Whip Stitch Analysis - The Wonderbolt's Academy (Aka seeking feedback)

[garrenn 74]

Hi everyone! I just finished my first ever MLP analysis video, and so I'd love to get some feedback and suggestions.

I have very little history with videos and editing, but I personally think I did pretty well. I tend to catch onto things like this with very bare minimum knowledge.

 

Though you can tell me what you thought fo the contents of my video, I'm also looking for opinions of the video itself. How it's presented and paced and if you would consider it something you would subscribe to (assuming you're into mlp video analysis of course). I'm not asking for subscriptions, I'm just asking that if you found this randomly on youtube, would it be the kind of video that goes "Huh, I may check this pony out!"