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  • War


    PonyOfWar

    • Age: 17, physically 28

      Gender: Male

      Species: Pegasus

      Appearance: <p> Mane: Front is parted to the right splitting into three loose laying pieces. Mane is rather long flowing down his neck and hangs long enough to reach his shoulder. Tips of bangs are red that slowly turns into a gray just before getting to the top of his head and then it turns black. The rest of his mane starts out black and half way down turns back to gray then back to red at the end.<br /><br /> Tail: Long enough to slightly hang over the ground when he walks, its tip splits into three stray pieces. Like his mane the tail starts out pitch black then turns gray in the middle and red for the end half. This colorization gives both his mane and tail the resemblance of wood on fire. When he is angry the tips of both will light on fire and this includes his hooves.<br /><br /> Body: He has a large stature and is muscular and toned for a Pegasus due to his training regime his size rivaling that of a large earth pony. Though he is a Pegasus he was created with Alicorn sized wings so that he would be able to lift himself off the ground even in heavy armor. His fur coat is mostly a dark red but has black stockings and a black tipped muzzle. His wings turn gray at his primary convert feathers and then black at his primaries and secondary’s. </p>

      Cutie Mark: <p> Cutie Mark: His cutie mark is a gray shield with twin swords crossing in front of it. His talent is combat making him skilled in most weaponry and if not familiar with a weapon can pick up skill quickly. This also includes none weapon based fighting styles like martial arts or any hoof to hoof combat. </p>

      Personality: <p> Personality: War is a leader he has been trained since his creation years ago in the art of discipline and it’s something he tries to develop in others, seeing potential in every pony even if they don’t see it in themselves. War is very caring to his brothers always having what they might need on his person and is ever ready to put himself between them and danger. He often thinks or speaks of his family and relates traits in other ponies to them. When shown proper respect for him and his family he is a very kind, tolerate and patient pony. He is extremely polite and usually uses formal titles or full names even if asked to do otherwise. He is very passionate about learning and bettering himself, loving to train in new skills whenever possible and continuing to better himself in skills he already possesses. War tends to be very bossy and tough on his brothers. He is very calm and not quiet to anger and has a bit of a hero complex that causes him to jump in on trouble and try to give aid. He enjoys learning from others of higher skill in something he wants to learn but equally loves to teach others. He can be extremely hard-headed believing his way is the right way and will be stubborn until proven otherwise. Due to his sheltered life he is very naive about the world and because of this can be easily manipulated. He has a tendency to hold more responsibilities then he can handle leaving him under severe stress which can have an effect on his healing abilities.<br /> (More to be added as he develops) </p>

      Backstory: <p> Backstory: basically he and his brothers were made in a lab. I don't want to say too much about his backstory because I'm writing a fanfic about them (him and his brothers) while I don't want to say much here he will be willing to share his story with others in RP. If interested though the first chapter of the fanfic is up. Skim it if you wish for some details: <a href="http://www.fimfiction.net/story/323432/elements-of-chaos-liberation" rel="external nofollow">http://www.fimfiction.net/story/323432/elements-of-chaos-liberation</a> </p>

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    Nnnnnh! That's some gooood description there!

    Can really tell you put some genuine love & care into this!

    Man! Now THAT'S how you do a healing factor superpower! It still bloody well hurts getting your flesh sliced, even if it seals up after!

    Heck, can only imagine the trouble caused if it heals shut around something still in him!

    Still against the gradient though....I know its irritating I keep bringing that back up, but still. Can't help but wonder if being solid red would be any less or more eye-catching, hmm...

    Don't like that he can just automatically learn any weapon he picks up. Sure there's some guy out there who's made it his lifeswork to train weaponry & can say that a mace & a sword or even a sword/shield combo are just worlds apart.

    Think its just me, but I can't help but giggle at "hoof-to-hoof combat" I'm sure somepony is gettin' killed, but it still sounds adorable to me! Heehee!

    Hmm...think it is...Yeah! He's got a mane mullet! Gonna call you WarMullet from now on!

    Give him a nine outta ten!...Wait, don't think i've ever given anyone less...AdorableWarmonger is adorable!

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    On 11/14/2016 at 10:25 PM, Widdershins said:

    Nnnnnh! That's some gooood description there!

    Can really tell you put some genuine love & care into this!

    Man! Now THAT'S how you do a healing factor superpower! It still bloody well hurts getting your flesh sliced, even if it seals up after!

    Heck, can only imagine the trouble caused if it heals shut around something still in him!

    Still against the gradient though....I know its irritating I keep bringing that back up, but still. Can't help but wonder if being solid red would be any less or more eye-catching, hmm...

    Don't like that he can just automatically learn any weapon he picks up. Sure there's some guy out there who's made it his lifeswork to train weaponry & can say that a mace & a sword or even a sword/shield combo are just worlds apart.

    Think its just me, but I can't help but giggle at "hoof-to-hoof combat" I'm sure somepony is gettin' killed, but it still sounds adorable to me! Heehee!

    Hmm...think it is...Yeah! He's got a mane mullet! Gonna call you WarMullet from now on!

    Give him a nine outta ten!...Wait, don't think i've ever given anyone less...AdorableWarmonger is adorable!

    You know you posted this forever ago and I never came back to my OCs profile to see if anyone ever commented. I kinda assumed he would never be viewed with how many people post their OCs here. So even though it's been ages I will respond!

    Gradient is just conflicting tastes I guess x) but glad you agree with the healing abilities. I think it takes some real thought to do healing correctly, a lot of people make it to over powered. I really wanted to make sure it didn't make him unbeatable, just tough. 

    Well I got the combat idea from doing research on war, or powers associated with the apocalyptic horseman. One was mastery over weapons, he felt more appropriate then just sword mastery or something. We were having trouble with finding an ability it talent that caused War so rather I just made him really good at it.

     

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    13 minutes ago, PonyOfWar said:

    You know you posted this forever ago and I never came back to my OCs profile to see if anyone ever commented. I kinda assumed he would never be viewed with how many people post their OCs here. So even though it's been ages I will respond!

    Yeah, I know. Still think it doesn't let you know if you get comments over here. With as many as I've put out, I still don't have any so I suppose I'm one of few who takes the time to read through the character lists for fun!

     The gradient is kind of warranted after all. You did bring up why you wanted it that way, and he is a magical being anyway.

     ...Is it just me or has the pic gotten bigger?

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    7 minutes ago, Widdershins said:

    Yeah, I know. Still think it doesn't let you know if you get comments over here. With as many as I've put out, I still don't have any so I suppose I'm one of few who takes the time to read through the character lists for fun!

     The gradient is kind of warranted after all. You did bring up why you wanted it that way, and he is a magical being anyway.

     ...Is it just me or has the pic gotten bigger?

    The pic seems to have grown with the site change. I certainly didn't enlarge or change it.

    Edit: I snoop on people's OCs as well, I just never comment 

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