My Pony OC (in development)

[Clockwork Cat 9]

Erm, yeah. What it says on the tin.

 

Name: Moonlight Blue

Race: Unicorn

Appearance: Royal blue with a long black mane and tail with pale blue streaks through them, pale blue eyes, black hooves, a silver hoop through one ear

Cutie mark: Four dark blue seven-pointed stars around a pale blue full moon

Personality: Mysterious, intelligent, enjoys the night, speaks in a formal manner.

Hobbies: potion making, magic

Backstory: After seemingly having her memory erased of all memories of her childhood, Moonlight Blue moved to Equestria, to try and restart her life, and retain control of her powers. She spent several years living in town, observing other unicorns from the shadows, teaching herself to control her powers, only roaming freely at night, where she is most comfortable. During her time there, she was occasionally spotted, and word spread of the mysterious entity in the shadows, however, nobody knew who she was. Also when she lived in town, she began to show an interest in potion making, and taught herself, after much trial and error. One of her failed potions is what turned her eyes from having black irises to pale blue ones. After around seven years of living in the centre of the town, she moved out into the heart of Everfree Forest, free to roam the night and perform spells and create new potions. However, if a pony wanders by, she will offer to help them in any way possible.

 

 

I will be doing some drawings of her, so stay tuned

 

Also, I need some help developing her further. Any tips?

[DwhitetheGamer 867]

I'll give you a tip on development of a cutie mark story.  Start slowly with how she got it, then work your way up on the story to her destiny, or what her cutie mark tells her.  As long as cast characters aren't in the mix, and it's descriptive, you'll be good.