visual art Comic Intro

[Eridani Storm 10]

So yeah, writing is hard to read.... CRITICISM WELCOME!!!

Panel 1. It all began...

Panel 2. HERE.

Panel 3. I was a young wolf with a taste for adventure...

Panel 4. ...And of course a companion (Gyria, how's the fire coming?)

Panel 5. She had the same adventurous spirit.

Panel 6. Gyria.

Panel 7. We set off traveling toward the Volcano.

Panel 8. Our journey had begun.

[Eridani Storm 10]

Bump, I need criticism! PLEASE!