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The entire scene changed before Luna and Kenzie. THe sky turned dark and thunder started to rumble. Luna muttered a few curse words.

She turned to Kenzie with sad eyes, "I am sorry. BUt your time... is up."

Kenzie's mouth was agape. "WHAT?! But Prince-"

Luna interrupted her, "I know i know. You shouldve went back when she asked you. Celestia isnt the one to keep you thinking about something for so long."

Kenzie had tears streaming down her cheeks, "Please! Take me back PLEASE! I beg you!"

Luna smiled sadly, "I am sorry. Celestia is the only one with the power to. I must go before she finds me."

With that Luna disappeared in the leaving Kenzie crying alone in the field. She looked that the screen to see her body breath out. Her heart started to ache really bad. She placed her hoof on her chest. Normal... slower... faint... none....

Dead.

Kenzie turned away from the screen and started to play with some of the flowers. She tossed her green dyed hair (which was slowly turning blonde) and sighed. She looked at the screen to see FF hugging her. She felt bad for nearly dying. She just told her she wouldnt leave her like her mom did. Ace was in no good shape either. His cheeks tear stained and his eyes red and puffy.

"Sad isnt it?" A voice came from behind startling Kenzie a bit. She turned around to see princess Luna.

"Princess." Kenzie said bowing respectfully.

Luna laughed, "No time for that. I'm just here to talk."

Kenzie smiled and nodded. Luna was focused on the screen, "Love really is something isnt it?"

Kenzie laughed, "I guess... But I dont think he likes me."

Luna turned to her, "But you like him?"

Kenzie blushed making Luna laugh. Luna cleared her throat, "Okay okay. I'm giving you this moment to go back. You know what happens when you say no right?"

Kenzie nodded. Luna smiled, "Okay. So... Whats your decision."

"I'm going back."

"I-It's all my fualt.......I-I-I couldn't protect her........It's all my fualt....." Ace cried. He sat there crying his eyes out next to her. He had not cried like this ever since his wife left at the same time his mother died. 

"I-I'm so sorry K-kenzie........I-I-..." He cried more. He didn't know that she could see and hear everything that was going on. 

"I-I...." He said. He could barely choke out words now. He just contined crying.

Princess Celestia left a few minutes ago leaving Kenzie to watch as Ace cried. She felt bad for him. Sure, pony heaven sounded like a good idea but she cant bear watching Ace cry. After his wife left him... Yeah.. She sighed and started to sing a lullaby hoping it would reach him and comfort him.

"Deep in the meadow, under the willow 

A bed of grass, a soft green pillow 

Lay down your head, and close your sleepy eyes 

And when again they open, the sun will rise. 

Here it's safe, here it's warm 

Here the daisies guard you from every harm 

Here your dreams are sweet and tomorrow brings them true 

Here is the place where I love you. 

Deep in the meadow, hidden far away 

A cloak of leaves, a moonbeam ray 

Forget your woes and let your troubles lay 

And when again it's morning, they'll wash away. 

Here it's safe, here it's warm 

Here the daisies guard you from every harm 

Here your dreams are sweet and tomorrow brings them true 

Here is the place where I love you. 

Here is the place where I love you. 

Deep in the meadow, hidden far away 

A cloak of leaves, a moonbeam ray 

Forget your woes and let your troubles lay 

And when again it's morning, they'll wash away. 

Here it's safe, here it's warm 

Here the daisies guard you from every harm 

Here your dreams are sweet and tomorrow brings them true 

Here is the place where I love you."

She blinked away a tears that was threatening to fall. Should she go back?

BRONYISM WHOOOHOOOOO XD

Kenzie woke up with the sun glaring in her eyes... WAIT THE SUN?! They were somewhere in the throne room... She sat up and looked at her surroundings. WHAT?! She was in a field. Grass.... grass.... lake... flowers.... grass... grass... Princess Celestia... tree... tree... wait...

"Princess Celestia!" Kenzie shouted flying over to her.

Princess Celestia smiled, "Hello Mackenzie Bolt. How are you today?"

Kenzie shrugged, "Okay i guess.... Except for the fact i dont know where I am."

