Fourze Stallion 95 September 8, 2014 Author Share September 8, 2014 BTW, if anyone's interested in doing a choose your own adventure (or let the fans choose) in tumblr, I've got one just set up! Just go here: http://askgundampony.tumblr.com/ And no, its not about giant robot ponies... Although, that'd be pretty awesome lol. Follow me on Tumblr and join the Kamen Rider Club! http://fourze-pony.tumblr.com/ Want a commission from me for low costs? Click here! : http://mlpforums.com/topic/68616-fourze-stallion-commisison-thread/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KokuraiNoSenshi 3,463 September 8, 2014 Share September 8, 2014 Enjoy some Rarity Cheerleader! Oh, and a couple other things: Um... Links are broken again dude Thank you Pinkamena-Pills for resizing the original, and putting that little message at the end Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fourze Stallion 95 September 8, 2014 Author Share September 8, 2014 Um... Links are broken again dude -sighs- I don't know what's wrong with this. 1 Follow me on Tumblr and join the Kamen Rider Club! http://fourze-pony.tumblr.com/ Want a commission from me for low costs? Click here! : http://mlpforums.com/topic/68616-fourze-stallion-commisison-thread/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KokuraiNoSenshi 3,463 September 8, 2014 Share September 8, 2014 -sighs- I don't know what's wrong with this. No problem lol, you have to attachment everything right now, & not just for you. The entire forums are having this problem. By the way, beautiful work as usual 1 Thank you Pinkamena-Pills for resizing the original, and putting that little message at the end Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fourze Stallion 95 September 8, 2014 Author Share September 8, 2014 No problem lol, you have to attachment everything right now, & not just for you. The entire forums are having this problem. By the way, beautiful work as usual As usual, I appreciate the kind words. 1 Follow me on Tumblr and join the Kamen Rider Club! http://fourze-pony.tumblr.com/ Want a commission from me for low costs? Click here! : http://mlpforums.com/topic/68616-fourze-stallion-commisison-thread/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KokuraiNoSenshi 3,463 September 8, 2014 Share September 8, 2014 As usual, I appreciate the kind words. Oh hey, you should go post that Rarity in the FC, I'm sure they'd love it Thank you Pinkamena-Pills for resizing the original, and putting that little message at the end Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fourze Stallion 95 September 8, 2014 Author Share September 8, 2014 Oh hey, you should go post that Rarity in the FC, I'm sure they'd love it FC? You'll have to forgive me since I'm not all that good with acronyms. Follow me on Tumblr and join the Kamen Rider Club! http://fourze-pony.tumblr.com/ Want a commission from me for low costs? Click here! : http://mlpforums.com/topic/68616-fourze-stallion-commisison-thread/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KokuraiNoSenshi 3,463 September 8, 2014 Share September 8, 2014 FC? You'll have to forgive me since I'm not all that good with acronyms. Oh, my bad. Fan Club. I am sure the Rarity Fan Club would love it lol, sorry Thank you Pinkamena-Pills for resizing the original, and putting that little message at the end Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fourze Stallion 95 September 8, 2014 Author Share September 8, 2014 Ah, Oh, my bad. Fan Club. I am sure the Rarity Fan Club would love it lol, sorry Now I get it! lol I think I will. 1 Follow me on Tumblr and join the Kamen Rider Club! http://fourze-pony.tumblr.com/ Want a commission from me for low costs? Click here! : http://mlpforums.com/topic/68616-fourze-stallion-commisison-thread/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Christmasy Britty 2,553 September 8, 2014 Share September 8, 2014 Ah, Now I get it! lol I think I will. yeah we at the fanclub would definitely enjoy your work if you do a lot of rarity artwork signature by Pucksterv Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fourze Stallion 95 September 8, 2014 Author Share September 8, 2014 yeah we at the fanclub would definitely enjoy your work if you do a lot of rarity artwork Oddly enough, I actually do. Follow me on Tumblr and join the Kamen Rider Club! http://fourze-pony.tumblr.com/ Want a commission from me for low costs? Click here! : http://mlpforums.com/topic/68616-fourze-stallion-commisison-thread/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Christmasy Britty 2,553 September 8, 2014 Share September 8, 2014 Oddly enough, I actually do. is rarity your favorite of the mane six? signature by Pucksterv Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fourze Stallion 95 September 8, 2014 Author Share September 8, 2014 is rarity your favorite of the mane six? I find her to be the most developed character and one of the most entertaining. So yeah. Follow me on Tumblr and join the Kamen Rider Club! http://fourze-pony.tumblr.com/ Want a commission from me for low