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      • Age: 23

      Gender: Male

      Species: Earth Pony

      Cutie Mark: Glasses and a clown nose. He makes people laugh

      Personality: Sarcastic, witty, bit of a snark, can even sometimes break the fourth wall. Think of him like a less crazy, more cynical Pinkie

      Backstory: Deadpan grew up in Manehattan, and thanks to a spell one of his friends used on him can now visit his girlfriend up in Cloudsdale. But since he was raised in Manehattan, he grew into a snarky cynic. He decided to try his luck at being a stand up comedian during open mic night at a comedy club, and he pretty much blew up overnight. He was a huge success. He even does movies now.

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    Widdershins

      Uhh... don't know if being a cynical critic moviestar entirely mixes well with being a goof that likes making people laugh. Sure, most of the YouTube critics play that, but its a character they do to make it seem as if they're openly hateful of alot of things.

      The antlers seem to be a random addition if your not just listing off the props he uses for his routine.

     Just...instant success and now he does movies? Could use a bit more story, but he's not bad by any stretch.

     .....just noticed. Doesn't his name completely contradict his personality, job, and everything about him? Being deadpan IS a part of humor, sure, but by itself is sort of an antithesis to humor.

      Also...kinda think his girlfriend would make their relationship easier by coming to him instead of forcing him to get someone to cast a spell on him & pay travel costs each time he wants to see her...juuust sayin'..

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    On ‎11‎/‎30‎/‎2016 at 6:37 PM, Widdershins said:

      Uhh... don't know if being a cynical critic moviestar entirely mixes well with being a goof that likes making people laugh. Sure, most of the YouTube critics play that, but its a character they do to make it seem as if they're openly hateful of alot of things.

      The antlers seem to be a random addition if your not just listing off the props he uses for his routine.

     Just...instant success and now he does movies? Could use a bit more story, but he's not bad by any stretch.

     .....just noticed. Doesn't his name completely contradict his personality, job, and everything about him? Being deadpan IS a part of humor, sure, but by itself is sort of an antithesis to humor.

      Also...kinda think his girlfriend would make their relationship easier by coming to him instead of forcing him to get someone to cast a spell on him & pay travel costs each time he wants to see her...juuust sayin'..

    Right. Well, all of those are valid criticisms. I was thinking  about somewhat re-working his profile anyway, thanks for the criticism! Although I had no control over the appearance on the picture, as someone made it for me and they stuck it there without my knowledge until they showed me the finished project. Same thing with the Cloudsdale background, it was too late to either change the background or change him into a Pegasus, so I had to rack my brains for an explanation as to how he ended up there.

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