Celestia chuckled, "You havent figured it out huh?"

Realization hit Kenzie, "IM DEAD?!"

Celestia shook her head, "No you're not. You have a choice though. You can be free from all the trotters and live here in Pony Heaven or go back down there."

Kenzie blinked, "Uhm can I ask a question? Where are you and the other princesses?"

Celestia smiled, "I cannot tell you. But only when you truly need us."

Kenzie smiled "Oh okay. Answering your question... I cant really decide... Can I um stay here before I made my decision?" Celestia nodded, "Sure take your time... but not too much... Otherwise they'll leave you behind."

Kenzie looked at her confused. "Who will."

Celestia created a projector-ish screen in front of them. Ace was crying next to her body which was on a bed. "Them."

Kenzie gulped down a lump in her throat. "I see..."

Hello! Welcome to the forums! Hope you have a fun time here!

Those three look nice! Especially the second and third one!

never and never will. i bet somepony has committed suicide because of the stupid game.

"So you are my mommy or not?" She asked. She was hopelessly confused. Her dad was just staring at Kenzie and both of their faces where red. She didn't fully understand parents.

"Is it hot in here or something? Cause you to are red." She saThey just blushed harder.

"M-maybe we should change the topic." Ace said.

"But you didn't answer me!" Forest said to Kenzie.

Kenzie blinked, "Uh, er... Forest Fire okay.. Um.. Listen. I'm not your mommy. Okay?" FF (forest fire)'s eyes saddened. Kenzie chuckled, "But like I've said before. I'd love too." FF was about to say something before being interrupted by gunfire. Kenzie turned to the group, "RUN!" Just then she felt an exploding pain on her side. She gasped and started breathing heavily. SHe looked down to see a bleeding bullet wound. She started at Ace with tears falling down her cheeks before blacking out.

Ace stared at her in awe and disbelief. When he realized what he was doing he quickly looked away,

"I-I'm sorry." He said. He tried not to make eye contact because he didn't want to freak her out again.

ForestFire just looked at them curiously. She had no Idea what was going on.

Kenzie looked at Ace and smirked, "Take a picture, it'll last longer." Forestfire was still looking at them curiously. Kenzie wondered what she was thinking about. She just told her that she'd love to be her mom... Kenzie wondered what happened to Ace's wife...

Here you go! Sorry I made him look a bit angry? I don't know, I've never really tried drawing masks on ponies before. 

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There you go I ended up using pencils to color her because I don't really have any light pink markers

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Okay, done. Sorry, I didn't really have the right color for his mane but I hope you like it

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Alright, here she is It was a little hard to figure out what the back of the mane was since it was hidden behind her wings in the picture, but I went with a braid. I hope that's okay. 

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Done. So, in the non-creator picture he was working on something so I kind of gave him a cool little lock box thing to be showing off, hope that's okay. 

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omg thank you so much! im going to use it for my ocs pic

"I wanna help!" ForestFire said.

"Honey you can help by staying with us and not getting hurt. I lost you once, I'm not loosing you again." Ace said.

"But daddy I-"

"No buts! I want you safe and the only way I can do that is keeping an eye on you." He said.

"Ok...." She said dissapointed. She looked to Kenzie trying to help Ace walk outside.

"So are you my mommy now?" She asked. "Because if you are,please don't leave like my old mommy. Daddy was sad for a long time."

Ace was majorly blushing now.

"That's enough Forest." "You don't have to answer her if you don't want to." He told Kenzie quietly.

Kenzie blushed and looked at the tiny filly in front of her. She looked at ace "its okay" she turned to forest fire "im not your mother..." The fillys eyes saddened. Kenzie smiled "but i would love be your mom." ace was blushing like mad and staring at her. Creepy

Kenzie swooped down out of nowhere shooting the trotters with a gun she found awhile ago. When all the trotters are dead she landed next to ace and gasped when she saw the cut. "Oh my celestia..." She grabbed a bandage roll and fixed him up. "You should really sto hurting yourself" she said laughing

"I'm glad your ok." He said before hugging her. His amulet stopped glowing. Forest fire walked over and joined the hug. 

"I'm glad your both alright......." He said hugging them tightly. 

