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  • Mistress Emberhearts


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    • Age: 25

      Gender: Female

      Species: Non-Pony

      Appearance: Vampony/Batpony

      Personality: Her personality is brave and friendly; the reason she is brave is because she lost her parents at the age of 13.

      Backstory: Mistress Emberhearts once lived in a fancy, quiet, overrated city which she thinks was called Manehattan. Later in her life a few years later, after losing her parents and living in the fancy city's Alder Orphanage, she ran away, ran from the city to a place named The Ruby Kingdom. It was a grand place, far from the dark streets of the other places she had passed through during her life. The Ruby Kingdom is ruled by a pony, a mare named Ruby Blaze. In this kingdom, Frost managed to find apprenticeship as a Carpenter and stayed working for the pony that employed her, until she was of age to join The Royal Guards Millitary Tangent. She signed as a scout and took work in her field very seriously. Soon, she was quickly climbing up the ranks, and several years passed in this time, until she had finally reached the grand rank of Commander In Chief. Later on, the prince of the vampony/batpony snappy her neck and bit into it, transforming her into a vatpony/batpony herself.

    Mistress Emberhearts

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      Well, no offense, but this is a whole lot of "What?!"

      I think, mostly because the language is a little bit off & you seem to gloss over a few details that seem important that might be more interesting with some more story behind it.

    I don't get why she's a vampire. "the prince of the vampony/batpony snappy her neck and bit into it"

      Uhh, still kinda lost there. Vampires & batponies are different species right?

     She fought in a war? What's this Sapphire Kingdom? She had kids? Was there a husband involved there?

    Could maybe use some more story if you've got the time.

     Fluffin' adorable pic though! Some wonderful design & one of the few right ways to work mane stripes Imo!

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