costs? Click here! : http://mlpforums.com/topic/68616-fourze-stallion-commisison-thread/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fourze Stallion 95 September 13, 2014 Author Share September 13, 2014 While I work on other stuff, tell me what you guys think of a couple OCs I made, please? Meet Jester 'Jesse' Nights and Rhythm Blues! I'm pretty sure you guys can tell who's who... Follow me on Tumblr and join the Kamen Rider Club! http://fourze-pony.tumblr.com/ Want a commission from me for low costs? Click here! : http://mlpforums.com/topic/68616-fourze-stallion-commisison-thread/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KokuraiNoSenshi 3,463 September 13, 2014 Share September 13, 2014 While I work on other stuff, tell me what you guys think of a couple OCs I made, please? Meet Jester 'Jesse' Nights and Rhythm Blues! I'm pretty sure you guys can tell who's who... They look good, but I would prefer a bit of backstory on them before giving a final verdict... Uh maybe make a new page about them or something? Or hell even sending a PM would work, just so that way I could give more background on them... However still love them, great looking ponies, 10/10 Thank you Pinkamena-Pills for resizing the original, and putting that little message at the end Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fourze Stallion 95 September 13, 2014 Author Share September 13, 2014 They look good, but I would prefer a bit of backstory on them before giving a final verdict... Uh maybe make a new page about them or something? Or hell even sending a PM would work, just so that way I could give more background on them... However still love them, great looking ponies, 10/10 I've got no issue telling you about them. I should point out that Blues' backstory is a little saddening though. Despite his cutie mark being that of a Harmonica, Blues is actually a railroad worker, having been one of the many stallions who once actually pulled the train. He would often play his harmonica when he was on break, and more often than not, he would try to become a professional blues player (however, despite how good he was, he never caught a break). When the coal engine was fully developed however, and literal horse power was no longer necessary to pull the trains, Blues got laid off from his job. Unfortunately, with that, Blues' behavior spiraled downwards, especially when he got addicted to a substance called Moondust, a hallucinogen. After a year or so, Blues' friends decided to help their friend, and he's currently in remission (hence the dark bags under his eyes). Jester 'Jesse' Nights - An old foalhood friend to Blues, this mare has three loves in life: Having fun, making ponies laugh and blue moon ice cream. She's a year or two younger than Blues, but they still grew up side by side, and she sees him as a sort of older brother. After Blues went to go work on the railroad, Jesse gained her cutie mark when she accidentally made a fool of herself in front of her other friends (maybe balancing that towering cake on her backside wasn't the wisest move on her part), and made them all laugh. However, she wasn't saddened at their laughter at her, she was just glad to make them laugh. "A laugh's a laugh, as long as a smile is on their face afterwards, that's all that matters!" Ever since then, Jesse's been a comedian, traveling around Equestria's comedy club circuit (or the EC3) performing her stand up, gag and improv routines, earning herself quite a reputation. However, when she learned about Blues' condition, she requested time off in order to help him. What ya think? Follow me on Tumblr and join the Kamen Rider Club! http://fourze-pony.tumblr.com/ Want a commission from me for low costs? Click here! : http://mlpforums.com/topic/68616-fourze-stallion-commisison-thread/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KokuraiNoSenshi 3,463 September 13, 2014 Share September 13, 2014 -snip- I like it, they are creative & they do sort of weave into what the original storyline has to offer. It gives world building weaved into a backstory which is really nice, & overall they seem to be really good in terms of what they can do. My only questions are what is on Jesse's legs & is this turning into some sort of full-fledged storyline, & my only real issue with anything is probably the cliche of dark colors + dark backstory = OC scenario, as that tends to be what happens a lot with OC's like this. However it really isn't that big of a deal, as I have always felt as long as you hit all the right points & make it interesting there is no reason you can't use cliches so this is a minor point I am picking on here mostly just to give you something to say "Maybe I can work on this more" for future endeavors, ok? Overall, good backstory, good designs (even if I don't know what is going on with the legs, are those like socks or something?), nice little interconnection with the 2 as well as world building on the bit about the trains I'd say... 9/10? I mean this one does have a lot more to grade besides awesome anime style, & really