Rainbow Factory - Concept Designs

[horrorelementfilms 0]

Currently, I'm with a small indie film group named "HorrorElementFilms", and currently, we're making a full length feature film loosely based on the Fanfiction and CreepyPasta "The Rainbow Factory".

 

Right now, along with finishing the official script, we've released these Images to show what we're creating. We'd like your opinion on what we have to show for right now.

 

"officinas mortis" - Main Antagonist

 

Official Poster

 

Secondary Poster (Title Card)

 

Tell us what you think and what you'd like to expect from this!

 

And as a side note, a brief description of the film itself:

 

Alex Flicker, the newly appointed CEO of the "Cloudsdale Board of Weather Management", is sent to collect profits from the elusive "Rainbow Factory". Along with most of the public, he knows very little about this Factory and what exactly it does. When he ventures into sections of the Factory that are never shown to public eyes, what he discovers may be the last thing he'll ever know.

Edited July 27, 2013 by horrorelementfilms

[Silverwisp the Bard 2,354]

Not a fan of guro, but to each their own.

 

First pic looks good in terms of shading, but the pony's anatomy needs work:

the neck is a bit too thin and what can be seen of the legs looks akward.

 

The first posterlooks good, the second not so much:

The parchment texture doesn't mesh well with the black and white, the white text is difficult to read and the coloured letters don't adhere to the rainbow spectrum.