Aurelion Star 433 May 31, 2014 Share May 31, 2014 you can critisize it so that I can make it more romantic 4 http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/dusk-night-r6662EVEN IF YOU ARE WEAK YOU CAN STILL BECOME STRONG IF YOU HAVE SOMEONE TO PROTECT.by; ERZA SCARLET Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DaringDo's #1Fan 18 May 31, 2014 Share May 31, 2014 IT'S AN OC ALICORN. AAAAAAAAAAAH. DIE. 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DragonAria 314 May 31, 2014 Share May 31, 2014 I like it, but with armor's better 1 "Look and you will find the Hope amidst Sparkling Raindrops in a Sun Shower" ... as you may have guessed, I didn't come up with this sentence but randomly found it on the net. But I like it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aurelion Star 433 May 31, 2014 Author Share May 31, 2014 (edited) Colonel-why is there something wrong with him?dragon- thank you Ill draw him an armer for you I"ll pm you once its finished Edited May 31, 2014 by dusk.night 1 http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/dusk-night-r6662EVEN IF YOU ARE WEAK YOU CAN STILL BECOME STRONG IF YOU HAVE SOMEONE TO PROTECT.by; ERZA SCARLET Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iceestarz 5,764 May 31, 2014 Share May 31, 2014 As for the Oc, typically alicorns are frowned upon for Oc's because they're overpowered. Mary Sue and all that jazz. As for the drawing itself, I will say it's colorful lol. I really adore vibrant colors in art, however I feel like the choice in the background drowns out Twily making people more likely to focus on your Oc alone right off the bat instead of the two. I would recommend using a contrasting color to all of the primary subjects in the future in order to make them pop and stand out more. If I had to nitpick I'd say the the bent forelegs look a little awkward to me. But you did a good job! I can't wait to see more. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aurelion Star 433 May 31, 2014 Author Share May 31, 2014 Thanks thats what I wanted to here in my viewerswho criticize not too harsh and in a very friendly statethank you I promise you Ill work on that 1 http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/dusk-night-r6662EVEN IF YOU ARE WEAK YOU CAN STILL BECOME STRONG IF YOU HAVE SOMEONE TO PROTECT.by; ERZA SCARLET Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mantza 29 May 31, 2014 Share May 31, 2014 Aaw I love it!~ If you do a new one, let me know about it, right. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aurelion Star 433 May 31, 2014 Author Share May 31, 2014 okmantza who is still a stranger too me 1 http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/dusk-night-r6662EVEN IF YOU ARE WEAK YOU CAN STILL BECOME STRONG IF YOU HAVE SOMEONE TO PROTECT.by; ERZA SCARLET Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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