Back Slash Backstory Revamped Sample from chapter 1 "The Nightmare Begins"

[Quintara HiveHagfish 243]

Far from Cloudsdale, in the hive, 

 

Chrysalis: COMMANDER VOID!

 

Void Crawler: *Void trotted up to his Queen and bowed* "Yes Queen?"

 

C: Take a squad, go to Cloudsdale, kill the Slashes, get out.

 

Void Crawler: "The Slashes? Target's will be murdered with force Queen..."

 

Void Crawler: "I will make sure there dead..."

 

C: See to it or else 

 

 Void Crawler: *Void nods* "Where are my Squad I am leading can I ask?"

 

C: Your choice, you are commander, take a squad of 10

 

Void Crawler: *Grins* "They will be my job to lead and they will do there job well or else I will kill them myself"

 

C: Bring me.........the sword that the Stallion wields. It is of great interest to me. *grin*

 

Void Crawler: "The sword? It shall be done then"

 

Back Slash: *Meanwhile in Cloudsdale*

 

Back Slash: The Slash house, on the outskirts of town, 2 story house 2 beds 2 baths, 

1 major pain in the flank......Slash, is in his room playing his Game Colt

 

Slash: AHHH COME ON! Almost.........got.......the........high......score.......*game crashes*

 

Slash: AHHHHHHHHH!!!! *throws game at wall*

 

*SMASH* the gamecolt breaks on the wall

 

Slash: MOTHER BUCKER!

 

Both Healing Slash and Double Slash hear a loud noise from upstairs

 

Double: *Sighs* "Should I go and check?"

 

Healing: *sigh* Yes dear, i have a feeling he broke his game again

 

Double: *Stands up* "Again, Yes, I have the same feeling, I wonder why..."

 

Slash: ARRGH PIECE OF BUCKING MANURE!

 

Healing: SLASHIE! DINNER!

 

Slash: IM NOT BUCKIN HUNGRY!

 

Healing: Dear, please go get him

 

Double: "I will now..."  *Goes upstairs to get Slash and knocks on his door* "Slash, dinner!"

 

The door opens

 

Slash: NO!

 

Slash tries to slam the door in Doubles face

 

There was a knock on the front door

 

Healing walks to the door and opens it

 

*Double puts his hoof in the way of the door* "Now! Slash!"

 

Healing: Hello?

 

Rising: Heya!    

 

Rising’s Mom: Hello Healing*Smiles*    

 

Rising’s Dad: *Nods, smiles*

 

Healing: Oh what a pleasant surprise come in!

 

Slash runs in between Doubles legs, downstairs and out the door

 

Slash glanced at rising as he passed

 

Healing: What the?

 

*Walking all in*

 

Rising’s Dad: Thanks *Smiles*

 

*Double comes down the stairs* "Did Slash just run out the door?"

 

Rising: Is he alright? *Confused*

 

Healing: Yes he did Dear, and I don’t know Rising, maybe you can see what’s wrong, he seem to think we don’t love him

 

Rising: How could he think that? *Looks sad*

 

Healing: He says it when he doesn't get his way

 

*Double nods in agreement*

 

Healing: He wont talk to us, but maybe you can

 

Rising: I dunno where he runned away

 

Healing: He should be in his favorite spot looking at the weather factory

 

Rising: Can I go? 

 

Dad: Be careful

 

*At his thinking spot on the edge of Cloudsdale Slash was talking to himself*

 

Slash: stupid parents, wish they would die, they don’t even love me…

 

Slash: stupid

 

Rising: *Running to the factory: Slashy?

 

Slashes ears perked up but he didn't say anything

 

Rising: Where are you? 

 

Slash: What do you care?

 

Slash: They sent you to bring me back huh?

 

Rising: Why did you run away?*Walks to him*

 

Slash: Why do you care?

 

Rising: I'm your friend.

 

*very low almost inaudible buzzing sounds from far away*

 

Slash: i haven't run away but i am about to

 

Rising: Why? They going to miss you *Looks sad*

Slash: No they wont

 

Slash: Nopony will

 

Rising: I would

 

Slash: words

 

Rising: True words.

 

Slash: no words are true, nothing is

 

Rising: They love you, Slashy

 

Slash: meaningless words

 

Rising: Please ...

 

Slash: no, nopony loves me, who would? *Ears perk up* wait...what’s that noise?

