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So a friend gave me a challenge to make a Alicorn oc, so I did! This is highly rough in making and mostly just a type of oc who could be used, redone or just left to wait to sit in my mind shelf. Question is what kind of Alicorn OC could I make, have limits and might be usable a bit ?

 

My answer: A lost known goddess/guiding Spirit a bit who still seeks to help out those who need her and gentle guide them or teach them.

 

Circe

Lost Goddess of Magic and Wisdom

Age: Unknown

Gender: Female

Cutie Mark: Witches Hat

Background: Taught the first ponies magic to all three races and also to other races. Also known to give insightful wisdom to those seeking insight to any and all, not just ponies. Even now her name has been lost to history, Circe still loves to help those in the matters of all kinds of magic and wisdom of it who seek such aid.

 

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So thats it, all I got on the flare of the moment. Any kind of feedback or etc to build on from loose background to colors/design is welcome.

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Interesting... Based off of the Greek goddess of magic... I'm just going to assume she isn't nearly as cruel.


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I think the color scheme could use a little tweaking- its a little too monotone. The mane and tail colors work. maybe playing with some gradients on the body? perhaps some yellowish accent colors? The cutie mark needs to pop more- right now it just blends in with the rest of the flank. As for the character traits/ description, it looks like a pretty good start. Would be interesting to flesh out why she was forgotten.


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I think the color scheme could use a little tweaking- its a little too monotone. The mane and tail colors work. maybe playing with some gradients on the body? perhaps some yellowish accent colors? The cutie mark needs to pop more- right now it just blends in with the rest of the flank. As for the character traits/ description, it looks like a pretty good start. Would be interesting to flesh out why she was forgotten.

Yah I thought of adding in lighter tones but no yellow :proud:  and yah,  I found a witches hat that stands out or I can just recolor it a bit or go with something else witch.     As to why,  I'll repost the change a bit and more history and thanks Blue!

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