Foxx

10/10

Haha, I'm right there with you on the young artist thing(I'm a mere 13 myself). Anyways, this is a stunning style. The prominence of the bone and muscle makes for a style that resembles a real horse which I am very fond of. The ears are very cute and expressive, so a round of applause for that. The eyes are a good size and shape and I love that large, stylized tear duct. Those eyebrows remind me of Spirit, and can help give your character a lot of expression so another well done on that aspect. Now for the, err, not so positives... The highlights on her hair are a bit nonsensical. If you are going to make her mane shiny, keep in mind the direction of which the light is coming from. Here the shiny areas are place willy nilly, but with some work, they could be very effective in making the hair pop. The curls in the mane are a bit off. This bit would best be explained with some visual aids so hop on over to that spoiler to check it out. I spend a lot of time around and riding horses and I have come to known their anatomy fairly well. That chest juts in weirdly, which would be a life-threatening characteristic on a real horse as it would leave no room for the heart and lungs. I hope this has helped you and I look forward to seeing more art from you! Stay Foxxy!

4/10

Makes me think of ninetales.

Yum! Noodles?

Where to start? This little guy is freaking adorable! I've always had a thing for bunnies... Sorrysorrysorrysorrysorrysorrysorrysorrysorrysorrysorry That's all I can think of right now, but I'm sure there's more.

I'm feeling bored, sprinkled with general sickness. It's really a party round these parts :okiedokielokie:

I plop myself down in the seat across from the little mare cheerily.I murmured. Sunlight glinted off the glossy, polished tabletop. I raised. a hoof to my chin. "That's funny, I don't think I caught your name" I murmured. That's weird, I could have sworn she'd told me in the street...

Ok, I'm going to try and get on these requests

I trot down Greens street with a bounce in my step. I honestly wasn't all that excited about hearing about the mare's life as a scribe,I was more interested in the mare herself. I approached the restaurant, the vague silhouette of the mare visible. I give an over-enthusiastic wave and grin from ear to ear.

I turned around and headed off, secretly hoping tommorow would come. I won't deny it, something about that mare caught my eye. Perhaps it was her shy demure, that wisp of mysteriousness or her plain adorableness, I wasn't going to let a chance like this slip away.

"I'll meet you there!" I say merrily. I glance around, realizing we had come to a complete standstill in a busy crowd. "I'll get out of your mane now, I have to run a few errands," I smile before trotting off with a spring in my step. OOC: Really sorry for the late replies , I've been really busy lately

I smile, happy that she'd taken my request. It was ever so kind of her, considering how busy she must be. "Great! Perhaps we can meet up at the restaurant on Greens street," I pause. "What's the name again, erm, ah! That's right, Union," I chuckle. "How's tomorrow sound to you?"

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