 

Rising: What noise? I hear ponies talking and us

 

Slash looks out and sees a dark mass in the sky about 2 miles out

 

Slash: Whats that?

 

Slash stood up and slowly backed away

 

Rising: *Looks, shivers* Big flies?

 

Chrysalis in Voids mind: Where are you now?

 

Void (Mind): Closing in on Cloudsdale now

 

C: Good......very good........Kill the Slashes and BRING ME THAT SWORD!

 

Void(Mind): It shall be done Queen...

 

Slash: W-w-w-why do i-i-i-i get the f-f-f-feeling those aren't big flys?

 

Healing: Honey?

 

Rising shivers and hides behind Slash

 

Double: "Yes dear?"

 

Healing: Do you hear that?

 

She walks outside

 

Rising’s Mom: What is wrong?

 

Healing: Oh sweet celestia

 

*Double follows outside and goes silent* "...."

 

Healing: We need to get ready Double

 

Rising’s Dad: *Confused*

 

Healing: You two hide in the basement! We will go get the children!

 

Rising’s Mom: Bring our Rising back, please! *Shivering, sobbing, follows Dad into the basement*

 

Healing runs inside and gets all her fighting gear

 

She grabs a saddlebag of medical supplies and a Bow and arrows

 

*Double grabs his two Katana's and sheathes them ready*

 

Healing kisses Double

 

Healing: I will watch your back my love

 

Double kisses Healing back and nods once "Okay Love"

 

Slash: R-r-r-r-rising?

 

Rising: *Shivering, sobbing*

 

Slash: *shivering, cant move*

 

Rising: *Shivering, crying*Moooom!

 

Healing: Lets go!

 

She runs out the door

 

Double nods and follows out the door running

 

Slash trips over Rising and lands on him

 

Rising: Owwww!

Rising is crying and shivering

 

*Void looks back at the squad behind him and grins* 

 

"Any of you fail me here I will kill you myself!"

 

Squad: SIR YES SIR!

 

Slash: S-s-s-s-sorry S-s-s-s-shiny

 

Rising: *Crying* Daadddyyy!

 

Healing: There they are!

 

Healing: Rising! Slash!

 

Slash: Mom? Dad?

 

Rising: *Crying, shivering* H-Huh?

 

Double: "You two alright?!"

 

Slash gets off of rising

 

Slash: Yeah.......for now

 

Rising: Where are my mom and dad?!*Shivering, sobbing*

 

Healing: In our basement, where you two should be! Go! Now!

 

Rising: *Nods, directly running back*

 

Slash follows Rising but goes to his room to watch instead

 

Rising: Where are you going, Slashy?

 

Slash: To my room to watch

 

Rising: You crazy?!

 

Slash: ummm yeah i am

 

Slash goes upstairs

 

He looks out the window

Healing draws her bow

 

Healing noks an arrow on the string

 

Double draws one of his Katana’s and has his hoof on the other

 

Healing Fires an arrow at the lead changeling

 

Rising: B-Be careful ...*Walks downstairs to the basement*

 

Void nods at his Squad and starts flying straight down towards Cloudsdale and avoids the arrow with a hiss

 

Healing has 100 arrows

 

Healing keeps firing at 1 arrow a second

 

Void just grins and keeps flying straight down avoiding the arrows as a few of his Squad are hit by some

 

Grunts: AGHHHH *die*

 

Void: "USELESS!"

 

Two of the Changeling Drones land next to Double and he Slashes at them both killing one and cutting the other with ease

 

Grunts: BLARGGG!!!

 

Void lands in front of them both with a grin as the remaining six Changelings are behind him. 

 

"I assume your both the Slashes correct?..."

 

Healing fires an arrow at the lead changelings head

 

Healing: NONE OF YOUR BUSNIS!

 

*Void grabs the arrow with Telekinesis* 

 

"Tut tut, all I did was ask a question..."

 

Healing: What do you want with us?!

 

She fires arrows at the rest of the changelings

 

Double is just staring at the lead Changeling

*Void smiles as he puts up a Magic Sheild to protect his squad* 

 

"Well one, you both have to die, unless you tell where a certain sword is..."

 

Healing: NO! You will not take the Masamune!

 

Void: "Ohhh that is it's name then? Do you really wanna die for a sword?..."

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