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  1. Fallen Valkyrie

    Private Following the Dream

    OOC: https://mlpforums.com/topic/144941-following-the-dream/?p=4305321 Following the Dream Chapter I Gathering Storm It was sunny day on the east coast of Equestria when the journey of our hero wannabe's started.Each of our 'heroes' comed to this small town of Oturna,because of diferent reason.Some came here because they looked for money,some looked for fun and some looked for knowledge.Yes,all they joined this journey for a diferent reason,but all had same goal.To see what truly is Deverol is hiding. It was a noon when our wannabe's reached the docks of Oturna.It was one slow day on docks,and so there were not many ponys around it today,mostly of population on docks were colts playing around.There were lot of ships in the docks,most of the ships were trader ships,thet had the flag of Equestria,there were couple of battle ships,with no flag so our wannabe's could not realy know to who they belong.But on the end,on far south there was one smaller ship,thet did not looked like it had flyed true the waters onces,and it name was Wolfhound. On closer inspetion it looked like this ship,was noting more then another trader ship as it did not had anny wepons to defend it self on the open sea.
  2. Fallen Valkyrie

    Private Following the Dream

    Our two litle adventurers started following the pony dressed in red and couple of priest. The group walked true the great city nonchalantly, they did not look suspisous but clearly the maiden in red was a centar of attention, and when ever she speaks the priests would have smile or laugh. As they walk they did not look too much out of ordinary for this city, but from time to time some creature would turn atound amd look at them, maybie because they would recognize the Hero, or maybie just because of the red maidens beautifull look. Our little adventurers did not have trouble following there target in this surrounding. After some what of a boring follow, the red maiden and the priests arrived at barracks, were most praises bowed and started heading back the road they came, passing by our litle adventurers. The red maiden, Jacky, and the prises walked passed a guard at the entrance and desapired inside the walled off section of the city.
  3. Fallen Valkyrie

    Private Following the Dream

    And so our litle adventurers got comfortable in the cafe across the great church of Ruvenhain and have started to wait. About an hour and a half later, true the city rang the bells of chruch and the might wooden dore opened, and from the churche emerged the great "Hero" dressed in beautiful red dress, with one black lantern encrusted with couple of white gems, the "Hero's" hair was short and orange with small burn marks on its ends. The "Hero" had dignified aura surounding her and on the frst, and prety much second look this could have been some one un known pony, but to our litle adventurers it was Jacky. She was surounded by couple of priest, and by looks of it they were escorting her some were up east.
  4. Fallen Valkyrie

    Private Following the Dream

    There was nothing overly interesting in the goships to be heared in this cafe, even do it had more then half of tables, creature did not talk about something overly usefull thet would help our little adventurers in there quest. There was mostly small talk betwene groups of usuly two creature (of same race), for the matter of fact there were not a single table thet had two or more creature of diferent race. This could maybie be because of something church was teaching or it could have just been thet Flearia walked in here in bad time. Flearia got her Late relatively quickly, it was a bit on the pricier side but thet was to be expected as this cafe was quait close to the church and was always quait full. If our little adventurers wished to sit in the cafe, they would find thet there were couple of tables free mostly ones outside but there were also some free on the inside of the cafe.
  5. Fallen Valkyrie

    Private Following the Dream

    Indus opened his ears, and cleared his mindin hope of hearing annything about the "Hero" thet they think its Jacky. He heared a lot of different things, great majority of it was just things about the religion this church spread in Ruvenhain, there were many legends of pagan gods there were conquered by the "The One" before he raised the church and showed the true path evryone should follow. He also heared a bit about how creatures live here. He heared soft whispers about how the church rulles evrything from the shadows, ptobably soft and silent as the ones talking did not want to be heared by the priests. There was also creatures on the opposite side of the spectrum thet talked about how the church is makeing Ruvenhain prosper. But in the mitts of all this charter he also heared something about the "hero" and how he is currently in the church accompanying the arch priests. So if they would like to see this "Hero" there best guess would be to be patient, but the question is for how long they will need to be patient...
  6. Fallen Valkyrie

