_~Soaring Heart~_

this is the best comedy fanfic i have ever read

it is sooo good it should me posted on fimfiction, equestriadaily and so much more

the comedy is pure genius only a master of comedy arts could create such beauteous master pieces.

Uhm, thanks? I guess I could put this on FiMFiction... Thanks for the idea?

Filler: Sneak Peek: The next part has the three from the pilot, Trixie, Sunset Shimmer, Bon Bon, Lyra and Luna.

If you continue this, can you somehow add Trixie and Sunset Shimmer into the plot? That would be amazingly amazing. :3

 

By the way, I'm still not sure what the plot is, exactly. Can you fill me in?

After their friends' brutal deaths, Fluttershy, Pinkie Pie, and Rainbow Dash must resort to fighting to help the crumbling world of Equestria.

 

Yes, I can add Sunset and Trixie!

Awww I love you so much Pinkie Pie! *hugs tight*

Oh my Celestia, you're so nice! Ya think we can be friends?

SP Kira: actually, we're dating.

*Squeak* OH MY GOSH! That is so amazing! So. AMAZING!

Hmmm. Okay, Kleost! Who of the mane six is the cutest?

I think Pinkie Pie and Fluttershy are the best. And Derpy, but she's not main.

SP Kira: Thank you, I also saved Fluttershy in the process.

*Squee* She must think you're the best! You're giving Big Mac a run for his bits, there, Kira!

SP Kira: well, she was crazy and tried to put me into cupcakes. Afterwards, she calmed down and she told me how sorry she was for killing Rainbow then she helped me revive Rainbow.  She still kills, but only bad ponies.

OH MY CELESTIA! That's wonderful that you helped her. :3

*squeals* IT'S PINKIE PIE!!! I wanna hug you!!!

Okay! *Hugs*

I have a random question, Kira! How's it going with Fluttershy? *Wink wink*

Okay so why was trixie at your rock farm? And also, why did you say(when telling the kids/fillies of how you got your cutie mark) "And that's how Ponyville was created" ?

Trixie worked at our rock farm? Hmm. TRIXIE YOU GO WORK AT ANOTHER ROCK FARM!!!

 

I said that? Oh, silly me! I must've thought of the story Grammy Pie told me!

So Kira: no you don't understand, I actually met her. I went to a different dimension and meet her.

.......That's....so..........COOL!!! What was she like? What'd she say!?

SP Kira: Pinkie Pie, what if I told you that I met the pinkamena from cupcakes?

I'd probably deny everything! Heh. It's not true. I'm a loveable pony! 'Flutters' Where's Dashie? 'Back to Pinks' Aaaaaaaaah!

Fluttershy gazed down at three gravestones. She trembled. The engravements said "Dear Rarity, Sleep Well," "Buck 'Em In Heaven, Applejack," and "Magic Just Won't End, Twilight." She leaned into Pinkie Pie, who's hair was slicked straight with the rain pouring from the clouds. Fluttershy cried, letting her mind escape all thoughts. Fluttershy felt Pinkie's muzzle brush her cheek. Pinkie Pie had begun to cry aswell. Rainbow Dash stared ahead, obvioisly crying, as she was heavily breathing and sniffling. Shouts were heard in the distance. The three were oblivious. They only focused on one thing: Their dead friends.

 

 

I might continue this fanfic if it gets good critiques. Yes, I am hinting that you give it a rating and list things that could be better. Anyways, I honestly hope you enjoyed Harmony Destroyed: Part 1! ^w^

Welcome to the forums, sugarcube.   Once you become hooked on MLP Forums, you won't have time to do anything else online.  But it'll be SO worth it!   Feel free to explore and have fun!

Thanks,  Wingnut! It's dawned on me that I spend too much time here. XD 

Welcome to the forums! Have a nice time here! Its full of wonderful people to hang out with ^w^

  Thanks, sugarcube! What a lovely compliment. <blockquote class='ipsBlockquote' data-author="Nomiki" data-cid="1936417" data-time="1382084704">Nomiki, on 18 Oct 2013 - 01:25 AM, said:<p>Hello Sunset Sparkle! You're so cute!*hug*

I most likely screwed something up due to the fact that my tablet is at work here. heh.

