Nightfall 3,950 April 9, 2012 Share April 9, 2012 So I was thinking last night... I making a story at the current moment, and I have several ideas lined up for other stories. But hey, why not make a FanFic for MLP? The idea behind this story is my made-up character, Nightfall. He's a deep blue alicorn with a black mane. His age (at the time of the story) is 16, which just so happens to be the approximate age of the mane 6. His cutie mark has to do with a black circle-like cloud, but no one truly knows what it is, not even Nightfall himself! He travels around Equestria, dejected and looking for somepony to help him find out about his past. So, does anypony like it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Marcato 2,143 April 9, 2012 Share April 9, 2012 It sounds like an interesting idea! But i think it lacks certain plot points that could make it longer. So basically, he is looking for some one to help him understand the meaning of his mark. Is that the main idea? If so, there are many thing to help extend it, such as conflicts, extra characters to add to the story, and etc. If you wrote this into something a little more full length and it would be really neat! ~Relax and enJOY life. True joy is a BLESSING.~ ~Musician, poet, writer, and all-around storyteller~ Interests: Old literature, ancient history, MUSIC, fantasy, anime Best Pony: Tiaaaaaa! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Colon Leftbracket 971 April 9, 2012 Share April 9, 2012 Could be a good idea depending on how you go about it and how well you are at writing it. [New siggy in progress!] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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