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  1. Chapter6

    As celestia stuck her horn into the book you could hear the old gears turning. then it opened an there lied a very old an very nice golden encrusted key that had the word harmony on it. As celestia picked it up with what Tom could only explane as magic an put it in his hand (celestia) you wanted to know why I brought you here as she walked down the hall to a wall. Celestia tom said (celestia) please call me Tia" ok tia what is a wall going to tell me then she said il show you as tie rasesd a hoov in the air an struck the wall a peace of the wall slid slowly open. Tom in shock dropped the key an picked it up befor tia saw what he had just did. As Tom went  to pick up the key a burst  of light filled the room throwing Tom off ballance. It was non other then a letter that made the light an scared tom half to death. Tia said its a letter twilight about what she had learned that week. Cough tie cleared here voice as if she was about to read a long letter. (from your fathfull studet twilight sparkle) I've learned today if you really need help you should ask for help an not feel ashamed to ask a friend for assistance.

     

    CHAPTER 7

    As tia was reading the letter Tom started to read the book. Sooner then he started reading the a sharp pain exploded in his right arm. As he looked down to meat this figure with a blade in her teath it was a blue pony with blue sparkling hair as tia turned around to yell NOOOO LUNA NOOOO WHAT HAVE YOU DONE. As blood rushed down toms arm he fell to the ground in in pain an ageny. Luna yelled out(Luna) I WAS SAVING YOU FROM THIS HORERIS CRETCHER. Celestia quickly picked up Tomwith her magical horn an started runing to the doctors room down the hall. Tom began to fall in an out of concesness. As tome regained concesness he noticed the room he was in had many things that you would find at a hospital at earth but they where different in a way Tom could not explane. As soon as he lifted his arm his eyes shot to the side of the room where something was scuring to get up. Toms heart skipped a beat an the heart meter began to alarm a very loud noice three white solders in gold suits bursted in the door making it fly off its hinges as soon as this happened the figure had already escaped out a window. After the guards set the palace into red alert lockdown a pony with a plus on her rear walked in with celstia. (spitfire) is he dead? (assassin) no he set off the alarms an the guards got in before I could finish the job"(spitfire) I should of known this would happen you assassins are never reliable if you want something done you do it your self".back in the ER room a nurse that Tom had seen come in asked are you alright she said her name was rose she had thick red her an a well groomed mane. Tia an Luna walked in together with a group of others as Luna said she was sorry an walked out of the room the three ponys all staired. Tia began to frown at the other ponys an they began to tell Tom there names.A skipy pony hoped up an said hi I'm feldo it's nice to meat you feldo what's your cute mark he said its solving problems an helping others with problems as the other ponys. Tould Tom there names an what they did Luna walked down the hall broken an feeling as if she was a killer a she almost murderer Tom.

    A magnifestent purple an lite purple pony asked what's wrong Luna?(Luna) I almost killed some pony lady rarity if I would just waited instead of doing what I thought was right.

     

    An that is the last two chapters I will post the last three will be in the final book

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  2. HELLO AN WELCOME TO A STORY FOR THE GODS CHARACTER CONTEST!!!

    The following winner have won a spot in chapter 7 ROSE/feldo/spitfire/an lady rarity pony

    To submit a vote goes a number an please like.we will have a number goes the 2 people who goes the closes win the spot easy as that links to the story on my profile feed. You get one vote you will be MSG if you win let's play fare may the closes win

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  3. November 28th, 2011 was the day I saw the show for the first time. My first episode was Suited for Success, and the only one I saw that day. I tried to convince myself I didn't like it, but I realized that night that I loved the episode and wanted more. I joined this forum 4 days later. :)

     

    That's about the time I started hearing about the fan fics of mlp
  4. To tell you the truth bro a story can't be rushed I'm righting fan fics a lot but if the story doesint come to me that day I just look at the story an if it still doesint come to me then I won't write BASICLY what I'm saying is be your self don't form to others liking on story's tell it how you like it that's what I do

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  5. As the ponys backed away in fear that where serounding him the man began to hover off the ground into the air. The man was scared out of his mind he had been grabbed bye ponys teleported an now this.

    In the distens he could see a purple pony runing to the crowed in a matter of seconded he went from floting to falling. As soon as he started to fall a strong force grabbed him stronger then eny force he had ever seen.as he was looking around the purple pony begane to speak.(twilight) are you alright I I...... Her eyes oped wider then soup bowls. As he looked down there was a Cress baring the words those who except a friendship ern our mark. This was the mark of the celitien family.(celestia) you see trixy this man is no outsider he is family.after a huge greating from all th ponys an party bye pinky pie. It was time to hear the truth.(Tom) celesta?(celesta) yes Tom what is it she asked knowing what he was going to ask. Why am I here? As he said this a book with a magic lock that only a royal ponys could open Whats on the table.on the book lied these words danger keep out.

     

    My next post in a few days will be the finail story all to together

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    Hiya - the URL BBCode is disabled for Blank Flanks (members with less than 5 "counted" posts) to help discourage people from coming in, rushing to advertise their personal site or something, and ditching. Sorry for the confusion this caused.

     

    We use Invision Power Board - see the little "Community Forum Software by IP.Board" at the bottom right-hand corner? ;)

     

    So that's the program your using I thought if seen this before
  7. I love how the wallpaper cycles in the Windows Dev Preview (Windows 8) automatically change the whole desktop colour scheme when using a wallpaper slideshow :)

     

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    And sorry. Not a Rarity fan so yeah.

     

    Man that looks alsome I'm so getting that for myn where did you get yours?

     

    This is myn I'm on my iPad though ima jailbreak this 5.0 today an get it done then I'm getting windows on this

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