(Put her reaction hug first, then reply to this next part)

He let go and remembered they were still in danger.

"C'mon. We have to find Shadow and Rye."

Kenzie was blushing from the hug. She was hating her flaming cheeks at the moment. She walked alongside ace and forest fire. Forest fore seemed to be a sweet little filly. Its sad hat she has to grow up in this kind of environment... Horrible. "Where do you think those two went?"

Ace heard her screams and told Forest fire to hide. He walked out and saw her tackled with a knife to her throat. He raged. His amulet lightly glowed as his eyes changed to bright red. he charged at the pony with his sword. The pony looked behind him, but it was to late for him and in three swipes, the pony was no more. Ace panted and turned around and dropped the sword. He ran over to her and helped her up.

"Are you alright?" He asked with deep concern.

Kenzie stared at him in shock "oh my celestia... YOUR PENDANT- but... Power- uhm thanks..." Kenzie blushed a bit in the end. "How's forest fire?" She asked him. She saw the filly peeking out from a column. She looked at the unconscious pony laying beside her. Awesome pendant mehn!

"What?" He asked. He turned and saw the terribe scene. He raged.

"Don't..........Touch...........HER!" He yelled.

Fullbright looked over to him.

"Well,well,well. I knew you'd come back for her. And it looks like you even found a mare friend." He said.

"Daddy!" Forestfie said.

"Shutup!" Fullbright said. 

Ace was about to charge at him, but Kenzie held him back.

"Get you hooves OFF my daughter!" He yelled.

He broke from Kenzie's grasp and tackled Fullbright Pinning him to the ground with his sword pinned against his kneck.

"You decieved our family.....spat on our mother's grave.....left our father to die....and tried to kill my daughter! You have no more chances left!" Ace said about to slit his brother's throat.

Fulbright smiled a devilish grin.

"you won't kill me infront of them. Your too WEAK!"

Ace slit his throat and got off of him.

"Like I said....out of chances." He turned back to Kenzie and ForestFire. He ran over, picked her up and held her in a hug.

"Forest....I was so worried." He said with tears in his eyes.

She hugged him tightly and burried her face in his shoulder crying.

Ace looked to kenzie and mouthed the words,

'Thank you.'

Kenzie smiled and nodded leaving the tent for a private family time. She set out to find rue and shadow. She heard cans move from behond her. She turned around and looked if there was anypony... None. She continued walking. Then something out of nowhere tackled her to the ground with a knife pointed at her. She screamed, "ACE HELP!"

Yes, I will get started on that right away ^^ Just one question, do you want it with or without the cloak?

Sure thing ^^ Do you want her flying? Or just on the ground?

Alright I might not be able to upload the picture until tomorrow though. 

ground is fine ^^

Thanks! I'm not actually a full-fledged ninja yet, so I don't know many tricks. But I'm sure I'll learn them someday!

you have to teach me and scootalove when you become a full ninja k? 

If theres going to be another EG Hasbro should make a different plot. Maybe if the human mane 6 goes to equestria and the pony mane 6 goes to the human world. Theyll struggle into their new surroundings and i think seeing rarity panic and over react will be hilarious XD

Twilight Sparkle looks like a hobo XD

Those drawings are nice! (better than i could draw) can you try drawing my OC Kenzie Bolt please? Link is in my signature

Hello! Welcome to the forums! AMG  NINJA! I would love to be a ninja with all dem tricks

Kenzie and Ace walked in a hallway. Up ahead Kenzie can make out the shape of tents. Kenzie turned to Ace, "Tents up ahead." Kenzie walked slowly and quietly and searched some tents. Seemed like nopony was there. She heard a sniffle that seemed like it came from a foal. She went in and saw a yellow filly with orange hair and blue eyes.... And somepony was holding a knife up to her neck.... "Ace?" Kenzie started.

Nope! ^^ Never told them. If I did they wouldnt know what mlp is so why tell them XD

Kenzie nodded and stayed close behind Ace. She saw the others doing the same. They went in the throne room as quiet as possible. "Let's split up guys I go up north. you guys... well do your thing." Kenzie whispered to the group. She slowly went north scanning her surroundings.