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Admit it, Star Shine!


Tom Snyder

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Candy Star: Hello everypony! I'm Candy Star! And today i have with me a special guest, my best friend, Lightning Flicker! *Nudges Lightning*

 

Lightning Flicker: Oh! right... Hello everypony!

 

Candy Star: Today i have a fun little story for you all, and by special i mean me and Lightning here had our fun with Star Shine. But lets get to the point, Lightning, remember when you asked me to join you in teaming up against Star Shine during the summer sun celebration?

 

Lightning Flicker: Oh yeah! that was fun, too bad Star Shine won't speak to us for a week. *folds ears*

 

Candy Star: That's okay, she's usually like that, so don't let it get you down! Now lets begin our story.

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Its the summer sun celebration, and everypony is getting ready for tonight's parties. Star Shine has gathered what they need for their party tonight in Star Shine's house. Inside they go about their business, Star Shine gets back to her experiment. She never answers to what its for, just that its important to her.

 

Candy Star joins Lightning Flicker at the table as they have their cider together, both laugh it up at Candy Star's jokes. Star Shine is losing focus, but tries to ignore it. But then Lightning brings up a lie to Candy Star, hoping she buys it:

 

"Candy Star? did i ever tell you what Star Shine said about us?" asks Lightning Flicker, whispering into Candy Star's ear.

 

"No, what?" asks Candy Star, Lightning Flicker tells her.

 

"She said that were no more fun than a bag of peanuts." Candy Star is shocked to hear it, and accidentally shouts her reply.

 

"She said what?!" Lightning Flicker quickly covers Candy Star's muzzle to silence her. Star Shine looks over to them and has a suspicion that they are up to something, but doesn't know what yet.

 

"Alright, what's going on? You two aren't up to anything bad are you?" asks Star Shine, giving a glare towards Lightning Flicker.

 

"I wouldn't dream of it, Star." replies Lightning Flicker, laughing nervously.

 

"Riiight, well keep it down, i'm trying to focus." Star Shine turns back to her experiment, Hoping nothing else will throw her off. Lightning Flicker and Candy Star make their move, quietly sneaking up on their victim; Star Shine. She never sees or hears it coming as Candy Brings her down to the floor and pins her in place.

 

"Candy Star, let go of me!" exclaims Star Shine, but any attempt to free herself fails. Lightning Flicker approaches Star Shine with a cocky expression. Looking at her hoof, Star Shine sees the feather and gets whats going on.

 

"You wouldn't dare.." says Star Shine, calling Lightning Flicker on her bluff.

 

"Try me, you know as well as anypony in this town that i don't bluff on things like this." Lightning Flicker starts assaulting Star Shine with the tickle torture and gets her laughing uncontrollably. Candy Star just smiles at her friend, happy to see her lighten up.

 

"You two are going..hahhaha!! To regret this when...Hahahaha!! with you." Star Shine is at their mercy and is helpless as they continue the assault on her. Lightning Flicker keeps that smile on her face, enjoying every moment of it.

 

"And how will you do that, Star? We have you right where we want you." replies Lightning Flicker, gesturing for Candy Star to join in the fun. Candy Star gets her below the rib and gets her laughing harder than before. star Shine thinks she mie die from laughter if this keeps up.

 

"All you have to say five words: We're more fun than you." suggests Lightning Flicker, giving Star Shine that playful smile. But Star Shine isn't the one to break so easily.

 

"Never! hahahaha!!" exclaims Star Shine, not willing to give up.

 

"Have it your way, Star, don't say i didn't warn ya!" Lightning Flicker moves up to her underside and it elicits a bigger laugh, tears start coming from Star Shine as she is crying from laughing so hard. Lightning Flicker can't help but but join in as the three of them go in to full blown laughter at Star Shine's expense.

 

"Stop! Stop it! Hahaha!!" Lightning doesn't stop, she will get a Star Shine to admit it.

 

"Admit it, Star Shine! We're more fun than you!" Lightning Flicker suggests again, but Star Shine is reaching her limit. Now Star Shine is hysterical with laughter as the assault continues without any end in sight.

 

"No, never!" Star Shine is still resisting the temptation to give in, but knows its only a matter of time before we will have to.

 

Candy Star decides to amp it up a bit by asking Lightning for another feather, which Lightning does and now the real fun can begin. Candy Star uses it on under Star Shine's neck a vulnerable point.

 

"Hahahaha!! Okay, okay! you win!" says Star Shine, but Lightning wants Star Shine to admit it, But Star Shine can be stubborn as a mule when it came to it.

 

"Saay iiit!' orders Lightning Flicker, eager to get this over with.

 

"Alright hahahaa!! you're more fun than me, i admit it!" finally getting the confession, they both stop and Star Shine is sweating fro laughing so much. Candy Star gets off and Lightning exntends a hoof to help her up. But Star Shine pulls a fast one and gets Lightning o the floor pinning her down.

 

"I told you, Lightning, you're going to regret doing that to me." Star Shine begins the assault on Lightning Flicker, making her laugh uncontrollably.

 

"Oh for the love of celesta , no! ahahahaha!!" Now Lightning becomes the victim as they night draws to a close, each laughs as the sun rises to a brand new day.

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Candy Star: Star Shine really went to town on you, Lightning. hehehe! * tries to conceal her laughter*

 

Lightning Flicker: Oh shut up! She got you back too...

 

Candy Star: Yeah, but you were the one who thought of it, she went easy on me.

 

Lightning Flicker: What?! No fair!

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Hope you guys enjoyed this entry and have a nice day! ;)

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