Twilight Sparkle's AMAZING Gift!

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I hate Twilicane, so i gave it to Twilight for Hearths Warming!

She doesn't look too happy anout it in this drawing...

 

 

(again i can't get Twilight's walls look GOOD!!!!) anyways I went for a chibi style that i fornd out how to *sort of* do while doodling in school. so i decided to make a new drawing that i was planning on doing for a while, so... there you are

hope you like it, please reply, and scale from 1/10 and don't be shy

*What a derpy tree... i night add a little more detail...*

 

if the text is hard to read it ways

T: "Gee thanks pinkie"

P: "You're welcome"

Edited December 10, 2013 by Pelate

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7/10. I dislike judging art that is so much better than mine, but what the hay. Overall pretty good. The idea is cute, and overall it is well drawn. There are a few things I feel the need to nitpick about. The first is Twilight's body position; It looks a little bit like her legs are on the ground, but not her body, though that may be the angle. I would recommend having the floor boards taper more to reduce the illusion of a slanted floor. I feel bad being picky about work better than my own, but I felt the need to say that. Once again, it is good, I like your style of drawing.

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7/10. I dislike judging art that is so much better than mine, but what the hay. Overall pretty good. The idea is cute, and overall it is well drawn. There are a few things I feel the need to nitpick about. The first is Twilight's body position; It looks a little bit like her legs are on the ground, but not her body, though that may be the angle. I would recommend having the floor boards taper more to reduce the illusion of a slanted floor. I feel bad being picky about work better than my own, but I felt the need to say that. Once again, it is good, I like your style of drawing.

Yea I'm horrible at floors.

Thanks for pointing that out wink

And thanks for replying