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Before Peeps could manage a word, Draw heard crashing in the direction Cloud went. "I'm going to go check that out." He said while running off into the next room. When he entered, he saw Cloud, Pencil, a blushing Twilight, and...

"Rainbow Dash? Wha-... Things just got more confusing, didn't they?" Draw asked to anypony who would answer.


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"Sorry about this, gals..." Draw said with a regretful tone as he took out his paper pad. He flipped it to the pencil-gray stone golem he drew the night (if you can call it that in space) before. Using his magic, the golem came off the page. It looked sturdy enough, having a stout torso and standing about two ponies tall. Following Draw's magical orders, it picked up the two Elements of Harmony in it's large, gorilla-like hands (firmly, but not too hard) and followed Draw out of the room.

 

Once Draw figured they were well enough away from Cloud and Pencil, he had the stone golem put the two ponies down and then reverted the golem back to paper. Draw had been concentrating on his spell so much, that he was surprised to find that he was back in the room he left Peeps in. He turned back around to see the two mares staring back at him. He braced for the inevitable anger that was likely to follow such a hasty and forceful removal of ponies.


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(Pencil's psyche was shattered before he even met Doc, it was just that Twilight was his last link to sanity. With that gone... Let's just say he's not going to be healthy...)


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The pandemonium was so sudden that Peeps became oddly catatonic for a time. She saw Toonz as if through frosted glass, almost sound-proof glass, that was spiraling away from her with the quickest slowness she had ever experienced. She got the vague idea that he was attempting to communicate with her but she could do nothing but stand and watch as she left the realm of conscious reality. Peeps began to feel faint and almost fell to the ground before shaking her head and trotting off toward the others to try and be of use.


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Pencil flinched when Clouds hoof pressed against his forehead. He clenched his facial muscles and tried to pull away from the mental lock.

"He has to die! I don't care about consequences!" Pencil angrily screamed

His attempts to break free kept getting weaker and weaker, a clear sign that the spell was in fact working


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The Doctor rushed to the control panel.

"Nevermind that, we need to get this plan on track quickly, no distractions, so we need to free him TWILIGHT SPARKLE, GET OVER HERE!"

The purple mare appeared in the room alongside the cyan pegasus.

"Twilight, quickly, I need you to create a tracking spell so we can find him."

Twilight looked confused.

"Find who?"

Surprisingly, Dash seemed to come to the realisation first. Her eyes widened, and she protested.

"Oh, no, you can't get him! He's a madpony! He nearly got us all killed last time!"

The Doctor nodded.

"Yea, all that is true, but he's also a genius. Besides, he's the only one who can open the backfire drive."

He pointed at the sphere of wires and lights, currently humming gently.

He picked a microphone from the console in the room, in order to communicate with the ponies at the main one.

"Listen up! Change of plans, we haven't got time for the radio tower. To pick up the princess and her groom we have to free somepony very important. Fortunately, I can drive the TARDIS from here. All set? Allons-y!"

He pointed twilight to a shiny button, wich she blasted with magic, causing the whole thing to shake abruptly as it set its destination in the vortex.

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Suddenly, Teilight appeared next to Pencil, causing him to flinch. She had a stern look on her face.

"You."

Doodle tried to speak, but the unicorn kicked him in the gut.

"You don't deserve my love. The Doctor is trying to save us all, and you're trying to prevent that. You're a horrible pony and I hope you die alone as you lived."

She kicked him again, and whispered in his ears before he fainted:

"Stay the hell away from me."

Once he was down, she approached Peeps, and turned back to Agoun.

"I'm... I'm sorry you had to witness that..."

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Draw sat there trying to piece everything together...

 

Before Rainbow Dash or Twilight could say a word, they teleported away in a purple flash, probably to the Doctor's position he guessed. "Well, okay then..." he said to himself, as he turned back to the red mare from earlier. "So now wha- Hey! where are you...?" He couldn't really finish talking because it appeared something possesed the mare to just up and leave the room without saying a word. That's when the Doctor's announcement came on:

 

"Listen up! Change of plans, we haven't got time for the radio tower. To pick up the princess and her groom we have to free somepony very important. Fortunately, I can drive the TARDIS from here. All set? Allons-y!"

 

 

This was followed by shaking.

 

...Which was still going on as Draw finally found an appropriate response to all of this.

Closing his eyes tightly in frustration, he threw his head up and shouted.

"WHAT THE HAY IS GOING ON?!"


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Cloud pushed the final piece in place. He immobilized him with his mind. Now...

 

"Listen up! Change of plans, we haven't got time for the radio tower. To pick up the princess and her groom we have to free somepony very important. Fortunately, I can drive the TARDIS from here. All set? Allons-y!"

 

The place started rumbling. the connection broken, stumbled backward, tripped over his blade, sending it flying, and it landed, blade side down...

directly on Cloud's right wing, cutting it off cleanly.

Cloud paled, and although he didn't show it,he was in extreme pain. He picked up his blade, cleaned off the blade, and walked off. The spell holding Pencil faded.

He sat down next to Draw, blade in one hand, wing on the other.

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Pencil woke up from his unconscious state. He began to curl into a ball in his pain, and he wiped his lips just to reveal that he was bleeding from to mouth. He had what felt like 3... no... 4 broken ribs, and a several cracked ones

He started to weakly crawl to a near by panel, still shaking in shock.

 

He hoisted himself up using his weak arms, and screamed into what he hoped was an intercom

"I NEED HELP, NOW!!"


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Draw looked down again to see Cloud come up to him... holding his wing.

"Oh, oh Celestia, I think... I'm going to be sick." Draw said, squinting. Just then, Pencil's voice shouted through a speaker.

"I NEED HELP, NOW!!"

 

Now Draw doesn't like to swear, but his earlier frustration combined with his panic caused him to lose his temper.

"S***, what the h*** did you guys DO in there?! Okay, I think that red mare went towards the room Pencil's in now. How she didn't see you, I'll never know. Oh man! What to do... *gasp* Twilight! She's the freakin' Element of Magic, she must know some medical spells! C'mon!"

Draw pulled Cloud into the elevator, being careful not to touch his sword, the dismembered wing, or where the wing had connected in any way. The machine made some noise, and then they teleported to the same room Twilight, Rainbow Dash, and the Doctor were in ((I assume this is the main control room)).

 

((Also, I hope I'm not taking too much control of you here, Sly. Got kinda freaked out by SUDDEN DISMEMBERMENT.))


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Ivy heard the cry’s of Pencil, she looked shocked and worried. She went flying towards the main panel. She started to push buttons, working out were Doodle was. She looked up at the screen that seems out of place.

 

“I’m coming Pencil” she said to her self. She started to fly towards were the TARDIS told her. She banged open the door. “Hello?” she asked. She stood beside him.

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Pencil began to shiver in annoyance.

He said, spitting up another dollop of blood from his mouth

"Break the bloody door down for all i care, this really hurts!"

 

He then began to talk in some kind of foreign language... it sounded like he was cursing


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Cloud teleported to Pencil's side, ignoring his own pain. He began complicated healing magic that, first off, knocked him into unconsciousness and healed all of his wounds from worst to least. However, the spell required flesh from the caster, and he had the perfect piece... the wing dissolved into dust and floated away. Black energy flowed from his hoof into Pencil. Pencil let out a sigh and fell unconsious, perfectly healed. Cloud then teleported back to his room before Ivy could break the door down.

 

Well then that's my story and I'm sticking to it.

 

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