    Private Following the Dream

    And with thet our little adventurers moved true the small street's and cramped side streeta of Ruvenhain. After around fifteen minutes of walking the masive white churche appered in front of our heroes. From our heroes point of view church was so tall it chalinged the sun it self. If out little adventurers are to look around they would find out thet they are in some sort of a centar of the city, and unlike at the trading part of the city here there were much less shops, but thos who were there were not street shop but much classier and luxuries shops in the buildings. There were also quait a lot of taverns and restoran were creatures would be able to sit down and eat or sleep. Around here there was a bit less diferent tipes of creatures and place was filed with creatures wearing pure as snow white robs, they were probably part of the churche.
  7. Fallen Valkyrie

    Private Following the Dream

    White one flapped her wingsand raised her right one and pointed it tiwered the one alley on the left side of our litle adventurers. "If you go true thet alley, and on second one make right and then...er....I think 4th left. You should be in front of the church."
  8. Fallen Valkyrie

    Private Following the Dream

    "You did not heared?!" Dragon started this time "The hero saved an entire village down south from fire..." The white one continued "It was glories, in the midle of the night a fire started and before annyone could do annything it spread all over the village. But luckly The Hero was there and she saved evry one." Black one continued from this point "If you are realy thet eager to return thet to her, she should be with arch priest some were around the church."
  9. Fallen Valkyrie

    Private Following the Dream

    Closest group to Flearia was not realy thet big, it were three creatures (one was white pony like creature with white glowy eyes and white wings, second was almost its oposite, it had dark as coal skin with dark black eyes and black wings. And the 3th creature was an green dragon). Creature looked among them self after Flearia said the description of the Jacky, and the white one started "I dont know about 'red coat' but the great hero is from a pony race and she has red mane, and is always dresed is red...." But before white one could contineu, black one cut in front with its words "Why do you look for this "red mane and coat" pony creature?"
  10. Fallen Valkyrie

    Private Following the Dream

    Guard spit on the flore after Inuds and Flearias responded and with out a word moved to allowed them entrance into the city of Ruvenhain. After couple of seconds of walking true the dark hallways thet conected two sides of the wall, they finaly glanced at the beautifull city of Ruvenhain. This city was so huge thet even on the horizont, all our heroes could see were houses, and in the midle of all of em was an beautifull white church, it was quait tall and its roof chalinged the skyes them selfs. If our heroes wouod look for something to buy, they would sure find it here. By looks of it, our heroes entered true the merchant's entrance and they found them self surounded by big and small street shopa ad behaind them were all kaid of shop keepers, from a snake like creatures true the bird persons, and all the way even to ponys. Same as outaide, creature around this shop districts were talking about some great heroe who araived from distante land.
  11. Fallen Valkyrie

    Private Following the Dream

    "And I am looking for lady on the white horse, but guess what." Guard started "I dont know were both of them are." Then he proceeded to pull an paper from his bag "For entering the city il need both of your signatures here."
  12. Fallen Valkyrie

    Private Following the Dream

    As our two adventurers got closer to the gates, they could see a lot of diferent creatures. There was an creature thet walked on two legs and had a pair of dark as coal wings on there back, there was an small blue creature with something thet looked like a flower on its head, also there was an creature a bit taller then our creature and it resembled a dragon. At the dores there were couple of guards in full golden armor, this two guards were a bit smaller then our heroes but because they were in full armor our heroes could not see details of what race were they. As oir heroes got a bit closer, they could heared a cheater of thos who waited in front of our heroes. They were all talking about some warior send from heaven, and were talking about how they could not wait to see her.
  13. Fallen Valkyrie

