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Rarity story


碇 シンジン

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There was pony named Cotton he was happy pony, pink mane yellow soft coat. =) He was always after the mare ponies, because she was lonely pony and wanted some company. One evening Cotton was walking in the streets of ponyville back to his house, he was looking at the evening dark sky and wondering would he ever find a partner to be with. Always when he tried to talk to mare pony friends he was shy and didnt open his mouth. Usually the ponies around him just thought he was weird and left him be on his own.

Suddenly he saw something, something that was so beautiful he had to look again and, be sure it really was there. On the balcony of the Carousel Boutique he saw the white unicorn pony lovely, purple shiny mane. looking velvet soft silk flowing with the winds. Clean beautiful white coat so pretty pony. Who was this pretty pony wonder of absolute beauty and gorgeousness, he wondered.

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Cotton couldn't get the pretty pony out of his mind, he continued walking back to his house, opened the heavy door of wood and went straight to bed. He was still thinking the unocorn pony on the balcony her cute hair and pretty tail. he grabbed the pen and this piece of paper. and Wrote the cute love poem about the cute haired unicorn pretty pony He smiled and closed his pony eyes.

In the morning Cotton woke up from his sleep, threw the blanket into the floor and galloped right outside. He was determined this time. The pretty pony last night, he would ask her out today. He ran straight to carousel Boutique and knocked the door gently with his hoof. He heard the gentle pretty hoofsteps coming closer. The door of the boutique opened slowly and cotton was excited =). He saw this pretty pony unicorn again<3<3<3 he quickly grabbed some flowers from the ground and gave the cute yellow flowers to the pretty pony <3<3 he also gave the cute poem love that he wrote last night in happy mood.

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White unicorn looked happy in her mood and she said something but cotton didnt hear it because the angelic voice of the beautiful pony and her captivating sapphire eyes were so much for him that he couldnt consentrate on what she was saying. after a few moments that felt like forever the pretty white pony closed the door and cotton realized that he had been quiet the whole time.<3 then cotton was wondering what this cute pony thought of him. he was nervous.

He thought that maybe he had failed this time maybe the pretty unicorn didnt like him he went back into his house opened the door of wood and ate the oatmeal It was still early in morning but he still went to lay on his bed thinking what had just happened. The pretty unicorn cute pony looked. He wanted to relive those cute memories from 5minutes ago.

 

The moment when the cute white pretty unicorn opened the door with her silken pony hooves and blue radiant shiny unicorn cute magic. Her hair flowing when her cute head came forth from the inside. cute pretty eyes with the shiny beautiful makeup and lovely blue eyes like jewel sapphires. Her perfect voice like an angel and the cute sound of pretty gentle harp.

 

He was still dreaming about the cute pony and her hair. He decided to write another poem about the pretty hair and the cute pony <3 Cotton was happy pony that day<3

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"He was always after the mare ponies, because SHE was lonely pony"

Just a few things should it be he not she little typo there and he was A lonely pony.

 

I didn't read the full thing but I prob will finish reading at some time.

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"He was always after the mare ponies, because SHE was lonely pony" Just a few things should it be he not she little typo there and he was A lonely pony. I didn't read the full thing but I prob will finish reading at some time.

True story he was a mare all along!!!!!!!!!

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I kind of like the ending, I think it's a cool idea for him to never actually talk to Rarity, to maybe never even find out what her name is, because we've all had those sort of "catch your eye" kind of moments. I think this song sums it up perfectly:

 

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