Marty McFly

Perhaps if you included RD in them they would be 20% cooler after already being 10x cuteness

Just an idea, but hey, what do I know? I know a lot actually...

It's Woona. That's the reason why I chose this picture to be the profile picture 

 

@@Marty McFly,

 

Maybe you should start with only the head-area first, before moving on how to draw the rest of the body? Might be easier. 

http://askchibiteamrwby.tumblr.com/

I have dedicated an entire Tumblr to my new-found semi-talent. It'll get better with experience! Hopefully I have time to draw tomorrow! 

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A lot of my IRL friends claim that I'm good enough to be a professional Critique... And even if it is your first time, you wanted actual criticsm:

Adowable wittle Woona
If I were put into the Pony universe, Luna would be my waifu

Celestia's cool too, but she's not the one who was on the moon for 1000 years

It's Woona. That's the reason why I chose this picture to be the profile picture 

 

@@Marty McFly,

 

Maybe you should start with only the head-area first, before moving on how to draw the rest of the body? Might be easier. 

I've been drawing RWBY chibi stuff for the last half hour.Turns out I'm great with chibis! I'll upload pictures later! Might even start a "Ask Team RWBY" Tumblr where  everything is cute times ten. 

 

@@Marty McFly

I can see an obvious line in her hair that's supposed to be her head... It shouldn't be there.

I can see the her right eye is thinner/bigger than her right eye.

Her arms seem to just come down from her torso, no shoulders at all.

Too many lines in her hair.

Her shirt and necklace are both too high.

I'd recommend making her head a bit larger and maybe having hair be bigger.

The first thing, honestly I think that's a nitpick, I mean it was first-time conceptual work lol.

But the rest are the most descriptive criticisms yet. Thanks I never would've noticed the shoulders ;_;

Don't bring yourself down like that. But if you want, I'll deliver my opinion. The eyes are out of shape, and don't really match each other. The head also has an odd shape to it. Also, I think you should show more of the neck. Finally if you fix the lines, it will look great! 

 

Another thing, add the whole body together. Don't put it in separate portions.

 

Is that what you wanted? 

I knew about the eyes (and even commented on them on the paper lol), and I never thought of them as quite... out of shape. Could you elaborate? I mean, the left eye on the largest picture seems okay for anime. I can see what you said about the neck, and I've always struggled with heads. And the lines are hard to fix with pencil and paper :/ Plus, the body was drawn away because I didn't even want to try to connect the largest picture with a body, it'd look stupid because I am still learning bodies. I think you see this as like it's supposed to be like a portrait or something, when I was seeing it as something like concept art so you're just spilling your brain out onto the paper.

But, yes, that's what I wanted. Thanks

Do you use the circle thingies? I forget what they're called...

 

 

Something like that. If you don't, it's best to start using them. It's annoying at first, but you'll get used to it and your art will improve. 

 

I suggest you look up tutorials on how to draw dem humans, it helps as well.

I've always tried ponies with circles, but I can never even get the circles correctly in terms of scale and location. I've kinda shunned that tactic ;_;

When i saw this i was all like: OwlPsy2.gif

Then i calmed down and was all like: 

                                                                                        "An Excellent First."

good job bro and keep improving

Goddammit, that's the second time you got me today with Chef Excellence XD Now I feel like (and secretly hope) he will show up in every thread. I was even photoshopping pictures of Chef Excellence during online classes to stick up at appropriate times. 

Well, it takes time to gain a strength in a talent. Keep it up, and you'll be better in no time! I would suggest making the whole thing bigger, and the lines more accurate.

It is bigger, but the iPhone doesn't have a great camera, so I had to back up a little, unfortunately. And, I wanted actual criticism, not just "Keep going". Come on, you know you want to bash my awful skills XD

Right, so I previously never really seriously tried art before. Well, I just did. I put my all in to it and I need your hardcore critical responses. It's supposed to be Weiss from "RWBY". First image is the official image of her and the second is a couple of mine. (Stupid right eyes, I know)

It took me a minute to understand it.

 

Haha. Ok.

 

So... is that a maybe? And sorry if it took a while to understand. I'm a little scatter-brained today for a few reasons, including lack of sleep.

Huh, this thread is relevant to my interests.

I, sir, have a request. I have two new obsessions: RWBY and Back To The Future. So, here's my idea. A chibi anime-esque Marty McFly in a cute little DeLorean (DeWohwean if you will ) and he's poking his head out awkwardly chuckling because he almost accidentally ran over Weiss (RWBY) and Rarity at a stop sign. Just imagining a chibi Marty McFly in a little anime DeLorean is giving me a heart attack.

I'm sorry, but this has been done to death! It could in theory work, but just like making a new Mario game, there'd have to be something big to make it stand out. 

