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Read Around the Words

CamRad18

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Hey guys! Just adding this poem to my blog. You may have seen it in a topic already (probably not).

 

Brohoof, comment, and criticize please.

 

 

 

All of my poetry

has the same

mood

and

rhyme

 

fourteen

syllables in

every line even stanzas

somber

mood

 

what a metaphor

for life

ruts

and grooves

press repeat

playback

 

what a metaphor

for life

ruts

and grooves

press repe-stop!

 

bre

ak the rules

frac

ture the monotony

 

be spontaneous

and unpredictable

aggressive goldfish

 

final piece

of

advice

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~Chaotic Fireball~

Well. it's certainly original! I have no idea if it's good or not; I'm not professional poem critique, but I know that I like poems to rhyme. Plus I didn't really understand it :|

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CamRad18

Well. it's certainly original! I have no idea if it's good or not; I'm not professional poem critique, but I know that I like poems to rhyme. Plus I didn't really understand it :|

Yeah, this poem is a bit more abstract than my usual work but, as you can probably tell, that's exactly why I wrote it. 

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