My extreamly comlicated ffic that i'm not to sure how it's gonna work

[Kommandant Henkil 3]

This is a little rough draft of my coming Fan fic that i just might not actually write  i'm the kind of person who comes up with good ideas alot and just never completes them but this is what i have so far (plz forgive for typo's)

 

Equestria is at war
The new Luna republic has just been formed and civil war haz begun, while the republic fights for independence Soviet equestria has just been formed (lead by twilight? after reading book on communisum from long ago) But sudden;y a new force rises from an unkonwn porvidence across the sea who call them self the u.f.f (United fox fedration) So the 3 factions must band togeather to fight or else they will have no lands (or people) to  return to and stuff.

 

Forces:

1. Equestrian forces: Celestia

Military gear for infantry is simmiler to U.s military personell today, common wepons are m-4's and M-16's (along with portable TOW anti tank wepons) Airforce is sort of small due to reliance on pegusi. they still have some old f-14's somewhere. Panzer force: lot's of Abrams tanks along with some lav-1 Apc's

2. New Lunar republic: Luna

Millitary gear simmiler to U.s Millitary (Most of it captured from her sisters forces) Common weapons are Ditto  Airforce: Large collection of F- 18's and they managed to capture 2 or 3 f-22's

3. soviet Equestria: Twilight sparkle

Millitary Gear is vary outdated (Just imagine a pony in a russian military uniform from the 40's) Common weapons PPsh sub macinegun Mosin rife (bolt action) RPG's, AK-47.
Panzer force: Hundreds of old t-34's Airfoce: Yakov-2 fighters and IL-2 Dive bombers (With some MIG-17's but those are still in development)

4. the U.F.F : Unknown

Millitary Gear: Uniform simmiler to late ww1 German military clothing
Common weapons: FG-42 (updated high calabier version (more details later):3) MG-42 heavy macinegun P-90 submacinegun Updated high calabre KAR-98 (dubbed K99). Air force FW-140H(has turbines that get it to mach 2 and the abillity to be used in space) BF-110Z (ground support model) Can flip it's two engines in mid flight to work simmiler to an Osprey witch makes it an incredible gunship fighter combo. Panzer: Upgraded PanzerIII Upgraded Panther Lepord2 and some E-100's Mechanisierte Panzer: Esien Tiger spider tank: A tank that instead of tracks has three spiderlike legs on each side that it can use to climb nearly anything (based of Tiger 1 chassis)
 

(p.s some of the names are in German like: Panzer= tank, Esien= Iron, Mechanisierte panzer= Mechanized Panzer)
 

actually it's not a rough draft just a sort of plan so whoops my bad, And also if you're interested in this idea i really would love some help getting everything together on one condition NO 34 EVER NOT EVER *calms down*  so yah hope you like it!

[Rainbow Skywalker 642]

Well, if you do happen to go through with it, you definitely need an editor my friend.  No offense intended.

 

Also, there are many people who happen to frown on "war in Equestria" stories.  There are tons of them, and the plot is never very good.

 

In your case, I would suggest working out a unique plot and purpose for the characters before starting to write.  Give them some sort of purpose, instead of just tales of how they fight each other.  You also seem to have a fine attention to military weaponry and advancements, but you don't want to overload your audience with details about such things, simply because people tend to talk too much about things they know a lot about.

 

Best of luck if you do happen to go through with this.