    Private Following the Dream

    And with thet our liyle adventures are off for Ruvenhain. They did not stick aroud to wait for ther contact, and started to go down the road on there own. It was not hard to find there way around towered right direction as Ruvenhain is quait big and importent town. It was a week of travel over quait good road, they did see lot of un usual creature along the road but unlike deamon ponys they did not gave them much attention. Our litle adventurers arive at the big town of Ruvenhain, they are currently stending about 100 feet from the masive grey wall, this is probably the outer walls of Ruvehain is. Our heroes can not see nothing from the city becuase of the wall. Our little adventurers noticed a big gate, and a big line around it so thet was probably the entrance, but for them to notice annything more they would need to get closer.
  14. Fallen Valkyrie

    Private Following the Dream

    And with thet our litle adventurers were off to rest for the night. Night was mostly calm, only thing thet would from time to time happen was thet some litle critter would wonder in the cave our adventurers were occupying, but as doon as they wouod notice this they would run away. Morning came with soft, cold sun light from the outaide world. Snow was not falling, but the ground was still covered in litle layers of snow from days before. If our adventurers were to wait for a litle longer, there contact would probably show up, and if they did not want to wait and would want to find the town of Ruvenhain alone, the best bet for finding somethingon the main road. But the main round wouod probably need to be found frst.
  15. Fallen Valkyrie

    Blair Stealshout

    Blair Stealshout
  16. Fallen Valkyrie

    OOC Following the Dream ( OOC )

    @Queen Chrysalis Servant Yeh, I dont want to be offansive but what you linked me there is just couple of random images. It could just be to me and this new sistem, but still I had nothing to look there it was prety much an empty oc page. Your aplication is denied. I am truly sorry.
  17. Hello guys and gals,I am Primordus and I will be your gm for this rp. This rp is going to be action/advanture.I aim for this rp to be set on the newly discovered,unexplored island,thet is called Deverol by ponys from Equestria.This island is going to be home to diferent races and not just ponys (Pony town/village will be rare sight). ----------- This is how rp is going to start: Around Equestria there were put up a flyers,from one un known captain named Jack,about exploring this new island and reaching its treasure frst.Flyers were simply made and they did not said too much.On flyers was writen: -Join the journey in the unknown.Hunt a treasure on Deverol,become hero of Equestria. - After this there was one map to the small town on the east cost of Equestria,called Oturna.And name of a ship thet this hero wannabes need to find,name of the ship was Wolfhound. And rp will start in town of Oturna on the docks were Wolfhound is. ----------- If you are interested in joining.Here is sign up sheet: *Too strong oc will automatically be denied. Name: Race: OC page: What does your oc looks in this job: To become a Hero / Adventure / (Or if something 3th say it) Aceppted: 1.Professor Indus Moonquill. ---> Unicorncob 2.Summer Breeze ---> Summer Breeze 3.Flearia Dragondanser ----> Flearia Rp have started on : https://mlpforums.com/topic/145003-following-the-dream/ Rules of the RP: 1.Be active poster (Dont need to post everyday,but post inaf thet other's dont wait on you constantly) 2.Be polite (In OOC,in rp your oc can act how ever you like) 3.Godmodding is not alowed.(Duh) Ps Name of this rp may be changed
  18. Fallen Valkyrie

    Private Following the Dream

    Summer followed the others. The adventuring trio passed true the rift in the air with out anny problem. And soon they found them self in there relm onces again. As there eyes adjusted to this relm, after the pure darkness from the 'End of time' relm, the trio could noticed they were inside the same, empty cave they were before they got teleported to the other relm. By looks of it, it was still dark outside, so eather no time passed or they were away for an full day. But in anny case there was no sign of the saint Lamia talked about, so most likely he was on his way and our litle trio of adventurers should wait for them here, as he probably knowes about there current location and would not be able to find them so easly if they changed it. Most likely they wont araive at this location before morning so our litle trio had inaf time to get rested or prepare for what ever is about to happen after they meet up with 'Jacky' in the church city of Ruvenhain.
  19. Fallen Valkyrie

