Vampira Heart 920 January 4, 2016 Share January 4, 2016 I drew this and I was wondering if anypony could tell me what I could improve on it 2 Hello I am Vampira heart queen of all batponies! I love meeting all kinds of different ponies defiantly if your kind and looking for a friend I am someone you can talk to if you ever need to but I love making friends! so add me as your friend if you like! images Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kafooku 156 January 4, 2016 Share January 4, 2016 It looks really good! However, with the wing, I would move it lower and more on the side of the body. The head seems to be good, but it looks like he's missing part of his skull on the back of his neck. The mouth could also be moved up a little, unless that's how you want to place it. Additionally, the roots where the tail comes out seems really thing compared to the rest of the pony. I should also mention that his foreleg's shoulder seems a bit 'small' or oddly shaped. These are just my opinions, you definitely don't have to take them into account or change anything. Overall, just practice anatomy and look at examples because it looks like you're trying to go for the show's style? Good luck! Keep drawin'! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vampira Heart 920 January 4, 2016 Author Share January 4, 2016 Thanks for the advice how's this? 1 Hello I am Vampira heart queen of all batponies! I love meeting all kinds of different ponies defiantly if your kind and looking for a friend I am someone you can talk to if you ever need to but I love making friends! so add me as your friend if you like! images Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kafooku 156 January 5, 2016 Share January 5, 2016 Thanks for the advice how's this? image.jpeg Looks better! You'll be more awesome at art in no time. Just keep practicing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rainbowfast87 11 January 7, 2016 Share January 7, 2016 This looks AMAZING! Just a few little things, though. First, I think you need a little bit of work on your wings, mane, and tail. Other than this, your drawing is GREAT! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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