An interesting change a pace and a good one. I'm not going to edit it this time. lol. But for some reason it actually reminds me of this song:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IGkeLG7S0jg

Every poem of yours that i have read so far has had either a very simillar or identical structure and rhyme scheme. Have you ever tried writing something in a different style? But still... a good poem

Every poem of yours that i have read so far has had either a very simillar or identical structure and rhyme scheme. Have you ever tried writing something in a different style? But still... a good poem

I go through phases in which I write in different ways, and this was one of my longer phases. For example, much of my early work used mostly rhyming couplets. I also went through a phase of mostly writing cinquains. These particular kinds of poems tend to be the most popular so I tend to post them more often than other ones. I've actually posted other kinds of poems here before, but they tend to be ignored. 

Tomorrow, I think I'm going to post my cinquain collection because I think you are right that I need to add more variety.

Thanks, TheBronyHeart!