I just noticed this thread was under life advice and started cracking up, how has this thread got anything to do with life advice *stops laughing, Clears throat* Hello, you have reached "an excellent stay happy life line" your choice you use this excellent service is "an excellent decision" XD

Wait... it is? I didn't even notice. I swear I put it in "general". Can we have a mod move it? Would they even, or just delete it. Please, merciful mods, only move this beautiful, beautiful thread! It's too pretty and young to die right now! Just give it a chance XD

What is an Ashen? A type of couch? A type of material? A color? Some internet meme that I haven't heard of yet? I know this has to be a reference to something, but it's lost on me :\

Ashens is a witty Brit who puts his camcorder in front of a couch and reviews a bunch of stupid tat he finds at dollar stores. Here's one of my favorite videos of his: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UEr93uEq65s

He also has a blindbag series and if the figure pleases him, it ascends to the shelf of interesting items. If it doesn't, he burns it. And it's very fun to watch them melt. 

I'm drinking Green cordial out of a stay-fresh beverage bag, its the latest thing from mr. excellence himself XD

                             An Excellent Post.

I wish I had the Chef Excellence mug ;_;

Speaking of Ashen's merch, I learned Chuggaconroy is an Ashens fan because he has fifty thousand shades of grey!

Oooooooohhhh Maaaaahhhhhh Gaaaaaawwwwwdddd! AN ASHENS FOLLOWER! INSTANT LOVE! as soon as i saw this thread (and the fact im having a sugar rush) just made me do a backflip you sir are "An excellent brony"  Brohoof to you sir! /)

I hope that sugar in you didn't come from any tat stores! It sure sounds like you ate one of those gummy foots lol. Or maybe it's seventeen years old.

Does anypony else here like Ashens? I would presume yes, judging by all the Brony hate in the comments of his videos. 

ITT: Ashens General

I talked to a phone recording of Gus Sorola once. Does that count?

"A Great Forum" -Bloody Chef Excellence 

Welcome, comrade, to our humble home!

Back to the Future is one of my favorite movies of all time. I pretty much quote it every day and although not many people understand my references I don't think I have I know anyone who doesn't know what Back to the Future is. I know people who haven't seen it and I know people who don't like it all that much but not anyone who doesn't know about it at all. 

Well, I uploaded a picture of me in a BTTF replica DeLorean and somebody said it was a "gangsta" car and that it's always been thuggish.

>MFW

When I think of timeless, innovative, and classic movies I think of Wizard of Oz and Back To The Future. Both movies were revolutionary for visual effects and BTTF is a sweeping quirky adventure. But, the more and more I reference it, the less people know what I'm talking it. In fact, I was at a con recently where the "Team Fox" (A team dedicated to raising money for Parkinson's disease in honor of MJF) people brought a fully done-up DeLorean as well as some really neat merchandise. But, the DeLorean was in a back secluded area of the hall and they barely sold anything! And they were great people, too! Is Back To The Future really leaving the collective consciousness?

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LB5YkmjalDg

I am quite possibly the largest square imaginable. I once got asked out clubbing by my "hip" friend Madison and I declined, because what would I do in a club? Stand around and pelvic thrust?

Embarrassingly, I am sexually interested in hypnosis. It seems nobody else in this thread is either, oh well. But I like going under, seeing women go under, etc. In fact, I am begging my internet friends to buy this fetish porno for me... I'm a little ashamed by that. But, it's not really porn. It's just focused on hypnosis and the most you see are her breasts. That same video also tailors to one of my other interests.

I really like blue hair and glasses, both sexually and non-sexually. They just look so cute together!  

Once, when I was about eight, my mother shook me awake because I was "Waving my legs in the air while shouting 'Oh baby! Oh baby! Oh baby!'". And this was years before I even knew what sex was. 

I look a little like Michael J Fox. I don't have that iconic nose or those blue eyes, but my body resembles his in the 80's and I even wore his hair style for a bit a few months ago! 

No, but I have all the discs to both games over here I got cheap, and I watched Spoony's let's play of the second game.

 

They seem interesting, but of course I have a soft spot for cheesy old games as a whole because I spent so much hands on time with budget titles and old thrift store copies of things as a kid. 

I never played the second, interestingly. But you should totally play the first. It really picks up towards the end, and it's where I learned to say "shit" in German. 

I don't know anything about originality! I mean, hey, just look at my username!

In all seriousness though, I believe originality is a good thing, but it's not necessarily bad to take inspiration. In my projects, I draw inspiration from Ashens, Todd in The Shadows, Nostalgia Critic, Angry Video Game Nerd, and even Yahtzee Croshaw. As long as you aren't blatantly copying their formula, it's alright.