    Private Following the Dream

    "As I said..." Lamia voice sounded kaid as she started to speak "...one of the Saint will be dispached to assist you with the objective, and true the Saint you will be able to get in contact with Me." And as the Lamia stoped speaking, onces again an veil of silance fell on this small island in midle of no were. Lamia did not said annything more. But even so she looked at Flear, maybie expecting more question's (if there were anny) from the brain of this group of creature.
  20. Fallen Valkyrie

    Private Following the Dream

    Lamia nodded her head slowly as small pink creature and smart one describe the 'Jacky' person. Her short bloody red hair accompanied her gracefully, it moved in perfect synergy with evry nod of her head. After the smart one finished speaking, she closed her charcoal black eyes, she did not wait for the fool in this group to finish talking, maybie because the other two told her evrything she needed to know about 'Jacky' or, more likely, she did not care what this fool had to say. "Currently...." Lamia started slowly, with her eyes still closed "....the only creature with thos desription is stationed in the church city of Ruvenhain. But the creature with thos descripion is not named 'Jacky' , but there is a presence of a something thet looked like a spirit with it so I think this is the right creature." Lamia opened her eyes slowly, and as her black pupils becomed visible again she contineu "This creature is called 'Jessica Lotern', this creatures past does not have anny history changing, or treatning moments and so her history is not present in this relm. But I am supraised we also do not have annything about the spirit with this creature." Lamia fell silent for a moment, and before our litle adventurers could have done annything a loud thunder, the same one as before (when they were summoned to this Lamia's island) could be hear onces again. The portal appered on the same place behaind our adventurers. "I will relise you from this relm, but in exchange you will bring me this creature alive." but even with this 'relise' she gave our heroes, she did not move her tail anny were, they still had to pass over it if they wished to leave.
  21. Fallen Valkyrie

    OOC Following the Dream ( OOC )

    @silvermoon15000 Yeh, I dont realy belive your oc would fit in with the group or the story in general. So I am realy sorry to say but I will have to say no here. Also maybie a litle tip for your oc (I did not realy read evrything as oc page is still realy broken) write his personality litle diferently. Dont write "If you want to relate his personality with someone, it would have to be Yukio from Blue Exorcist..." as it realy does not give annything about his personality to annyone who did not read Blue Exorcist.
  22. Fallen Valkyrie

    Private Following the Dream

    As the Indus was speaking Lamia rolled her eyes, she did not like this 'hero' and she did not even tryed to hide it, maybie because she tought thet even if this small, close minded creature got mad, he would not been able to do annything. "Yehh..." She started, as this 'professor' did not gave the details she was looking for. Lamia continued, but looked at the other two creatures in the group as she was probably expecting thet the smarter, or maybie the one thet could not keep her mouth shot after starting to speak would give her beter answer then this one did "...I do need something more then thos pointers." Lamia asked her self 'why would this close minded creature reapeat the thing they told me minutes ago' but she quickly dismissed this tought because after all this creature was not realy importent. She contineued "I was looking for answers on this 'Jacky's' look and her behavior, also if posible give me something unique about her as in this world there is not realy just one 'Jacky'."
  23. Fallen Valkyrie

    OOC Following the Dream ( OOC )

    @Mysterious Way Because character you submitted has no backstory, and you did not wrote annything about it here, I am sorry to say but you are not accepted.
  24. Fallen Valkyrie

    Private Following the Dream

    "Only time can tell what is going to happen now, intentions of the void are beyond my reach." Lamia said, and ended with a short, almost undetecable sight. Moments later, after some short silance, she continued " I would not know what 'Jacky' would want to do, but there is no creature on this world who would simply set the world on fire just to see ashes. If I was to guess, I would put my money on greed." Lamia thinked for a moment then continued " If you would tell me evrything you know about this 'Jacky' i would be able to locate her wearabouts, and send an Saint to restrain her."
  25. Fallen Valkyrie

    OOC Following the Dream ( OOC )

    I will consult with others to see how they feel about having another player join the RP. I dont promise annything at this point, but will inform you probably with in next 12 hours. In the mean time could you tell us something about your oc's back story as in her oc page there is nothing