Guest September 6, 2013 Share September 6, 2013 Hello....it's been a while since i've last posted anything, i was busy with gymnasium (type of school in europe) well anyway this is a song i've been working on, it's not much but...oh well anyway, i'd like your opinion on it =) the genre is,...well i'd like to call it industrial-ambient-rock....we'll here's the song, i hope you can enjoy. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jklkL17-qQQ&lc=MAz1qruEWBidqi23xA7ER1yNwJp3A5qGjUGz1X2z7FE&lch=email&feature=em-comment_received Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Friendship_Cannon 1,677 September 6, 2013 Share September 6, 2013 Not bad, not at all. Usually a genre that I can't relate to in any way (I like the happier types more), but you did a good job at this track. About the piano main,it could be a bit more fluently, in the sense of letting the notes fade into each other a bit, rather than making them short and accented, and the beat after 02:20 is quite suprising, but good for that matter. Signature made by the amazing ~Harmonic Dreams~ I always pictured you as a cross between Demoman and Pinkie Pie for some reason. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest September 6, 2013 Share September 6, 2013 Not bad, not at all. Usually a genre that I can't relate to in any way (I like the happier types more), but you did a good job at this track. About the piano main,it could be a bit more fluently, in the sense of letting the notes fade into each other a bit, rather than making them short and accented, and the beat after 02:20 is quite suprising, but good for that matter. Thank you for your honest opinion =) XD the beat at 2:20 i really have no idea why i put it there but hey...it works XD anyway thanks =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rose<3 12 September 6, 2013 Share September 6, 2013 (edited) This is wonderful. The title really works with the song, and it also gave me a little chill before I listened to it. Though when the beats and rhythm suddenly changed at 1:50-1:51, it could of ended off slowly, not immediately. I mean, if that's part of the song for the quick beats to immediately turn to slow ones, ignore that. But if it is, try to slow It done a bit or try to end that part of the song slowly. c: Otherwise, great song. Seems you put a lot of work into it. Edited September 6, 2013 by Lady Rose Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maerchen 38 September 6, 2013 Share September 6, 2013 I really like it, but I have to agree with Lady Rose. Anyway you did a very good job and it has this kind of athmosphere which gives you goose bumbs, but in an interesting and good way. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest September 6, 2013 Share September 6, 2013 I really like it, but I have to agree with Lady Rose. Anyway you did a very good job and it has this kind of athmosphere which gives you goose bumbs, but in an interesting and good way. This is wonderful. The title really works with the song, and it also gave me a little chill before I listened to it. Though when the beats and rhythm suddenly changed at 1:50-1:51, it could of ended off slowly, not immediately. I mean, if that's part of the song for the quick beats to immediately turn to slow ones, ignore that. But if it is, try to slow It done a bit or try to end that part of the song slowly. c: Otherwise, great song. Seems you put a lot of work into it. Mhm..i completely agree with you on that, didnt think of it when i was making the song XD oh well...i'll know for next time =) thank you for taking the time and listening to it =D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rose<3 12 September 6, 2013 Share September 6, 2013 No problem. A little bit more practice and you'll soon be a amazing music maker/editor. Good luck with more songs. (If you post more of them, I'll be sure to listen. c:) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest September 6, 2013 Share September 6, 2013 No problem. A little bit more practice and you'll soon be a amazing music maker/editor. Good luck with more songs. (If you post more of them, I'll be sure to listen. c:) He he =D thanks....i've been trying ambient before...so i wanted to find my own sound..sort of...so i thought what if i try industrial..and well..people actually like it =D i will definitely keep making music, the support people show here is insane =) and thank you again Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rainbowbrony2013 2 September 7, 2013 Share September 7, 2013 The sons was a little slow to start but after it got good there were some parts that I thought it was fading out then when it did fade out I was wondering when it would start up again. brohoof Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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