he gets back from death. *Sigh* I well be posting the rest of the chapters when they fix this problem.