Astral Blitzen

May you draw her evil looking and wearing a witch's hat?

Sage Leaf 

She wears a black witch hat

Ugh! Not again. I've posted in three threads like this and no one has reviewed my oc's yet, agh!

 

 yez

I didn't forget. I'm just... lazy. And you put a ton of instructions in there... I will get to it, though 

Its just a lot of links xD

Nope, this thread is not dead.

It seems like every time I post in one of these oc review threads they die out, like blue dash's thread for example.

So, I'm guessing this thread is officially dead.

Er...I don't really know what's going on here, but if the idea is to make some suggestions about how to come up with a unique OC, then I'm happy to throw my 2 cents in.

 

To make your OC a truly original character, try the following:

 

1. Make them something other than a pony

2. For the love of Celestia, no alicorns

3. No self-inserts

4. Don't make them the 7th member of the Mane 6

5. Don't make them compulsively dark, mopey, or cool

6. Associate them with a different part of Equestria with limited or no contact with the canon main characters

7. Don't make them look like this:

 

 

 

Now go forth, young brony, and make an original original character! 

Wut, I wasn't going on about that XD I was talking about having an oc category on the forums.

Omfg I love technical death metal!!! : D Welcome!!!

Ughhhh I hope my oc's get reviewed unlike in the last two or three threads >

http://i.imgur.com/TQsWxAM.png

http://i.imgur.com/I2gsMj0.jpg

http://i.imgur.com/ZytvgdZ.jpg

 

http://i.imgur.com/TVL5GWKh.jpg

 

http://i.imgur.com/bfky3R3l.jpg

 

And this is Leopold http://i.imgur.com/ztauVU4l.jpg

 

I changed the blue maned pony's cutie mark to a chair and whip from the collar and bone, but Idk which suits her more.

 

 

And this is sage leaf

 

http://i.imgur.com/KoiYNqz.jpg

 

http://i.imgur.com/r1WJXJy.jpg

 

Um here ^.^ you go, I hope you like them ><

 

Sorry, had to fix one of the links.

Except for some special oc's for some of us have,yeah you know what I'm talking about  :okiedokielokie:

Are you talking about alicorn oc's?

Astral Blitzen (mare/pegasus) 

http://i.imgur.com/TQsWxAM.png

http://i.imgur.com/I2gsMj0.jpg

http://i.imgur.com/ZytvgdZ.jpg

(She doesn't have sharp teeth btw)

Some corrections and details: 

Her tail touches the ground in length and is slightly unkempt (a little but shorter than Fluttershy's). 

Her eyes are shadowed like .mov fluttershy x3

Her pupils are a bright blue, not black.

Her cutiemark is the chair and whip and not the collar and dogbone.

Surprise me with the pose (she usually wears a top hat and tux, but do what you please x3

 

Astral Blitzen (mare/pegasus) http://i.imgur.com/TQsWxAM.pnghttp://i.imgur.com/I2gsMj0.jpg http://i.imgur.com/ZytvgdZ.jpg

(She doesn't have sharp teeth btw)

Some corrections and details: 

Her tail touches the ground in length and is slightly unkempt (a little but shorter than Fluttershy's). 

Her eyes are shadowed like .mov fluttershy x3

Her pupils are a bright blue, not black.

Her cutiemark is the chair and whip and not the collar and dogbone.

Surprise me with the pose (she usually wears a top hat and tux, but do what you please x3

Oops, didn't mean to repost

Since discussions etc. about oc's seem to pretty popular on this forum, I was thinking that we should have an oc category for the forums. Some rather broad subcategories I thought of are...

General oc discussion

Oc art?

The ask an oc could be moved here, as well as the character database?

Oc review and critiquing and help/advice

Really, no replies?! Someone reply D:

Astral Blitzen (mare/pegasus)

http://i.imgur.com/TQsWxAM.png

http://i.imgur.com/I2gsMj0.jpg

http://i.imgur.com/ZytvgdZ.jpg

(She doesn't have sharp teeth btw)

Some corrections and details:

Her tail touches the ground in length and is slightly unkempt (a little but shorter than Fluttershy's).

Her eyes are shadowed like .mov fluttershy x3

Her pupils are a bright blue, not black.

Her cutiemark is the chair and whip and not the collar and dogbone.

Surprise me with the pose (she usually wears a top hat and tux, but do what you please x3

I guess you forgot about me :|

Hi!!1!!1 Welcome to the forums , you better *ahem* I mean I hope you enjoy your stay and fun.

http://i.imgur.com/TQsWxAM.png

http://i.imgur.com/I2gsMj0.jpg

http://i.imgur.com/ZytvgdZ.jpg

http://i.imgur.com/TVL5GWKh.jpg

http://i.imgur.com/bfky3R3l.jpg

And this is Leopold http://i.imgur.com/ztauVU4l.jpg

I changed the blue maned pony's cutie mark to a chair and whip from the collar and bone, but Idk which suits her more.

And this is sage leaf

http://i.imgur.com/KoiYNqz.jpg

http://i.imgur.com/r1WJXJy.jpg

Um here ^.^ you go, I hope you like them ><

Hi, welcome!!! I hope you have a good time here (and be nice to Koukatsu, he's a little sensitive).

Hai, moo, welcome to zee forums und stuff, I hope you *inhales deeply* HAVE FUN HERE!

Astral Blitzen (mare/pegasus) 

http://i.mgur.com/TQsWxAM.png

http://i.imgur.com/I2gsMj0.jpg

http://i.imgur.com/ZytvgdZ.jpg

(She doesn't have sharp teeth btw)

Some corrections and details: 

Her tail touches the ground in length and is slightly unkempt (a little but shorter than Fluttershy's). 

Her eyes are shadowed like .mov fluttershy x3

Her pupils are a bright blue, not black.

Her cutiemark is the chair and whip and not the collar and dogbone.

...and she has a lover named Sage Leaf i.imgur.com/KoiYNqz.jpg Sage Leaf

(they're both mares btw.

Could you draw them holding/cuddling each other under a tree?

(Sage is wearing a witch's hat and Astral is in her tux and top hat )

The dragonborn is f*cked... xD

Lol I wouldn't say that xD with him being about 6ft tall and not a huge dragon lol

Mordecai and Rigby. Whether it be bromance or romance, they'd make a really cute couple xD

I do like g3 spike a lot. He's really smexy >///< imo. In one episode, btw, he said he wanted to be a princess or something.

Not too exciting, I think.

Not too exciting, I think.

Thanks a lot for the brohoof ^^

Any feedback at all is appreciated.

Astral Blitzen (mare/pegasus) 

http://i.mgur.com/TQsWxAM.png

http://i.imgur.com/I2gsMj0.jpg

http://i.imgur.com/ZytvgdZ.jpg

(She doesn't have sharp teeth btw)

Some corrections and details: 

Her tail touches the ground in length and is slightly unkempt (a little but shorter than Fluttershy's). 

Her eyes are shadowed like .mov fluttershy x3

Her pupils are a bright blue, not black.

Her cutiemark is the chair and whip and not the collar and dogbone.

Surprise me with the pose (she usually wears a top hat and tux, but do what you please x3

hm well i dont really se a different O.o

What I addedd a little more

Um here is an updated version and ty

hey its not bad! You need more practice on this style like adds more details maybe? but its really original idea !