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  • Dawn Fukamoto


    Drago Ryder

    • Age: 20

      Gender: Female

      Species: Alicorn

      Cutie Mark: <p> Dawn's cutie mark is a frozen flower, representing her connection to nature through Baz and her ability to control ice with her magic. </p>

      Personality: <p> There are many ways to describe Dawn. She is witty around her friends and genuinely cares for those in need. She is also smart in terms of intellect, but she can be a bit naïve at times. Those who know her well enough could say that she seemed to be curious about the world around her, but also shy around those who she doesn't know. </p>

      Backstory: <p> Dawn was born in the city of Canterlot to a pegesus guard named Algard and a unicorn storekeeper named Bertha. The two raised Dawn as any parent would and sent her to school at the age of six. During this time, she learned to harness her magic and nearly everything else fillies and foals would learn at her age. She would always be seen wearing a cloak when she wasn't in school. After a year of living in Canterlot after graduating school,the mare decided to move to Ponyville to see how town life would treat her. She never really did like the rush of the big city. She bought a moderately sized, two-story house with a study, three bedrooms, two and half bathrooms, and pretty much anything else a house might have. At the age of twenty,Dawn was outside looking at the night sky when a aurora lit up the darkness. She didn't know why, but she was drawn to it's light and followed the trail towards a nearby forest. She didn't know how far she had gone before she had found decrepit ruins that seemed to be letting the light out into the air. She soon found the entrance to the ruins and was amazed by what she saw. Intricate stone carvings covered the walls of the main room and saw that on the center pedestal laid two sets of four bracers. Seemingly drawn to the purple and green gems, she put each of them on her legs and was driven into her what looked like a representation of her mind. There, she met Baz, a aura beast that had been trying to find her friends but had instead found something completely different. Baz told Dawn that she along with her friends roamed the land long before Celestia but her kind had either been hunted to extinction or had been sealed away from the world by a mage that they had come to call a friend. Dawn then gave Baz the offer of staying in her mind and the aura beast accepted. A bright light then temporarily blinded Dawn and when she returned to her body, a pair of wings had grown and she had also gained a bit of height.The mare soon found out that having Baz in her mind gave her control over a energy surrounding all living beings called an aura. She still lives in Ponyville and always wears a cloak to hide her wings. </p>

    Dawn Fukamoto
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    I want to say I like the design of the character and the backstory but one thing is bothering me, well two really:

    Firstly, why an Alicorn, are you secretly M.A. Larson? Seriously though, no offence but Alicorn OCs just don't work well you would need a much stronger backstory than that for it.

    Secondly relating to the Alicorn point, Alicorns are princesses going by what the show tells us, and also from what the show tells us there are only 4 alicorns, Celestia, Luna, Underdeveloped useless pony Er I mean Cadence and Twilight, so even with a detailed backstory Alicorns just don't make ANY sense, sorry to say this but I just can't like an alicorn OC as much as any other type because they are rarely developed to a point where they make sense as an Alicorn.

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    I want to say I like the design of the character and the backstory but one thing is bothering me, well two really:

    Firstly, why an Alicorn, are you secretly M.A. Larson? Seriously though, no offence but Alicorn OCs just don't work well you would need a much stronger backstory than that for it.

    Secondly relating to the Alicorn point, Alicorns are princesses going by what the show tells us, and also from what the show tells us there are only 4 alicorns, Celestia, Luna, Underdeveloped useless pony Er I mean Cadence and Twilight, so even with a detailed backstory Alicorns just don't make ANY sense, sorry to say this but I just can't like an alicorn OC as much as any other type because they are rarely developed to a point where they make sense as an Alicorn.

    Funny thing you'll learn about me is that when something I like comes under scrutiny, I'll defend it vehemently.

     

    1.If I can rp with her, which I have, I really don't care that her backstory isn't 'strong enough' to justify her being an alicorn. She isn't overpowered in the slightest and even if she was, she still has weaknesses and flaws.

     

    2.This isn't an equestrian empire oc, so show logic doesn't have any effect. If it did, I wouldn't be able to use most of my characters or RP with some of the people I have.As for the whole alicorn =royalty bit, I only have one thing to say to that. Genetics. Heck, she was born to a Pegasus and unicirn, so I could've made her an alicorn from the moment she came into the world, but nnooooooo. I waited until she explored some ruins in the bloody ever free forest to turn her into what she is now.

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