The Temporal Twins

In Net Soviet Russia, Fluttershy Scare You.

I made the Death pony in the Background... Did all the shading m'self. I also changed the script on the tombstone .

If you need a voice actor in the future, let me know I can't realy do any of the main character voices but I can do a variety of extras if needed As in guards, town folk, the creepy hobo down the ally

Don't lay a finger, on my FlutterFinger

I shall defeat the Daleks with a soothing melody ==================================================================== We are actually a split personality pony I'm Fotow Shopt (on the left) And this is my sister, Eye Build (on the right)

If she trusts me this much, I wonder if she would help me practice my kick boxing....

My dream is to be Pikachu

I'm SEXY and i know it!!!

I will never forget this moment...

Angel helped me borrow it...

Hush my little Fluttershy, I'll protect you from Pinky Pie... And if she tries to bother you, I'll cook her into my next stew... ======================================== Adapted from ; Hush little baby, don't you cry... Just so you know the rhythm it should be read at.

Thanks again for your input I hope to hear from you some more as time goes on I think I'll take you up on your offer and take a look

I'm sorry to hear that, but believe it or not, i don't really have a point when i write these... I just write whatever i feel in my heart and curve it around the flow of the piece. On the subject of rhyming, i find that rhyming poetry tends to have a stronger impact on those who read or hear it. I'm sorry if you don't agree but that is the way i see it, and what i believe. **Hugs you** There is your "I'm sorry hug" **Hugs you again** And there is your "Friend Hug"

Glad you liked them... I'm surprised that I got them so good on my first try. These are actually the first poems I've ever written by myself. Now, i know this post is straying from the usual format of my posts in that I'm saying I instead of We, but this post is specifically from me, the younger of the twins. me and my sister usually post together and so we write "we" But, in this occasion, it would happen that this is only from me...

We made this topic as a single Repository for all you poets out there and for all of you who are, like me, trying to better your art form. Please try to post what your inspirations or concerns are or where for your poem. We'll go first... _____________________________________________________________ We came up with this poem as a youtube post for this video While we listened to this song, we were inspired to write this poem and here it is... Whether Derpy Hooves or Ditzy Doo, every step brings something new... You bubbly mare of the pegasi, how we love to see you fly... Flying, flying ever so high, letting your wing tips graze the sky... And from the ground, we watch you soar, our hearts yearning to join you, evermore... But from the kindness, of your heart, from the sky, you then part... And as your hooves touch the ground, our hearts, once again, feel safe and sound. _____________________________________________________________ This poem was also a Youtube post, but for this video It wasn't as much the video that brought along this poem, as it was the bronies who calmly repelled all the hate posts that surfaced until all the haters had left. They were the ones who inspired this poem. Haters will hate, Lovers will love... Bronies united, fit like a glove... For the Knight of good, to fight his fight... To make the haters, all take flight... On their wings of rage, away they flee... Never looking, at you or me... On our wings of love, so high we'll fly... We'll look down at them, from the sky... And as they hang their heads, ever so low... We'll show them the love, that all bronies know... We'll show them the path, to find their mark... And watch as their friendship, makes "The Spark"... ============================================================================ Constructive criticism is always welcome If we don't know what we did wrong, we can't fix it So please help us out but letting us know what you think of our poetry

Hey We just started here and we're doing poetry!!! Not sure if thats what your looking for but if you want to take a look, our topic is here... http://mlpforums.com/topic/36644-poetry-of-equestria/

We love this poem Don't say that I used to think that my sister had the creative head on her shoulders and that I could never be an artist But then I started coming up with these great poems. You never know, Sometimes you just need the right kind of encouragement it may be a song, or a video, or a picture, but when you find that special key, it will unlock the depths of your imagination...

We liked the idea behind this poem, and the work itself. But personally, we would have shortened the third verse, second line a bit. Also, We may have changed "admiration" with "affection" We find that it may have flowed a bit better that way