Astral Legend

Oh, sorry. Keep doing that, it's not because I keep forgetting about it but because I always seem to update this character when I'm half asleep. About the thing about talking to the moon, I thought about it but I'm sure that no one could hear him actually talking to it, can they? He no longer does it, just when he was living by himself in the cave for a while. While he has heard the story about Princess Luna becoming Nightmare Moon,. not everypony has to be afraid of Nightmare Moon or as an extension, Princess Luna  do they? After all, it's still Princess Luna. The only thing he doesn't know is that she's no longer Nightmare Moon and since he sleeps during the day and stay awake during the night, he never would've heard about it since he's usually alone. But if the line about him coming to Ponyville after Nightmare Moon is a problem then I can change that. I don't want to exactly change the part about him talking to the moon but I can change about him wanting Luna to hear him. That wouldn't be a problem.

Hello,

OC characters are unable to have relationships with cast characters. Although he decides not to attend, even speaking with Celestia, and being accepted into the School for Gifted Unicorns wouldn't be viable. Also, your character in its current state is too powerful. In Magical Mystery Cure, Princess Celestia states that Twilight created new magic which was "extraordinary". While Starswirl was able to create new magic, quoted at having created over 200 new spells, there hasn't been a unicorn since with anywhere near as much power. At this point your character is more powerful than Twilight Sparkle, who because of her understanding of friendship, along with the spell of Starswirl the Bearded became a princess. 

 

Finally, exact ages of ponies isn't allowed. We don't know how long ponies currently live, so guessing ages is near impossible. 

Right then, I got'cha. I completely understand, I can change some of that. Guess I just wanted to do something just a bit different but at least now I got a second opinion. Maybe now I can shape him up. Though I didn't mean to make him as strong as Twilight because actually he's not as I made him out to be.  The spells he makes are simple spells. Not really something you can call powerful though already existing spells he uses in different ways than most unicorns that use magic. Really, it's more about imagination than his magic power. I'll change what I have to. Sorry for the trouble, it's my first time making a character such as this so feedback like this is appreciated.