Hi! I'm Pinkie Pie! I am just itching to answer your questions! But they can't be BO-O-ORING! Duh! But I 'm gonna answer a random question that I came up with a while ago. My favorite number on a scale of one to magenta on the map is pomegranate! That is a question that'll solve mysteries! So start askin' me stuff! I'm outta questions!

OH IT'S SO CUTE. C'mere Flutters, you need a hug. And a laugh. Here Flutters.. *Fluttershy, don't you cry. Ple-e-ease be happy! Fluttershy, don't you cry, my songs are really scrappy!!*

I'm so nervous. I suck at using my computer to draw so I snapshotted it and I'm uploading this from my Tablet. Anyways, I drew some Fluttershy xOC fanart, so... enjoy

If it's bad, please don't point it out. I know I am not a very good artist. So um, yeah.

 

FILLER BACKSTORY: Fluttershy fell in love with Galaxydust moments after they met. She was excited and very nervous the pictured day, and afterwards, chuckled and a small hug was shared. ^w^ I tried.

Ohhhhhh, I wanted to join with my OC , Soaring Heart, SO BAD!!!!! Awww.

Last video game I beat.... Pokemon White. I owned that game. Yeah, it was fun. But I played every hour, so.....

Yeah, but speeeeaaaking of Pokemon....

She arrived at the treehouse and headed towards her computer. She flicked it on and began to read fanfictions. She loved reading them. They made everything about a television show or book better. She flicked the monitor off. Sunset went into Twilight's room. She was fast asleep. The young girl creeped past her door and into her room. Someone else was in the treehouse, but she didn't pay much attention. She walked into her room, lay on her bed, and closed her eyes.

Sunset Sparkle jogged through her neighborhood. Leaves scattered the ground as a result of a storm that had happened the other night. She was a young girl, 10 years old. Sunset hopped over puddles and whistled to herself, dragging her fingers through her red hair (like human red). She pulled her MP3 player out of her pocket and turned it on.

Um, can I be a hero? I'm young, but my big sis Twilight taught me well. My OC looks like Sunset Shimmer, but with amber eyss and a sunset cutie mark.

Hello and welcome Sunset . Your username reminds me of Sunset Shimmer who is one of my favorite characters, so that's pretty cool. How long have you been into MLP? What's your favorite episode?

 

In any case, hope you decide to stick around for a while and feel free to ask somebody if you're confused about anything

Answers: Since it came out (the show) and... Too Many Pinkie Pies. Haha! That one generated some laughs ThNks for your support, it's nice. Other forums hate me cause I'm new, but I can move on! :L

Welcome aboard Sunset Sparkle! Please do come in, make yourself at home, and have some fun!

 

Wow, you're a pegasister, a Twilight Sparkle fan, and you've got an adorable Sunset Shimmer avatar to boot. I like you already.

Ha! I love this forum! Thanks, and I always enjoy cheerful members!

Here's something funny.

Thank you Galaxian! hope you get your cutie mark too! It's people like you that make me feel welcome.

Hi, I'm Twilight's little sister. She told me about this site, so I'm gonna try to earn my cutie mark and some friends!

 

Favorite Pony: Twilight Sparkle!

Favorite Color: Orangey red

Friends: Scootaloo, Sweetie Belle, Apple Bloom

 

That episode was my FAVORITE! And you thought Pinkie was silly before..... PINKIE IN HER PRIME!!!!!

 

CHARACTER MINIMUM MADNESS:

I wonder what would happen if I threw muffins into the Mirror Pool?

Omg I love that episode. The funniest part was when Pinkie said "Betcha can't make a face like...this!" Pinkie always cheers me up.

Best part ever! Gen 3 FTW!!! XD

CHARACTER MINIMUM MADNESS:

I wonder what Twi's gen 3 counterpart would look like... Man, now I wanna see that. Aw well.

 

 

SunsetxTwilight BSF (best sisters forever)

Ehhhhhh, I didn't really like it, a lot of subplots that resolve within seconds, (EG, when Brad finds the photos in the trash,) and it made no sense to me. I guess Hasbro looked at the toys and made it a movie. In 4 days.

I, personally, don't think Twi's friends should be become Alicorns. I know Hasbro wants new toys on the market, but add new characters! Don't tweak the old ones... I love em senseless the way they are. I am against Twi's friends becoming alicorns.