SAmaster 5 June 12, 2014 Share June 12, 2014 Hello, I'm relatively new here. I came here cause I was hoping for some help on a story I've been working on. I went to the Roosterteeth Forums, didn't get much help, so I'm hoping to get it here. As suggested in the title, I'm working on a RWBY/MLP crossover, and I've been hoping to find someone to bounce ideas off of. If there is anyone here who doesn't know what RWBY is, I suggest you go here, you need to watch it. http://roosterteeth.com/archive/?id=6052&v=more Anyway, what I want to do is transpose the characters and world of MLP with the awesomeness and badassary of RWBY. I imagine the characters are human versions of themselves, focusing on the Mane Cast and the surrounding characters, they all meet in Ponyville, which is a much grander place than in the show, where they attend the local academy of adventure, taught by Headmistress Celestia, learning how to be Badass, fighting Monsters, and learning the Power of Friendship. I expect the plot to loosely follow the main plot, just with more fighting and action, and the villains lasting the seasons instead of just appearing in the beginnings and ends. Kinda like this-http://mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Nightmare-Moon-my-version-353560933 If you haven't seen this guys work you should. The characters lend themselves surprisingly well to the RWBYverse, they already have their own symbols, they have their own powers, I looked up some fan art for inspiration on the looks, though the weapons have taken some work. What I'm really looking for though is some discussion on some possible ideas, and for someone to take a look what I've written so far, which is the first chapter, which I'm reluctant to post until I have a better idea of what I'm doing. I'm more than willing to use the beta-reader on Fanfiction.net, or send a copy via email. Or, if there are enough people interested here, I might post it in this thread. I think I have all the immediate detail sorted out, the only issue I'm really struggling on for the moment is whether or not the characters should live at the dorms of the local academy of adventure, or in some version of where they live in the show, since I'm not sure which one would work best for character interaction. Anyway, any feedback would be appreciated. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SAmaster 5 June 14, 2014 Author Share June 14, 2014 Okay, since I've received no help here, I have just decided to post the first chapter of what I've written. https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10451075/1/PONY Here it is, if anyone sees this, please go there, tell me what you think, any criticisms would be appreciated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SAmaster 5 June 20, 2014 Author Share June 20, 2014 Well I have since posted the second chapter of my story. https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10451075/2/PONY Right now I'm trying to think of a good monster for the characters to fight. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SAmaster 5 June 28, 2014 Author Share June 28, 2014 I have posted the third chapter, the first chapter to have any action segments. https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10451075/3/PONY I've yet to get a single review of my story yet, so I'd very much appreciate it if someone could take a look and give me some feedback. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SAmaster 5 July 10, 2014 Author Share July 10, 2014 Have now posted the fourth chapter of my story here: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10451075/4/PONY I am happy to report I have now received two reviews for my story. Someone remarked I did really well with Celestia. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SAmaster 5 July 13, 2014 Author Share July 13, 2014 My fifth chapter is now out. https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10451075/5/PONY And I have since indeed doubled my review number. I am now at four. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SAmaster 5 July 27, 2014 Author Share July 27, 2014 I have now written a sixth chapter, and have also since moved my story to FIMfiction.net, where it's caught a lot more attention. http://www.fimfiction.net/story/203996/pony https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10451075/6/PONY Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SAmaster 5 August 24, 2014 Author Share August 24, 2014 I have now reached the seventh chapter of my crossover, in which we meet Gilda. http://www.fimfiction.net/story/203996/pony https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10451075/7/PONY Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SAmaster 5 September 9, 2014 Author Share September 9, 2014 The eight chapter, entitled the Visitor pt. 1 http://www.fimfiction.net/story/203996/8/pony/the-visitor-pt-1 https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10451075/8/PONY Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SAmaster 5 August 4, 2015 Author Share August 4, 2015 After months and months, the ninth chapter, the Visitor pt. 2 http://www.fimfiction.net/story/203996/9/pony/the-visitor-pt-2 https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10451075/9/PONY Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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