Voseerie

Hi again, Sorry for my late reply! Ive been rather busy im afraid I believe you are protected, however, im not too sure how copyright covers a brand when sequels are involved. So the Gen 5 Reboot might be a tricky path to travel until we have actual designs published. Since your copyright was published before gen 5 is released i think design wise you are okay regarding characters. But, hasbro might have certified designs by the team that are copyrighted that just havent been made public. Since Hasbro is a multi-billion dollar company they would definitely cross check designs before publishing anything and with your characters viewable on DA and elsewhere; im sure again you are fine. Woah 6 kids?! Amazing! I love kids <3 i hope to have 4 personally, im only 21 atm however so not for awhile I use procreate on ipad, still figuring everything out of course but ive done 2 'paintings' and a pony character design. It sounds like you have a beautiful view on the course you and your family are on, best of luck to you!

Hey Laurie; It sounds like you've done an insane amount of research and to that, i tip my hat to you! Ive gotten a sense of almost jealousy after reading how passionate and how serious you are about your artistic work something, in my opinion, is very hard to balance and for some artists impossible to make their talent and hobby into a career. Ive subscribed both to your youtube channel and watched you on DA, very interested in seeing more work from you. For your critique question "Do they look the same or stand out...?" As someone who knows MLP and draws them Yes, stye wise they look similar to gen 4 style MLP BUT i personally believe it is different enough to be considered unique and using your own words; "People are intelligent, they know the difference, to original creativity and a clone." Why i don't think you will have any issue is that Hasbro has not and can not copyright horses let alone horses that are rounder and brightly coloured. If i draw a red dog and colour it red does it mean ive drawn Clifford? No it doesnt. Because your story and style has a rounder, softer artstyle, more creatively coloured horses and mythical elements there will be a similarity for people who have seen the two of course, but again i cant see any direct clones from the MLP franchise ie cutiemarks so i think overall; youve created a unique and original species that has been inspired by real-life experiences as well as MLP generations through the years, which has the potential to stand out on its own amongst the other competitors. Good luck with your novels and artwork! i will be keeping an eye for any updates you bring! --Voseerie. /ps/ do you have any examples of written works? id love to see how you structure your work.

Hi ChamberCheck! First off id just like to mention that since im right handed; i flipped the canvas for a more comfortable drawing experience on my end. To give you a better visual of my critique i 'redlined' over you canvas and added a few notes in my messy scribble. Please note that these are just my opinions and dont reflect everyone elses here on this forum and feel free to ignore or accept my critique as you wish. Please also take note that m redlining is in my style and im not trying to say that my style has the correct anatomy as im still learning anatomy myself, but rather how i would place the limbs in my style and sketch phase. First of all id like to give you very high praise for such interesting characters and their designs. In my opinion, they have alot of thought and effort put into their creation down to the accessories they wear. Their faces and expressions are strong, and they show good form and structure. What i feel the drawing lacks is a better understanding of perspective and an understanding of the MLP styled anatomy mostly in the leg placement and joints. Legs in mlp is something i still struggle with too as they are more flexible than a horses joints would be in real life but keeping the basic proportions with just some pose or style tweaks can keep your ponies looking more anatomically correct. As for perspective; i personally feel as though Ambrys pose is in two different perspectives as seen in the top left hand side of my redline. Other than those two points nothing else stands out to me as an error in my brain. As i dont know anything about guns or weapons in general im afraid i cant comment on their design. Hope to see more drawings from you, these 2 have a very interesting story that id like to see continued <3 -Voseerie

Hi Frosty Flames; Im a bit confused as to what you are requesting, Did you want your OC to be drawn in our differing styles? Or were you wanting a show-style accurate drawing?

Hey no prob! I just really dug his design. Im not a big fan of neon and tend to prefer duller and more neutral tones on my ponies <3

Pets!! For all us animal lovers; pets are an awesome addition that we dont see often!

