OC drawing (dusty dasher)

[Rayalicious 435]

Just an OC drawing, though i need feedback pls. (coloring is not an option) Dusty Dasher is the owner of this OC all rights reserved. Hope you like, (it's not worthy of a signature *hides in corner*)

 

Edited October 15, 2013 by Sir. Rayray

[~SadisticFluttershy~ 779]

Looks alot like Scootaloo.

 

But it's great actually. I don't see anything wrong with it so.. your all good to go.(Dusty Dasher) 1.2.3.4

[Cakebandit :3 1,064]

I think it looks really good, though I agree it looks a lot like scootaloo xD I think its a great drawing regardless though personally I think you did a great job on Dusty Dasher

[Rayalicious 435]

Scootaloo.

Not the first time i hear that But with colors(which isn't an option again) The difference will be obvious, on second i will try making a colored version 

I don't wanna do this anymore My friend told me that i should stop the million small scribles style and take singles line. This is what her work looks like

 

 

 

 

And so i tried.... 

 

 

 

 

Idk...

Edited October 15, 2013 by Sir. Rayray