I haven't found too too much to complain on, hell it might even go back to 10/10 once you respond with the leg explanation (sorry it keeps coming up, it just somehow does) & overall I like where you took them. Good job ^^ Thank you Pinkamena-Pills for resizing the original, and putting that little message at the end Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fourze Stallion 95 September 13, 2014 Author Share September 13, 2014 I like it, they are creative & they do sort of weave into what the original storyline has to offer. It gives world building weaved into a backstory which is really nice, & overall they seem to be really good in terms of what they can do. My only questions are what is on Jesse's legs & is this turning into some sort of full-fledged storyline, & my only real issue with anything is probably the cliche of dark colors + dark backstory = OC scenario, as that tends to be what happens a lot with OC's like this. However it really isn't that big of a deal, as I have always felt as long as you hit all the right points & make it interesting there is no reason you can't use cliches so this is a minor point I am picking on here mostly just to give you something to say "Maybe I can work on this more" for future endeavors, ok? Overall, good backstory, good designs (even if I don't know what is going on with the legs, are those like socks or something?), nice little interconnection with the 2 as well as world building on the bit about the trains I'd say... 9/10? I mean this one does have a lot more to grade besides awesome anime style, & really I haven't found too too much to complain on, hell it might even go back to 10/10 once you respond with the leg explanation (sorry it keeps coming up, it just somehow does) & overall I like where you took them. Good job ^^ Well, with Jesse's legs, they're like AJ's boots, she mostly wears them just for the lulz and makes jokes off of them when she can (and before you ask, yes, those are cut out holes with her hooves on purpose, although the ones up top aren't made on purpose). As for a storyline, yes, these two are characters in a short story that I'm still in the preliminary works on (I'm considering making it a horror story to have it go with Halloween this year). There are other characters who I've written up, but haven't had the time to draw up yet, but soon I hope to have them up. Follow me on Tumblr and join the Kamen Rider Club! http://fourze-pony.tumblr.com/ Want a commission from me for low costs? Click here! : http://mlpforums.com/topic/68616-fourze-stallion-commisison-thread/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KokuraiNoSenshi 3,463 September 13, 2014 Share September 13, 2014 Well, with Jesse's legs, they're like AJ's boots, she mostly wears them just for the lulz and makes jokes off of them when she can (and before you ask, yes, those are cut out holes with her hooves on purpose, although the ones up top aren't made on purpose). As for a storyline, yes, these two are characters in a short story that I'm still in the preliminary works on (I'm considering making it a horror story to have it go with Halloween this year). There are other characters who I've written up, but haven't had the time to draw up yet, but soon I hope to have them up. Ah ok, that makes a lot more sense... Don't get the part about the lulz in them, but hey, to each their own amiright? As for the story, I would love to hear its progress, as I am making a story of my own but I am such a procrastinator it has sat on partway through chapter 2 for about a month, & started about 2 months ago love to hear stories others have made Well make sure to post them here so I can bask in the awesome art style, which I personally feel is a bit darker than most but overall is really impressive & I thoroughly enjoy Thank you Pinkamena-Pills for resizing the original, and putting that little message at the end Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fourze Stallion 95 September 13, 2014 Author Share September 13, 2014 Ah ok, that makes a lot more sense... Don't get the part about the lulz in them, but hey, to each their own amiright? As for the story, I would love to hear its progress, as I am making a story of my own but I am such a procrastinator it has sat on partway through chapter 2 for about a month, & started about 2 months ago love to hear stories others have made Well make sure to post them here so I can bask in the awesome art style, which I personally feel is a bit darker than most but overall is really impressive & I thoroughly enjoy Its like wearing sunglasses inside or a scarf when its warm out, they don't have a purpose other than just wanting to wear them. And for the story, well, like I said, I was hoping for a horror story, where the group (including Jesse and Blues) go up to an old Diamond Dog mansion that was given as a sign of peace between Diamond Dogs and Ponies. The mansion was turned into a private vacation home for ponies to rent out and was said to be the hone of a rather powerful Diamond dog alchemist. Buckshot, friend