Would anyone be willing to assist a newbie writer get off the ground?

[Tail Weave 20]

Greetings

 

I'm a writer, although I am still very much learning how to write effectively within stories, I'm working on a particular piece to post on fimfiction within a few weeks, depending on life.

 

However, as I am very much in need of outside assistance, I was hoping that perhaps somebody would be willing to help me by proof-reading parts of my stories, or even offering advice.

 

 

Any assistance would be more than welcome.

[NonCreative 68]

@@Tail Weave, I'm currently trying my hand at writing but maybe I can give you advice?

[Sir Xarthas VI 470]

@@Tail Weave,

I'm free for any proof-reading whenever you're ready to send the story to me.
And when I'm done proof-reading, I can give advice on how to make the story better, if need be.

NOTE: I prefer to recieve stories on a document (.doc file), so I can edit grammar/punctuation errors and highlight the confusing bits in the story, like major plot twists that didn't quite write out well.
 

[BinaryPony 120]

@@Tail Weave,

I can help proof-read. I have an excellent grasp of the English language, my only weakness is the accursed Comma Splice.