Hey these look awesome! Also im really liking your style, You definitely draw ponies with more of a solid build yet nothing to harsh to the eye, your lines are soft and round which is super hard to come buy in my opinion, very unique and original! Added you to my watch, Hope to see more from you! -Voseerie I also did a warm up sketch of SC before an OC designing session; Thanks for the Inspiration!

Super Cool I just read your story i didnt see it before As for shipping, i guess that really depends on how both ponies progress in their relationship. I tend not to ship ponies when they first meet as you dont really now much about either or what each other feel; But after a little conversation and time together any kind of ship can be possible whether its strictly friendly or has romance sprinkled through! So not at the moment as both havent had much time together aside from what you have written, but in the future i could definitely be swayed. Pinkie pie as we all know is super excitable and full of cheer and.... well...... life (no pun intended) and D.J seems to be inquisitive and relatively happy, a nice change from the gloomy "HUrr Durr Im so dark and Evil" OCs that are made in deaths image so often. I think if you were to write more about the two and their progression together people may be more open to shipping the two together. It doesnt even have to be written, you could even show their story through artwork and music depending on your taste! If you do create anymore about the two definitely let me know, id like to learn more! Thanks for taking the time to reply to my messages! -Ta! --Voseerie

Even more interesting! So with his body; is it in segments or does he actually have flesh covering his bones? I did this awhile back and is what i mean in regards to his build. Sorry for all the questions but im quite curious

Interesting Oc design! But im a lil lost; Is he Bone coloured or is his design meant to portray a skeleton? How does pinkie pie fit into his story?

I hug my friends in greeting and goodbyes but i try not to smother them with cuddles

Thats not a problem at all liquid; all things relating to your character including issues and changes will be run by you first. Thank you for your lovely character! Please PM me all viable links to include in the desc to your profile(s) and your preferred method of chat.Youll also be notified of update dates and any changes regarding your character(s) where applicableincluding draft pages featuring said character(s).If you would not like to be notified please PM me and i will remove you from my list.Thank you for your kind participation! -Voseerie

Ahh i understand now, they yes having Techno would be an interesting addition. Please PM me all viable links to include in the desc and your preferred method of chat. Youll also be notified of update dates and any changes regarding your character(s) where applicable including draft pages featuring said character(s). If you would not like to be notified please PM me and i will remove you from my list. Thank you for your kind participation! -Voseerie

Hi shadowbeam, thank you for the move and the compliment! Hi Techno! First of all, thank you for replying to the thread! As for techno as a background character im a little unsure of having him as an interactable character due to his unique abilities and being an alicorn. Please note i having nothing against any race in MLP or otherwise such as alicorns, but for story purposes id like to keep as many loopholes and possible issues to the minimum, im already drawing a novel based on my own headcannons With alicorns having the unmesurable power alone, plots can quickly fall. However making surprise appearances sounds really interesting, with his abilities; can he project himself into/ onto inanimate objects while remaining sentient? Similar to twilights spell? Or perhaps into drawings and sigils that the ponies draw/ wear? Or would you prefer an alternative version of Techno to be included?

Thanks for getting back to me liquid! Snow perch is a beautiful character, very well thought out with a unique backstory! Id love to have him in the GNovel! Due to his personality already having strong key points that are already fitting; and his very original talent relating to magic, i think leaving him as a unicorn fits best. However, If youd like to see him as another race or species please let me know so i can make adjustments Below is a (incredibly messy i apologize) sketch of Snow Perch in my style to give you a better visual of my interpretation of his appearance. From left to right i have sketched out his original design in my style, and on the right him as a batpony. Part of my headcannons include that not all, but many batponies have a pattern down their spine and across their flanks. These patterns can include natural designs such as shown or geometric shapes as well. If there is anything youd like changed please let me know, i can change anything from eye shape to height if youd like. If you dont mind, please also include these topics; If any of these are yes, youll be informed of each suitor, child and topic for approval where applicable. Hope to hear from you again! -Voseerie Artwork below belongs to me, please do not reupload, or copy as your own work.