Fanfic for a fanic

[MWMalcolm 1]

The idea is might a little unusual, but's worth a try:

 

Add good name here*

 

This fanfic would start with humans -i know buuuuhhh-.

The story begins during war in Europe, during a attack the 4 characters ran over an BHM, a black hole mine.

Now the leader of the squad found himself in the post apocalyptic equestria, alone without his friends.

He was "lucky" while he was unconscious slavers got him, could become worse.

Now he has to face several problems, at first how does he escaped, where are his friends and are they alive, WHY THE FUCK IS HE A PONY and most important of all: how to come back home.

 

Main characters: The 4 squad members and maybe some else, i won't tell yet.

Rating: Adult

the post apocalyptic equestria can be very violent, no R34 will be included.

 

 

[repsol rave 2,963]

so what kind of post apocalyptic equestria are we talking about? like a somewhat fallout setting? this all does sounds like a pretty nice idea. there are multiple storylines you could create here. just please watch out with making another fallout: equestria clone. there already are a lot of those out there.

you definately got me interested anyway

Edited July 12, 2013 by repsol rave

[MWMalcolm 1]

so what kind of post apocalyptic equestria are we talking about? like a somewhat fallout setting? this all does sounds like a pretty nice idea. there are multiple storylines you could create here. just please watch out with making another fallout: equestria clone. there already are a lot of those out there.

you definately got me interested anyway

 

Well it's not a clone if you're go into the world of it, that's why it's a fanfic for a fanfic.

I now have to create the Stroy line, the characters.

Maybe they will see the characters from the original fallout : equestria, hear of them but they will not operate with them.

[repsol rave 2,963]

Well it's not a clone if you're go into the world of it, that's why it's a fanfic for a fanfic.

I now have to create the Stroy line, the characters.

Maybe they will see the characters from the original fallout : equestria, hear of them but they will not operate with them.

aah i see, well it now all seems like a much better idea to me. (also the title of the thread seems much clearer)  i'll be watching for it to be released

[MWMalcolm 1]

I made the first unfinished version of the introduction.

Since English isn't my native language i have no idea how to write a long story in it.

I could need tips and help here.

 

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1nEauv-lmoGn2LE_udAdhLUV8PmqYG3IjVclhf8Tv31c

Edited July 12, 2013 by MWMalcolm

[repsol rave 2,963]

i clicked on the link, but you didn't make the doc public can you please do that? otherwise it would be kinda hard for me to read it XD

 

also, if you need help and tips i highly recommend visiting this thread here: 

http://mlpforums.com/topic/43854-mlp-forums-proof-reader-group-be-or-find-a-proof-reader-here/?hl=proof+reader