MechanicalDoom 300 January 18, 2015 Share January 18, 2015 (edited) This isn't technically my first pony drawing that I've ever made, but it's the first one that I've really tried on. In fact, this one little drawing took me a few hours to make. Tell me what's wrong with it, because I know there's a lot. XD Tell me what's good, too, because I feel like I did something right at least. I just realized that i forgot his bracelets. Oops. Edited January 19, 2015 by MechanicalDoom 7 My OC Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twisted Cyclone 🚓 6,261 January 18, 2015 Share January 18, 2015 Nice job for a first drawing! It's a lot better than how my first drawing was. 2 Country and Rock fan | Car fan (especially police cars) | Weather Pony | YouTube | Twitter | DeviantART Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MechanicalDoom 300 January 18, 2015 Author Share January 18, 2015 Nice job for a first drawing! It's a lot better than how my first drawing was. Thanks! It could have ended up a lot worse if I didn't take as long as I did. My OC Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Comrade Courage 653 January 18, 2015 Share January 18, 2015 this is great!! the body is spot on my only critics are the tail is a bit straight and the cutie mark could be clearer other than that its a great first drawing 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jonny Music 3,436 January 18, 2015 Share January 18, 2015 Nice job there! However, there is one thing that I outta point out. Is that OC meant to be a mare (female) or a stallion (male)? Because if it is a stallion, the muzzle shape is wrong (that's a mare muzzle if I'm right). The muzzle should be similar to my OC's muzzle (as well as the muzzles of other stallion ponies). I also noticed the wrong muzzle shape on your vectored OC (just so you know). My Profile LinkedIn Profile Main YouTube Channel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Iris_ 136 January 18, 2015 Share January 18, 2015 Well it looks like a pony, so that's good xP. I think the legs like a bit funky, they look too small at the top and middle, or maybe it is just because of how quickly they get large in the bottom. I would probably try to even it out a bit. They do get thicker at the bottom but I think it starts to get thicker right from the start and then ends up at its thickest, but here it looks like you kept them almost the same width all the way until the very last part were you made them thicker. I dunno just compare it to this http://fc00.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2012/164/1/4/profile_rainbow_dash_by_evilturnover-d53b6uk.png The wing looks a little bit too small as well, again compared to rainbow dash http://img2.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20130812174816/mlp/images/c/c3/Rainbow_Dash_ID_S3E7.png I would probably also move the tail up a bit so that it starts higher up on the butt. Maybe make it a bit more flowing too but maybe you wanted the tail to look straight like that. Hmm ok that was a lot of things I think you can fix. For good stuff, I like the general body shape and proportions, and he has a nice butt. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MechanicalDoom 300 January 18, 2015 Author Share January 18, 2015 Nice job there! However, there is one thing that I outta point out. Is that OC meant to be a mare (female) or a stallion (male)? Because if it is a stallion, the muzzle shape is wrong (that's a mare muzzle if I'm right). The muzzle should be similar to my OC's muzzle (as well as the muzzles of other stallion ponies).** I also noticed the wrong muzzle shape on your vectored OC (just so you know). My OC is a stallion with a mare muzzle. I know, confusing right? I just like the look of it more. 1 My OC Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
inactive09 61 January 18, 2015 Share January 18, 2015 hey nice job! you've made a great job on the anatomy! and I really dig your oc's design! also, cool cutie mark! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Iris_ 136 January 18, 2015 Share January 18, 2015 (edited) Nice job there! However, there is one thing that I outta point out. Is that OC meant to be a mare (female) or a stallion (male)? Because if it is a stallion, the muzzle shape is wrong (that's a mare muzzle if I'm right). The muzzle should be similar to my OC's muzzle (as well as the muzzles of other stallion ponies). I also noticed the wrong muzzle shape on your vectored OC (just so you know). I think he wants it to be that way, in his description about his OC he says that his OC has the normal female pony shape. And I think it looks fine as well. Usually people think that my female characters are male because of how I draw their muzzles, so I know how it feels. Edited January 18, 2015 by Iris_ 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MechanicalDoom 300 January 18, 2015 Author Share January 18, 2015 Well it looks like a pony, so that's good xP. I think the legs like a bit funky, they look too small at the top and middle, or maybe it is just because of how quickly they get large in the bottom. I would probably try to even it out a bit. They do get thicker at the bottom but I think it starts to get thicker right from the start and then ends up at its thickest, but here it looks like you kept them almost the same width all the way until the very last part were you made them thicker. I dunno just compare it to this http://fc00.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2012/164/1/4/profile_rainbow_dash_by_evilturnover-d53b6uk.png The wing looks a little bit too small as well, again compared to rainbow dash http://img2.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20130812174816/mlp/images/c/c3/Rainbow_Dash_ID_S3E7.png I would probably also move the tail up a bit so that it starts higher up on the butt. Maybe make it a bit more flowing too but maybe you wanted the tail to look straight like that. Hmm ok that was a lot of things I think you can fix. For good stuff, I like the general body shape and proportions, and he has a nice butt. I see what you mean with the legs, The tail definitely needs to be more flowy like his mane. Also, I agree with the wings being kinda small, and I did think he had the booty. It's kinda funny that the thing I was the most proud about was his butt. XD 1 My OC Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jonny Music 3,436 January 18, 2015 Share January 18, 2015 My OC is a stallion with a mare muzzle. I know, confusing right? I just like the look of it more. I think he wants it to be that way, in his description about his OC he says that his OC has the normal female pony shape. And I think it looks fine as well. Usually people think that my female characters are male because of how I draw their nuzzles, so I know how it feels. I'm just so used to easily identifying mares and stallions just by their muzzles alone. But I'm not the only one confused by the swapping. I did notice the eyes don't have eyelashes (with eyelashes = mare. without eyelashes = stallion). So that is another way to tell the difference (I think??). 1 My Profile LinkedIn Profile Main YouTube Channel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Iris_ 136 January 18, 2015 Share January 18, 2015 I see what you mean with the legs, The tail definitely needs to be more flowy like his mane. Also, I agree with the wings being kinda small, and I did think he had the booty. It's kinda funny that the thing I was the most proud about was his butt. XD Haha and rightfully so, that is a nice butt =p you probably hit that part the best. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MechanicalDoom 300 January 18, 2015 Author Share January 18, 2015 I'm just so used to easily identifying mares and stallions just by their muzzles alone. But I'm not the only one confused by the swapping. I did notice the eyes don't have eyelashes (with eyelashes = mare. without eyelashes = stallion). So that is another way to tell the difference (I think??). Yeah. Only mares have eyelashes. 1 My OC Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jonny Music 3,436 January 18, 2015 Share January 18, 2015 Yeah. Only mares have eyelashes. That's so true. So true indeed. 1 My Profile LinkedIn Profile Main YouTube Channel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RainbowTashie 378 January 19, 2015 Share January 19, 2015 This isn't technically my first pony drawing that I've ever made, but it's the first one that I've really tried on. In fact, this one little drawing took me a few hours to make. Tell me what's wrong with it, because I know there's a lot. XD Tell me what's good, too, because I feel like I did something right at least. I just realized that i forgot his bracelets. Oops. THE LEGS ARE AWESOME i hhhhaaaate pony legs with a PASSION! 1 Sig tweaked to perfection by Coby! My facebook page: https://www.facebook.com/pages/Bronies-Pegasisters-and-Pok%C3%A9mon-masters/901873019878238 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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