to both Blues and Jesse, happens to be a rather famous gambler and was able the rent the entire place for a week so that way they can keep Blues away from any outside influence and so he can't get any more Moondust. But when things keep happening to Blues - He sees diamond dog armor moving on its own, stuff in the mansion gets broken and etc, his friends think that he's just trying to get them to let him leave. There's more, but I don't wanna give too much away for the story since a horror story needs to have surprise in it. Follow me on Tumblr and join the Kamen Rider Club! http://fourze-pony.tumblr.com/ Want a commission from me for low costs? Click here! : http://mlpforums.com/topic/68616-fourze-stallion-commisison-thread/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KokuraiNoSenshi 3,463 September 13, 2014 Share September 13, 2014 Its like wearing sunglasses inside or a scarf when its warm out, they don't have a purpose other than just wanting to wear them. And for the story, well, like I said, I was hoping for a horror story, where the group (including Jesse and Blues) go up to an old Diamond Dog mansion that was given as a sign of peace between Diamond Dogs and Ponies. The mansion was turned into a private vacation home for ponies to rent out and was said to be the hone of a rather powerful Diamond dog alchemist. Buckshot, friend to both Blues and Jesse, happens to be a rather famous gambler and was able the rent the entire place for a week so that way they can keep Blues away from any outside influence and so he can't get any more Moondust. But when things keep happening to Blues - He sees diamond dog armor moving on its own, stuff in the mansion gets broken and etc, his friends think that he's just trying to get them to let him leave. There's more, but I don't wanna give too much away for the story since a horror story needs to have surprise in it. Ah ok, guess that makes sense lol. Never understood it personally, but hey, like I said; To each their own Well it sounds really fun so far, I guess I can wait for more... Just don't make me wait tooooo long ok? I want to hear moars! Thank you Pinkamena-Pills for resizing the original, and putting that little message at the end Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fourze Stallion 95 September 13, 2014 Author Share September 13, 2014 (edited) Ah ok, guess that makes sense lol. Never understood it personally, but hey, like I said; To each their own Well it sounds really fun so far, I guess I can wait for more... Just don't make me wait tooooo long ok? I want to hear moars! You got it, probably over the next week I'll post more information about the story, characters along with more artwork. Ah ok, guess that makes sense lol. Never understood it personally, but hey, like I said; To each their own Well it sounds really fun so far, I guess I can wait for more... Just don't make me wait tooooo long ok? I want to hear moars! Well, you don't have to wait, here's Buckshot's design. Edited September 13, 2014 by Fourze Stallion 1 Follow me on Tumblr and join the Kamen Rider Club! http://fourze-pony.tumblr.com/ Want a commission from me for low costs? Click here! : http://mlpforums.com/topic/68616-fourze-stallion-commisison-thread/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KokuraiNoSenshi 3,463 September 14, 2014 Share September 14, 2014 You got it, probably over the next week I'll post more information about the story, characters along with more artwork. Well, you don't have to wait, here's Buckshot's design. Terribly sorry about that, you sent that while I was at my LAN party last night & all I could do was brohoof it in response. I like the color scheme & the air about him that says he is someone who is used to being the center of attention. All very fun & entertaining. No creative score this time, sorry, just woke up lol 1 Thank you Pinkamena-Pills for resizing the original, and putting that little message at the end Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fourze Stallion 95 September 15, 2014 Author Share September 15, 2014 So, its my birthday today, but since I've been sick recently, I don't have a picture to commemorate that.. So, here's a pic of my newest tumblr blog, enjoy! (here's the blog itself if you guys wanna follow: http://askgundampony.tumblr.com/) 1 Follow me on Tumblr and join the Kamen Rider Club! http://fourze-pony.tumblr.com/ Want a commission from me for low costs? Click here! : http://mlpforums.com/topic/68616-fourze-stallion-commisison-thread/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Christmasy Britty 2,553 September 15, 2014 Share September 15, 2014 So, its my birthday today, but since I've been sick recently, I don't have a picture to commemorate that.. So, here's a pic of my newest tumblr blog, enjoy! (here's the blog itself if you guys wanna follow: http://askgundampony.tumblr.com/) I can't tell but is that supposed to be twilight? signature by Pucksterv Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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