Jump to content
Banner by ~ Wizard

Can someone review my OC


Harmony Spark

Recommended Posts

Here's my alicorn OC, Harmony Spark (as seen in my avatar) can someone review it and see whether it needs improving or not. The link to the OC is in my signature box. Thanks!


Harmony Spark: Fellow Brony and Devoted Student in Animation

 

 

Devoted HIM Fangirl. He is my husbando.

Link to comment
Share on other sites

Design is great and all. 

 

Loved how you made her have asperger's. 

 

The backstory is a little iffy. I think it's a little close to how Pinkie Pie got her cutie mark. 

 

The concept is pretty good but you may want to go back and tweak her personality, for it has some conflicting emotions and attitudes, like tomboy and shy. 

  • Brohoof 1
Link to comment
Share on other sites

Create an account or sign in to comment

You need to be a member in order to leave a comment

Create an account

Sign up for a new account in our community. It's easy!

Join the herd!

Sign in

Already have an account? Sign in here.

Sign In Now
  • Recently Browsing   0 members

    • No registered users viewing this page.
×
×
  • Create New...