Treble Trouble

Everything was dark. Yes even darker then before. I could barley see in front of my own two hooves! It was crazy. There still was no leaves were I still lay. But whatever. I still look behind me to see if I still have my leaf around my wings. I did but I was still surprised by it being here though. It was almost like it was magic... But anyway I have come up with a plan I will find a kinda empty area and fly out of here. I know its not a very good plan. No plan B for me. Just one straight plan for me. I'd probably have to go to a tall tall hill. So I started to find one. The plan to find one was a straight one also. To walk straight and keep my eyes up. So I did. I found one after about fifteen minutes. But I't wasn't a hill it was a mountain. And a big one. I saw a large ledge about half way up the mountain. I got to about mid point. About twenty feet up. And that was hard because there is a tiny ledge. And it's no walk ways for pones. Then I felt a shift in the air. As if mother nature was warning me about something. The tiny ledge shifted under my feet. I couldn't prevent it. I quickly try to get my wings unwrapped. I couldn't do something once again. The rocks tugged at me. There was no smooth edges on this mountain. But the real pain didn't start until about ten feet of the ground. My half unwrapped right wing got caught on a rock. The pain tore all along my back and wing. But the pain didn't last for long after that because my wing got uncaught and I fell down the rest of the way and at the bottom I found peaceful bliss. You know why? Another dang rock knocked me out. I beliive this story is going good so far but I would like if you guys( people of MLP Forums) comment for me and tell me how you liked it or didn't like it.

All I can remember Is my name. And its not a very good one. I mean for me. It's Treble Trouble. That last part has me worried. I don't know why the trouble in the last part of that but oh well. I open my eyes to a scary looking forest. There is only dark things in sight. No vegetation ether. Just branches. I slowly get on to my hooves. I look behind me and see a frighting sight. I have wings! And the scary part is I know that I have a horn. But that's impossible. Only Luna can make pones alicorns. Or maybe its was Celestia. One of the two. The names are getting mixed up. But at least I can get names at all with my memories like this. I kept looking down at myself until I noticed my body figure. Its was a body of a pegasus not an alicorn. Then the bad thoughts came. I bet every one will hate you once they know. That your an alicorn. But I'm not. That's right you not even supposed to be in this world or any other for that matter. The ponies will laugh at you. And point hooves and stare. I know I'm not a confident person. This was making rethink things. What if that did happened? I haven't moved since I woke up. But the tummy growls got to me so I stated to walk in search for food. A half an hour later with no luck. I was still thinking of how other pones would treat me if they saw me. I knew I'd had to hide my wings. But there is nothing to cover them with. At that thought I searched wildly for some thing. I saw a flash of green while turning my head quickly. I wiped back around to see a large green leaf on the ground. "That's too weird. To find a giant leaf in the middle of a no pony land." I said out loud to my self. But I still went for it. I quickly and quietly rushed toward to leaf and raped it around my mid section. " Well no booby traps at lest." Again to my self. " Now for some much needed rest." I said with a yawn. And l rested right were I found the leaf. Well this is my first post on this web cite and I really liked talking about my own pony. You can also can find me on Deviant Art as 1234bronie Please comment if you liked this I'm new to this site and need to know if you guys like what I write. Please also tell me if you want more of Trebles story.