PeacefulStarlight

This is a poem I wrote and wanted to share. Please, be cruel. I don't mean that in a "tell-me-it-sucks" sort of way. But if there is something you don't like, tell me. I want to be a serious writer someday. I need to know how to take criticism. It is a little dark. Viewer desecration is advised. --- Cut open his head To see all the dead That he has been dreaming about To find about her So we can assure We all have nothing to shout Along with the dead Inside of his head Hus treasured memory found A beautiful lass On shatters of glass Broken, face down, on the ground With cannibal mind He's sure to bind Her ankles and wrists to the floor And as she pleads Continues to bleed Wishing that she was no more "You've got what you want Please, no more taunt!" She tries to get through to his head "It's you that I love Until you are above But to me, you are already dead"

1-My husband and I are going to dinner and then walk around town. Gonna probably get ice cream. And then come home to our little filly and watch some MLP. 2-I don't do romantic things. It makes me uncomfortable. 3-See answer to #1. 4- He is my best friend. He is funny and sweet.

My Favourite Mane 6 Pony: Rainbow Dash How did you find MLP Forums?: Google. How you became a fan of My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic: My neighbor originally showed me the show to make fun of it. Needless to say, his plan backfired because now I love it. There isn't to much to tell. I am PeacefulStarlight. I'm married, have a little filly, and obviously love MLP. My all time favorite pony is Derpy. Um. Yeah. Anything else, feel free to ask.