Equine Language(need help!)

[Tom Snyder 4,113]

So the first person who tried this kept having his com crash on him, resulting in the loss of the data he/she had. So i'm looking for someone who has a com that works properly and can do this exact thing for me.

What i want it to be about is the Prism Force:

 

Prism Force will be the name for the specific energy contained in the Elements, and when the bearers use them, their natural (or latent, in the case of earth ponies and pegasi) magic syncs up with the Prism Force, creating the transformation. However, anypony that uses it overloads themselves with the magic by using every Element and is able to utilize it for a short amount of time before the sheer amount of magical energy overloads their body.

The form varies depending on which species uses it:

- 1st is the Pegasi, their appearance will be the same as RD's, agility is increased 10x, but magic is not used.

- 2nd is Unicorns, their appearance will be the with just the horn itself, their magic is increased 10x, but they cannot fly.

- 3rd is Earth Ponies. they will neither have wings or horn, but their strength is increased 10x, they can neither fly or use magic.
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Side effects of the transformation:

 

The first form is easy to manage, but will still eat away at their magical energy as a calm rate. But sustaining the form will strain their body, but still be able to fight. The second form speeds up the process by putting immense strain and overloading the body, resulting  in the pony's eyesight fading, their breathing will become labored and then when the form's time limit ends, death will follow soon after. The pony in the form will return to their normal state, and be in critical condition and on death's door. No magic can save them from their fate, all anypony can do is watch as this pony's life fades away. 

 

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This is what the prism force is a power to help fight an opponent who may prove too strong and this is what must be used in that situation, the princesses know the danger and never let this power be known to the public.  But Star Shine finds out through her nightmares and tries to resurrect it from the ashes, even though she is oblivious to what this form can actually do, she still tries to bring it out.

 

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Sorry if i was vague on some details, but i'll work them out when i figure out more.

Edited January 19, 2015 by Candy Star